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Out-Of-Character:

Braden Cahalan

Minecraft Account Name:

Ccali1

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No, I did not.

How old are you?:

Just turned 26.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Central.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I speak very fluent English and my grammar is pretty good.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I enjoy playing Online games ecspiecally role-playing. I have a job. I like to have fun and meet new people.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I could be on during weekends almost all hours and week days from around 5:00p.m.-p.m.9:30.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Role-playing is the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, and to me role-playing just brings out all your emotions and feelings.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is playing with using knowlenge from real life.

Powergaming is playing with using skills unusual for character.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this server to be better then other servers, to have a lot of friendly people, and to give me something fun to do everyday.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have only played on a couple other servers and they just weren't very much fun and got boring since their is no room to build.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have read, understood, and agreed to the rules and find them very fair.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about you from a friend that went to Minecon.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

Yes, i'm number 3,378

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Bcali1

In-Character: Braden Cahalan

Character Name: Breyden Wurham ( was going for a orcish last name )

What is your Race?:

I'm an orc

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

My character came from the faraway orc villages on the Eastern side of

Krugmar where he was born and raised. He didn't get to see his parents much with his dad always getting into fights and his mom working long hours as a merchant. As a young child he met a boy, who no one knows the name of now. The boy was the son of a human diplomat. Then one day his father and mother died. The next day his friends family moved away. He was sent to a orphanage. He then decided he would run away from the orphanage and grab his mothers goods from her work, and go on an adventure to spread his mothers goods everywhere and look for his friend. He will search every inch of the cities Malinor, Kal'Urguan, and the Kingdom of Urgen for his unknown childhood friend. You can tell Breyden from other orcs because he is much smaller and not as rough looking. Now you will see his adventure begin.

Your characters ambitions:

He is looking to travel the world and find valuable goods to become rich and to find his lost friend

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

My character would draw his sword and kill them all one by one then take their goods, go make a profit, and buy a good meal

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

My character would say " I've been traveling the world looking for goods to buy and sell have anything to offer?"

A screenshot of your skin:

http://minecraftskins.info/orc.html

Other Information:

The adress above will bring you to the website and page where my skin is located its just a basic orc skin

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Your application has been:

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But don't lose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help.

Your definition for powergaming is incorrect or partially correct but not the definition we are looking for; to find out the correct definition you can do a google search, join our Team Speak channel and ask around or search for Powergaming on our wiki.

Your biography is too short and needs some expansion. Please include the entire question when writing your biography such as your characters history, personality, description and age. With the description don’t just write He is tall and old and carries around a bow. There are a lot of tall, old people who carry around bows. Get descriptive, what is your hair colour? How long? Eye colour? Big eyes? Small eyes? Do you have wrinkles? Freckles? A mole? Etc. Also, if your character is good at swordsmanship, bows or even magic you need to explain in your biography why your character is so good in what it does and how it developed these skills.

I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each role-play question and make sure for the combat question you abide by the rules of combat for the server. In role-play you will need to warn a villain before engaging in combat. At least a couple of lines from each person is needed for combat to initiate or it is considered a no-rp kill and you can get banned on the server for it. Do not just write:

I suddenly pull out my sword and kill the bandits. Then I ask the elf for money for helping him.

Write a dialogue as well as the actions of all those involved. This goes as well for the shop question, do not just write a single line, write a full scene. Write the actions of all involved in the situation and what they say, how they interact with each other.

I want to see how good you REALLY ARE at RPing and I want you to try as hard as you can when answering these questions.

Please do not just give a link to the skin, but embed it into your application. You can do this by following this tutorial:

1. Go in-game and press the “F5” button TWICE. (Not once as this will show the back of your character)

2. Take a screen shot by pressing the "PrntScr" button on a windows computer or press F2 on the keyboard, then go to start => Run and type in this: %appdata%/.minecraft/screenshots

3. Find the screenshot and open it in an image manipulation program such as Paint or Gimp.4. Crop the image so that only the area close to your skin (including the skin) remains.

5. Save the file and go to tinypic.com

6. Upload the file

7. Click ONCE on the text box underneath: "IMG Code for Forums & Message Boards"

8. Right click and copy the entire text

9. Paste in your new application

*Note* If you want a tutorial for Macs, please send me a message on the forums.

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums.

Good luck :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

All the lore of the world of Aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

Information about the skills system:

http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Skill_Information

F.A.Q of Application submissions:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

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