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Out-Of-Character:My Name is Leonardo

Minecraft Account Name:

LiesisAlie

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No, I did not because I didn’t have money.

How old are you?:

I am 13 Years Old,14 in March this year.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Portugal/GMT

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I do, I speak English whit some friends but I make mistakes writing, but only in big texts not in Chat for example.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am A Portuguese Boy, that loves to Roleplay, it brings me to a totally new world, I’d love to get Skyrim, but I can’t find in any Shop. But Lord Of The Craft seems better than Skyrim, It involves Real people and not AI(Bots),that is What I Love Here!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

A Few Hours a day, depending on School, but normally 2-3 Hours A Day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

For Me Roleplaying is when you create or just pretend to be a character, you aren’t the Character you just pretend to be ,so you have to act like him/her and for example in this server use proper medieval like speak.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

For me Metagaming is using knowledge that the player’s character should not know about for exampling using the knowledge of a dead character .

For me Powergaming is when a character forces another to make something that does not fit the time of the server (unrealistic)

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I Expect that this server will have active and professional Roleplayers and intense Roleplaying, no griefers and good admins that will punish the ones that do not obey the rules of Asulon

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I Have played in many servers, but the ones that I really liked were Evo-craft and LegendaryCraft I left them because I found this server and I got tired of being Griefed

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I did.

How did you hear about us?:

I Saw you in the Minestatus top and since I was looking for a RP server I decided to give It a try .

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number where you?

Yes , I was vote nr. 2291 .

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

My LoTC forums account name is Leonhardmors

In-Character:

Character Name:

Leonhard_Mors

What is your Race?:

I want to be a Human whit the sub-race of Southeron.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Leonhard Mors was born in a normal house in Alras, His Family had a comfortable Inn near Alras ,His father used to trade and gather supplies ,His mother just took care of the Inn and House while her Husband was out. As a Southeron Leonhard had a good financial condition and so he had a normal Human boy's Clothing. He Lived in Alras until he was four years old .

Whit the Undead Attack to the North ,His Family Feared Death and Suffering ,so they decided to move into the South ,In Hope of Survival .They Lived in the Wild for 30 Years, In all of those years he lost his parents .

When Leonhard heard about the Undead almost reaching the temple ,he decided to abandon his life to fight for the temple .Now with The Fall of Aegis to the Undead ,He moves to Asulon whit the Dream of Creating the Asulon's University of Researching ,to develop new aspects in every way to Asulon.

He Also Wants to meet new people, form a family and in the future settle down whit his family

My Name is Leonhard Mors.

Your characters ambitions:

Leonhard wants to Develop Medicine and Biology in Asulon and Create The Asulon’s University of Researching .

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

My Character Would Try to stop the bandits and help the Elf ,After the struggle Leonhard would settle the things up and ask the Elf what happened ,give him the bandits items and if my home was near ,give him shelter for the night.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?Hail Sir ,I’d like to buy a bag full of Bread((Stack)) to My Travels Please.

A screenshot of your skin:

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Other Information:

I would Really Like to Join This community ,its my fourth try and I have to do 10 more to join this server, I will!

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Your application has been:

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But don't lose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help.

Your definition for powergaming is incorrect or partially correct but not the definition we are looking for; to find out the correct definition you can do a google search, join our Team Speak channel and ask around or search for Powergaming on our wiki.

Your biography needs some more work, although I do like your use of lore from lord of the craft. You need to write more about your character, flesh him out a bit, write his strengths and weaknesses. What his skills are and how he gained them. Also I would like you to include his age, description and personality. With the description don’t just write He is tall and old and carries around a bow. There are a lot of tall, old people who carry around bows. Get descriptive, what is your hair colour? How long? Eye colour? Big eyes? Small eyes? Do you have wrinkles? Freckles? A mole? Etc.

I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each role-play question and make sure for the combat question you abide by the rules of combat for the server. In role-play you will need to warn a villain before engaging in combat. At least a couple of lines from each person is needed for combat to initiate or it is considered a no-rp kill and you can get banned on the server for it. Do not just write:

I suddenly pull out my sword and kill the bandits. Then I ask the elf for money for helping him.

Write a dialogue as well as the actions of all those involved. This goes as well for the shop question, do not just write a single line, write a full scene. Write the actions of all involved in the situation and what they say, how they interact with each other.

I want to see how good you REALLY ARE at RPing and I want you to try as hard as you can when answering these questions.

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums.

Good luck :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

All the lore of the world of Aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

Information about the skills system:

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information

F.A.Q of Application submissions:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

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