Xredels Application

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Account name: xredel

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth: nope

Age: 14

Central standard time, America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar: I hope so I was born and raised in America. Not very good with punctuation though as in commas

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself :I’m laid back not extremely talkative and I won’t mess up anyone stuff unless I’m supposed. I don’t like it when people who did not kill me take my stuff when someone else kills me or I die of hunger or falling.

When can I be on: at least once a day unless I have to go somewhere with no internet

What I know about role playing: don’t bring real life into it unless you can implement it (Example: describing something), always stay in character and no third person cause it is annoying unless it someone else speaking about you to me role playing is getting into your character, the one you tailored to the way he/she is.

What do you expect the ever to be like: I think it will be great reasons: not everyone can be undead or enlightened witch I come to understand are the most power full of the races or at least when they start out, and the video was pretty neat too but mainly a server that actually stay to role playing no off topic stuff

Servers I have played and reason for leaving: city wars, medieval lords reason: greifers or there where when I played.

Have you read , understand, and agree to the rules: yes

How did you hear about us? From a few people who where on servers I once played and minecraft server list under RP.

Have you voted for LOTC on minestatus? Witch vote number are you? No I haven’t played this server so I don’t have my own opinion of it but I will vote when I know wheatear l like this server or not

LOTC forum account name: xredel (minecraft account name too)

Character name: solak

Race: orc

Biography: solak was taught to fight from a very young age as such was an able fighter not the best but never the worst. After training and conditioning him and his peers they where lead on a raid but they chose a terrible time. The small settlement galnol was never well protected so the chief choose this as the target the young orc where to raid, but the elvin army was passing through to send to their settlement and since Galnol was in on the only passable rout the young orcs clashed in battle with the elves the weakest of the orcs ran back to their home franticly. Once the news arriver to the chief he sent their strongest to aid the young orcs. Solak slammed his fist into an elf making him slam against the wall behind him, but the young orc could not hold up against the elvin archers the orcs the chief sent finaly arrived just in time to help many of the young orcs but as they arrived more elves took up garrison of the walls. Solak tried to make his way to the other orcs but was surrounded by elves as solak fought his best arrows rained down on the orcs. Solak saw many of his kin die from the volley of arrows feeling sorrow and anger solak pummeled as many elves as he could when an older orc slammed the last of the elves blocking him with a giant hammer. Solak and the orc made it to the rest of the orcs retreat was the last thing the orcs wanted but what chance did the orc have around 20 orcs and thousands of elves.

The orcs ran heading towards a cave system they could navigate for this was the path to there home. The elves did not intend to show the orcs any mercy, the archers let a volley of arrows once more killing many of the last orcs solak was hit in the shoulder for a bigger orc blocked the arrows from hitting solak. Seven of the forty orcs returned to their home. Solak vowed to take revenge on the elves, praying to whatever god who would give him to power and reason to do so. Setting out to train against more treacherous monsters so he could bring great loss to the elves one day.

Out in the wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside there appears to be an elf struggling in combat with two bandits. What does you character do? Solak watches as the elf is beaten with eyes full of rage wanting to help the town bandit fight to elf solak notices the bandits have a quiet large sack of gold solak holds himself back while the bandit defeat the elf then walks behinde the bandits and throws a rope around them pulling the rope tight enough to crush their ribs ties they up and leaves them taking the gold from them, then looking inside the cottage for food. Leaving the bandits and the elf to their fate solak start of towards the mountains.

Your character walk up to a shop in the middle of Al’Khazar “hello my good sir!” says the shop owner. “what may I help you with today?” How does you character answer: “I want bread and your best sword”

A screenshot of your character I would post a screen shot but I was on a different RP sever so it’s not the right skin and PIPA and SOPA minecraft.net is down so I can’t change skins.

[Haldon 72]

Denied.

Points to improve:

- You are missing a few questions on your application. You can find them, and the correct application format here -> CLICK HERE

- Your definition of roleplaying was slightly confusing. If you could re-word it slightly to be a little more clear.

- Expand more on the last scenario question at the bottom of the app. Go in more detail with dialog, and even what your character is doing during the conversation.

- Please add in a picture of your skin. If you do not have a skin suitable to your character, you can ask one of our very talented skin makers to make one for you. You can find many different skin shops here -> CLICK HERE

OR, you can search for one yourself of course.

[Haldon 72]

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