Davethebraves Application

[DaveTheBrave 2]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: My name is David

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No, I did not attend Minecon, I wish I could have gone though. I will go next time to defiantly sign up at the Lord Of The Craft booth.

How old are you?: I am 16 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+0, London, mainlands.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, I have full capability of the English language, although I occasionally do make mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: When I get time I will normally be bmxing, although as I live in England going out side (most of the time) is not normally too cold or wet to go out :S. I love watching films such as Edward Scissor Hands and Lord of The Rings (The fellowship is my favorite.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I think I could spend 20 hours a week on this server, minimum.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: I had to read up on wiki to find out the actual definition, Role playing games (RPG), are where the players act out there own character in a fictional world, by literal acting in a narrative or making decisions that change the games feel, in a game such as "Mass Effect". There are different types of Role Playing, the one that I think that Lord of The Craft Uses is Live Action Role Play, where you physically perform your characters' actions.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming: Meta games take information from out side of the game and use these as factors to effect the game.

Powergaming: acting differently to what you are meant to gain extra items/experience that you wouldn't be able to do other wise.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A brilliant experience with great role play, also at the same time a new and unique environment, witch would be topped off by the great staff on the server, plus the rules that all the players follow.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on vindi craft, I left because it was getting a bit boring and there were admin abusers that were treating people unfairly. I have also played on vault craft, I left because the players were to immature. I left lost Craft as the world was ruined and they wouldn't even attempt to fix. I have played on many other servers but I left because of all the same reasons.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: With out a doubt, it would be a waste of my time and the admins time to allow a clueless members into the game who do not know the rules and will get banned because of there ill informed behaviour.

How did you hear about us?: One of my mates from school showed me an awesome youtube video through Reckreations youtube channel.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes,582.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Davethebrave.

In-Character:

Character Name: Brave Dave.

What is your Race?: Human Northerner.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Davethebrave is 6 Foot 3 broad male with dark brown hair and a black beard, he is well dressed and tries his best to fit in. He does not care what people say about his views and beliefs, He is Strong willed and a Determined individual and is will speak his mind and do what’s right where needed. Davethebrave is a 38 year old man who started off his career as a black smith in the city of Oren, when he started struggling with his business, because of a competitor who used cheap labour, Davethebrave decided to close his shop and leave the city. Brave Dave took him self on a long and lonesome journey, on one strangely cold night and all of a sudden there stood a shiny undead in the middle of the road and he said "fight me or I'll make you my slave!", so Dave stared into his eyes and said "...ok.." so Dave picked up the very first thing that came to hand and it just so happened to be, a enchanted iron sword that could smite any who stood in his way. He sliced at the undead's body, needless to say the beast was stunned. The demon then asked Dave "are you ascended" and Dave said "No!...I am but man!", Davethebrave smited the undead back to the depths of the nether. With triumph came great pride and courage, so he returned back to his birth place in Al-khazar and relocated to a better location and made thousands of minas in his new blacksmith business, now Dave is selling his wares to the elven race.

Your characters ambitions:

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Davethebrave dose not care for other peoples squabbles, and has more important thing on his mind.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? ”Ah, I didn't see you there, Hello” “I would like some hot food please” “How much will that cost?”,”very good, thank you good bye!”

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information: Please accept me as a part of the Lord Of The Craft community; I assure you I will be a helpful individual and put as much time and effort into playing on the server as I possibly can.

Thank you for reading.

Yours Sincerely Davethebrave

[Alurid 99]

I am truly sorry to inform you, but, your application has been denied. Here are the errors to be fixed in your revised application:

- Fix your grammar and spelling. There are a lot of runon sentences in your biography.

- In your biography, you keep flipping your character's name. (ie. Davethebrave, Brave Dave)

- Your biography doesn't explain much about your character. Your biography should explain main points from your character's birth, to the present.

- The enchanted sword that can "Smite anything" is considered powergaming. Try and reword it.

- The fact that your character randomly found an enchanted sword on the ground is unreistic.

- The 4 races of Aegis do not usually know locations of Nether portals. Try rewording your sentence.

- The skin your provided is very dark and inhumane. I think you should find a more human-like skin.

- And finally, put more effort into all of your answers.

Again, I am truly sorry your application did not get accepted. Please reapply in 48 hours!

[Alurid 99]

Moved to Denied Forum