Application 3Rd Attempt

[WhiteHawk 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

whitehawk9

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No sadly I did not.

How old are you?:

I am 14 years old.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in the U.S. and my time zone is eastern.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I have a very good grip on the English language. I have a 100 in my English class!

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am an average 14 year old. I like theater, track, and debate. I try very hard and never give up on anything.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Probably an hour a day. I could spend a couple hours playing on the weekend.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Roleplaying: I think of it as playing a game were you make a new identity and play as it.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Powergaming: When a player tries to make his characters traits superior in a role playing game. This form of gaming is looked down upon.

Metagaming: When a player uses outside information in a role playing game to make dissensions that his character would not be able to make without the outside knowledge. This is also looked down upon.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect the server will be very fun and interactive. I’m very excited because I’ve never done any roleplaying before.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on Axium I. I left because I thought it was boring because there was no roleplaying just building.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have. I like how you have set it up, not to many rules but not too little rules.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about you on a YouTube video.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

yes I did and I don’t know what vote number I was.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

WhiteHawk

In-Character:

Character Name:

Estoladan

What is your Race?:

I am an Elf.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

WhiteHawk is a wood elf with dark green hair and a tan skin color. He was raised in the middle of the woods with just his mother and father. Both his parents were killed when he was 10 by orks. He took their deaths hard but managed to raise himself. He became one with nature. He respects the earth and wants everyone to. He has a special hatred towards orks for killing his parents and wishes that they were all dead. He believes that his parents died in vain and will not have a happy after life until he avenges them and kills many orcs. He is a little unsocial because of never growing up around any one. He is very smart and as a child created his own language. He tried to spread his language through the elven race but it never took off. He doesn’t usually stay in one place for very long. Whenever there is war he is glad to join and has in the past. He is very good with a bow and arrow. When he was 17 he attacked a small ork village trying to avenge his parents. He was then captured by orks from a neighboring town. He was captured for a year until he escaped by tricking a guard. He tries to get a group of elves together to attack the orks again but they always bail on him. He is very fond of the arts and is a big supporter of it. He doesn’t like to depend on people so he mostly just depends on himself. He also has a hard time trusting people. He is found of the human race and thinks they would make good allies. In all he is a good person who just hates orks.

Your characters ambitions:

His number one goal is to have revenge on the orks. He wants to create a group that will help him fight orks. He feels that it is his duty to bring justice to orcs so that his family can have a happy after life. He also wants to spread his language throughout the lands. He at least wants it be recognized as a language. He also wishes to live a long life. Finally he wishes to give back to nature for letting him live in its forest for most of his life.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

WhiteHawk would help the elf. He would draw his bow and ask the bandits to stand down. When they didn’t he would put an arrow in both bandits right arm so they couldn’t use there weapons. If they started running he would also put an arrow in there legs. He would tell the elf “Elf I must advise you to go in your home if you please.” He would then go to the bandits and ask them “Will you join my group to kill the evil orcs and if you say no I will kill you.” If they say yes he will feed them and then partner up with them. If they say no he will put an arrow in their head.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

“Greetings, I am looking for some saplings to buy do you have any in stock? And do you know of any elves with a particular hatred for orcs? Well thank you my good sir if anyone asks I wasn’t here.” He asks for saplings so that he can plant them and give back to nature. He also asked for the names of people that had a hatred for orcs so that he could fine them and ask them to help them attack some orks. He is afraid orcs might be on to him so he asks the store clerk to keep things quite.

A screenshot of your skin:

I was not able to attach a photo but i have long dark green hair, pointy ears, and a simple brown shirt.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application to LoTC was...

You got some things right, but here's what you missed:

• Why is your character named White Hawk? What has he done to give him this name?

• Elaborate on how your parents were killed. Were you just sitting in your village and the orcs attacked them, or were the orcs provoked first?

• Your ambitions sounds like you need a Villain Application. Even if you are racist to orcs, you can't go into their land and "get revenge". This requires a villain application.

• Your answer to the bandit role-play scenario is considered powergaming. What if this happened in the land of Asulon? You can't emote, *shoots the bandits in the arms so they lose their weapons*. This would require rolling, and some people don't even do that.

• What if the bandits were left-handed like me? Hehe. (you don't have to change that, just trolling with you)

Fix the things I mentioned above and you'll have a much better chance at getting accepted! PM me if you have any questions!

Please reapply after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Moved to Denied Forum