Application Submission

[cheezyrox 0]

Out-Of-Character: Cheezyrox

Minecraft Account Name: Cheezyrox

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific/USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a 14 y/o boy in Jr. High. I follow rules quite well. I am loyal to admins and leaders. I don't usually break rules, but when I do, I may be mad at the time. I am on the computer all the time, people think I am addicted, but I don't think so.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Almost everyday, I'm on christmas break now. Maybe 2-3 hours a day during break. After break, maybe 1-2 hours a night.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: To act a role. Not be yourself totally, but partially

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is a term used in Role-Playing game that tells real life details. Not something recommended in Roleplaying. I do not know what powergaming is...

What do you expect this server will be like?: Fun with a good community and roleplaying

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I havn't played on many servers, but the ones I do play on, I never quit them.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I understand and agree to the rules.

How did you hear about us?: PotatoOrgy and the forums.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No, but I tried. It gave me an error. I clicked Vote 2.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: cheezyrox

In-Character: Jordan Raysdan

Character Name: Jordan Raysdan

What is your Race?: Male Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Jordan Raysdan is a tall, strong, young adventurer in his 20s. He fell in love back home, but then heard of her tragic death recently when the Orcs raided his home town. He is now on a quest to become a fully trained theif. Jordan Raysdan is great in stealth and looting. Since his love back home passed, he is depressed when thinking of her, but when not, he is lively and cannot wait to go on another adventure!

Your characters ambitions: He desires to be trained by the masters to become a greater theif than he is now. He also desire to find the source of life and discover a way to bring back his love.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

Jordan Raysdan would jump staight into combat teaming up with the elf. Jordan would find a way to pin the bandits, and talk them out of continuing

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

Very well, thank you. How about yourself?

*shop owner talks*

I am wondering, do you have an/any *item/s* in stock?

*shop owner replys*

Thank you sir. Have a good day!

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information: None.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application was...

You got some things right, but here are some you missed:

• You need to have a definition (in your own words) of powergaming.

• You need to have more detail in your biography.

• Also, there was no transition between your love dying and you becoming a thief. Why did you become a thief? Because of your wife? Because you wanted to (not a good reason)? Please fill in the blanks, while putting in more detail.

Fix the things I mentioned and you'll have a much better chance at being accepted. Please reapply after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Moved to Denied Forum