Amazingbubba22's Application

[Bubba 0]

Minecraft Account Name:

amazingbubba22

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

I have not signed up to the LOTC booth or ever been to MineCon

How old are you?:

18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

+06:00 (GMT) / Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I am fluent in the english language and i have an absolute grammar

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am currently living in Toronto,Ontario searching for good games to play but yet i cant find one then i stumbled upon MINECRAFT! i signed up bought it and started playing then i found this server and i wanted to apply but i didn't know how so i found some examples and here i am

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I would usually be on the server about 1-2 hours a day so about 7-14 hours weekly

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

I have alot of experience in roleplaying i dont LARP but i still have experiene. to me roleplaying means staying in character and respecting the other around you.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is when a character acts on knowledge that he should not be aware of but the player discovered out of game or character, for example when you can see an enemy nametag heading towards you - your character would not know that they are coming towards them - so you must act as if you have not seen it until you can see the physical character in front of you. Whereas Powergaming is when a character, in roleplaying, without giving another player the opportunity to react, declares an attack or action successful or achieved.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I have seen the server on youtube and it looks like a great server thats why i am here so i can sign up get accepted hopefully and then roleplay :)

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Moosevalley-i left because it got boring because there was nothing to do

Legendarycraft- left also because its boring

Citywars- not many people playing

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I swear it on computer (Yes).

How did you hear about us?:

a youtube channel who did videos candle305? (SageCandle)

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

No i haven't because i've never heard of that site

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Bubba

In-Character:

Character Name:

Azren

What is your Race?:

Dwarf

Biography (This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Azren was born in Al'Khazar when he was 1 he lost his parents because his home was attacked by orcs his mother and father protected him but died trying he was about to die but suddenly a flash of light incinerated the orcs and he was carried off by a wizard.

Azren was raised by the wizard for 1 year then the wizard sent hi back to the dwarfs the dwarfs cared for him and he treated them all like family later he hard news that the temple of Aegis would be under attack in 5 days he set off to the humans and elves for help in the elf forest he met the elf prince and he recruited his army to help in defending the temple of Aegies he didn't trust the orcs so he let them go then he went to the humans and met the king he recruited their army to.

when the attack was commencing they were ready and they wiped out all the undead suddenly the clouds started turning grey and the dark lord appeared on his horse then the wizard who saved him came and sealed the dark lord away for eternity...

Everyone thanked the wizard and the dwarves for alerting them about the attack and that they were happy to help anytime then Azren got asked by a fellowhip to set out on an adventure and he accepted then they set out on their long journey to the undead bases.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

Azren said 'A good day to you sir' behind the shopkeeper Azren saw a bandit trying to thief the shopkeeper and azren shot the thief with an arrow and started beating the bandit until he died. The shopkeeper thanked him 'take this as a reward' said the shopkeeper and gave him 5 diamonds 'this is to much take them back' and Azren also gave him 3 more diamonds and 1000 gold take it as a token of our greet.

A screenshot of your skin:

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/7803/20120130161317.png

Other Information:

Please accept me if not can you reply and tell me what i did wrong and can improve on and if its the screenshot can you please just accept it because i dont know how else to do it yah...

[Trazier 115]

1: Your skin might be considered.... adequate. It doesn't look much like a dwarf to me, but I fear if I say to get a new one you'll come back with a honeydew skin and be as cheesy as the other dwarves who put in no effort.

2: Your biography. It's incredibly cliche` to have your family killed by mysterious orcs who then somehow vanish and leave behind a child. I'm also going to have to call powergamer on the magical wizard who appeared, vaporized your enemies, then raised you as his own. You should work on this category a bit and cut out the powergamey bit. Cliche' as it is, you could have your family killed by orc bandits, but maybe have the local cityguard put them down, instead of some mythical wizard magically appearing to sling fireballs at everybody, eh?

3: Minestatus voting: I don't know if we're supposed to accept or autodeny these apps, but it's definitely a black mark to your record. In the future, all you need do is www.lordofthecraft.net, then look at the right side of the screen for the "VOTE" button, push it, enter the captcha and your name, and be done.

You're close, but just a bit too far outside the boundries of what would be acceptable. I think you'll be able to get this on your next attempt, if you decide to make one.

[Trazier 115]

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