Rockcar14S App With Fixed Bio

[rockcar14 3]

Out-Of-Character: my character is a rugged dwarf who is a blacksmith. and one of the finest blacksmiths of the dwarfs.

Minecraft Account Name: rockcar14

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: no i did not.

How old are you?: I am 14 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United states Time zone: eastern standard time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes i live in America.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: well i am a very nice person, I'm very funny and i love roleplaying.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: i can be on it a couple hours a day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: it means acting as someone your not, sometimes in a fantasy environment.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is when you use OOC info in chracter, powergaming is when you are acting unlike your character to get your way in a situation.

What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect it to be a lot of roleplaying and battling.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: only one server and it was warzoneminers. i left it because other factions destroyed out home.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i agree and accept the rules

How did you hear about us?: my friend jordan is part of the server and told me about it because he knows i love roleplaying.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? yes i ave voted and my vote number is 1,290

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: rockcar14

In-Character: today i had a customer come to the shop asking if i could repair his diamond sword. when i was done fixing it the customer had taken of his hood. the customer was the king of Kal'urugan

Character Name: Lekkoh

What is your Race?: dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): He was born in Kal'urugan and was raised in a small shack by his mother and father. his mother died when he was 9 years old. his father told his son that she was really dead and that she wont come back. one day his father asked his son to work in is shop as a blacksmith. his father was to old to mine so he sent his son to mine materials and to travel to regions to deliver tools. also don't forget lekkoh was constantly called to the king to carry out tasks. these tasks helped lekkoh and his father survive in the small shack they had to live in. He is 20 and his apperance is a rugged dwarf with a eye patch. His personality is very friendly and doesn't like to battle much. he very brave and is a generous man. His job is at a blacksmiths making tools and like his dad, he wants to get promoted. is dad was a rugged blacksmith who was a very grumpy man who did not like the public. the father died when the Dwarven Alrasian war started. after that lekkoh had to make a better living. one day he met a girl at his shop. this was is friend from when he was 4 years old. his friend lenneion wanted his hand in marriage. this girl was part of the rich people and lekkoh was forever cured of his low income and relying on his small income to survive

Your characters ambitions: He wants to get promoted at the blacksmiths shop.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? my character runs to a nearby village and gets warriors, and leads them to the bandits.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? may i have some food for a small price and a place to stay the night.

A screenshot of your skin: http://s1165.photobu...mydwarfskin.png

[Rhisereld 317]

Apologies for the wait, my power was cut just as I finished writing this.

Denied.

Expand your definition of roleplaying. Yours is very basic, you must show that you will be able to roleplay well if accepted to the server.

Your definition of powergaming is wrong. What you have described is called breaking character. You can find the definition of powergaming in applications that have already been accepted.

"Out of character" and "In character" are actually headings, not questions. Don't write anything after them. Do not delete the or or replace them with your answers, they actually complete the code that makes your application look nice. Just write your answers after them. You may need to copy the template from the pinned post and rewrite your answers to do this. Work on your spelling and punctuation.

Your biography seems like a jumble of events that doesn't really build your character. Explain why these things happened, how they happened, and how they affected your character.

Expand the answers to the open response questions. Give dialogue and much more detail. You must show that you can roleplay and avoid metagaming and powergaming.

The link to your skin isn't working.

Remember, you must wait 48 hours before reapplying.

[Rhisereld 317]

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