lugarthecougar 57 Share Posted January 11, 2012 Out-Of-Character: Minecraft Account Name: lugarthecougar Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No How old are you?: 20 Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST/America Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am lazy, but minecraft is the only thing that brings out my creativity. I'm also fun and outgoing so making new friends isn't an issue for me. How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Well I play for about 3 hours a day when I am taking classes, but during the summer I can play for up to 6 or 8 hours in a day What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Roleplaying is creating a new persona and using that persona to craft a story with others. And to have a good time. In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is when you use things that you know but your char doesn't and pwoergaming is when you RP and force anothe player to do an action What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it will be a large fun community that takes it RP seriously What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on Townar and that server ended and I played on The Kingdoms, but that server changed too much for me to stay around Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes How did you hear about us?: Through the official minecraft forums and friends on old servers Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes 1,325 What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lugarthecougar In-Character: Character Name: Eryndir Lithviel What is your Race?: Elf Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Eryndir comes from humble beginnings. He was born into a small band of nomadic elves that wandered from forest to forest living off the lands. He learned to hunt with them and he learned to defend himself due to many bandit attacks on his kin.When he was older, but still barely a young man by Elven standards, he left his kinsman in search of adventure and signed up to join a small pilgrimage to start a new town. After that venture fell through he joined a small mercenary band, but unfortunately for Erydnir that too fell through. After so many veiled ventures and already being the age of 145 Eryndir knew it was time to travel to new lands and heard tales of the land of Aegis. After paying off a few debts he left his lands for new adventures in a strange new world. Arriving with nothing but his old Captains uniform on his back Eryndir now searches for a purpose and a place to call his home. Your characters ambitions: Erydnir is looking to join a city or a guild, possibly in the position of diplomat, but if hunters are needed then Eryndir will gladly accept that position Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Eryndir quickly crouches and ducks behind a tree at the sight of the battle. He jsut arrived in these lands and has nothing on him but his bow and a couple of arrows, hardly enough to take out two bandits. But he couldn't bring himself to leave a fellow elf to their demise, so he knocked an arrow into his bow and let it fly at one of the bandits. It misses it's target but the next two arrows hit the bandits, but not mortally wounding them. With a shout he runs at the bandits swinging his bow as a weapon hoping to catch them by surprise and at least knock them out. As he closes in on the bandits he utters "May the gods watch over me".. Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? "Hail, friend" Eryndir says to the shopkeep "I was hoping you could help me, I am in need of arrows, an ax, and torches." A screenshot of your skin: Other Information: If you have any questions feel free to contact me Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Repiteo 173 Share Posted January 11, 2012 Denied I hate to do it because this was a very fine looking application... However, you made one fatal flaw. Aegis is technically the entirety of the ingame world as we know it, so you can't truly travel to Aegis if you were in it all along. It's a simple change and will likely be no trouble to fix with the clearly capable writing style you provide. ...That, and I'd like to see the second open response question to have much more depth to it. I'd like to see an actual thought process take place and interaction between the characters. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Repiteo 173 Share Posted January 11, 2012 Moved to Denied Forum Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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