Application For Vcjr1996

[XelFury 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: vcjr1996

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: I'm 15 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -5:00GTM , United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well I can say that I'm a very interesting person since I don't think Many people are like me , when it comes to be a multi-technology interest meaning that I can do some part Programming, make art, etc.. Things only one groud those. I can also say tha I love MMOrpg's and mostly Games that have a system for servers were they RP like in this one.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can say about 20-40 Hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: What I know about Roleplay is that its taking character of a well known being , and trying to impersonate it as you would think they would have done it , or said it. My definistion is mostly what I said in the last sentence that, Is taking control of another character that you know well and impersonate that character like they them self would have done what ever you are doing.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.: MG in my own words mean taking Out of Character information and taking it as a shortcut to use it in In Character instead of finding out that information In Character via RPing.

What do you expect this server will be like?: Well, from the videos I've about this server I can only expect a good Rping Community that will welcome me with open hands.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I agree with the rules.

How did you hear about us?: From Minecraft Server Database Websites.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: No I still havent voted for the server yet, but I will in time.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: XelFury

In-Character:

Character Name: Xeluck Fury

What is your Race?: Human

Biography: Born on a distant land outside of the wolrd Aegis, travelling by ship, with his mother, father, and sister a huge storm marked the ending of them by accident when the ship collapsed under the shores of a small rocky beach. The only survivers were the captain, himself, and 3 other crew mates. As the sorrow of his lost , the captain took him as his own, raising him to be a 6'0" tall, Black haired well looking man. As he was a well trained hunter, and warrior from his adopted father, he left to wonder off and fallow his own path been as independent as he can be he took mercenary jobs across the land working for who ever need a quick job or someone that would pay enough gold to last for the month.

Your characters ambitions:

To achieve every goal that comes to his mind, what ever the consequences.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: My character would probably call them out asking them to leave before they face the consequences, if the bandits deny Xel would have drawn his migthy sword and cut there head off, with his fast agility and endurance. With athority his places them in a spike in front of the elf's cottage.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?: My character would Bow after saying "Ay'e my good peasent, would you wipe out a stack of Ale. My luck has grown and my purse Is full. Fill the cups of all the men in your Inn. Tonight we return to our homes Drunk!!"

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Other Information:

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[Coaster 2086]

Here's what's wrong with it:

1. For someone who lives in the United States and claims they have good control over the English Language, I saw a ridiculous amount of grammatical errors and problems with sentence structure. If you're going to apply here, I'd really like to see that you care enough to proof read.

2. Your definition of roleplaying was unclear and hard to understand.

3. Your definition of metagaming and powergaming included nothing about powergaming.

4. Your characters biography was not long enough, descriptive enough, and in general, hard to understand.

5. Your open question responses had no relation to your character, and if it did, your character bio doesn't tell me about your characters personality anyway.

6. Your characters skin does not match your characters biography.

Before reposting this, please go through CAREFULLY and with thought.

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[Coaster 2086]

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