Application

[urukaresh 2]

Out-Of-Character:

out of character my name is josh toney i am 15 and still in school and live in Mt.pleasent MI but am an abid player and i love to RP with people even if i tend to slip up every once in awhile (but no ones perfect)

Minecraft Account Name:

urukaresh

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

no

How old are you?:

15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

us eastern USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

i love to play minecraft and love to RP.i cant stand people who force me to deal with bad players and bad roleplayers.i cant wait to join the server .

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

5-40 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

i know that roleplaying is getting into character and haveing fun with the game. roleplaying to me means that u play not as yourself but as the character ur controling talking and acting like the character would

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

metagameing is useing info gotten ooc and out of game to better yourself or anyone else.power gameing is role playing your character is as not to give someone a choice and forceing them to do something

What do you expect this server will be like?:

i expect it to be a fun and energetic sever with lots of interesting twists and turns

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

i havent played on anyother minecraft severs but i have play RP games before

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes

How did you hear about us?:

an old friend

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

no but i will when i get to play on the sever and see what its like

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

username:peanutx6 display name:urukaresh

In-Character:

in character i am a person who loves to see good RPs and i can tolerate bad RPs somewhat and just play it off but i can only deal with so much

Character Name:

urukaresh

What is your Race?:

orc

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

urukaresh was raised as all orcs are in the fires of combat he was the only one to reach adulthood out of his team of 4 all other where killed or set out into the desert which angered urukaresh made him wonder if the orc needed a new foundation a new leader but he was soon found to be a threat to his village with reason for when he found he wasthe only one to pass his final test and killed his own parents in a fit of rage earning him exile from that village but he soon joined a mechant caravan and leaned a crude version of the common langauge and soon forgot his orcish langauge but was soon set away for he had been angered by the other gaurd insulting him for his speech and he ripped them all to peices with his bare hands and then accidently smashed the caravan cart and cracked open the skull of the mechants son leaveing him where he is now an orc with an apparent lust for blood with a very good skill with all melee weapons a decent shot with a bow and a semi good shaman bloodline

Your characters ambitions:

to lead his own tribe and take over control of the orc war nation

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

he helps the elf for he must be strong to have held off 2 men by himself for even a few minutes proveing him worthy of respect

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

(grunts) "me want shop"

A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/orc-skin-v2/

Other Information:

please send feed back on anything that needs to be fixed

[Danny 2232]

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I'm sorry, but your application for Lord of the Craft has been...

DENIED

Notes for applicant: Your biography doesn't describe your personality or appearance. Your ambitions isn't detailed enough. You haven't put enough detail into the open response questions. Also, please clean up your spelling and grammar before you re-apply. Use a spell checker to check it, as this was quite frustrating to read.

Please note: Whilst you may be angry or irritated at this denial, you need to understand that as a member of the Application Team it is my job to ensure we only have people who made great applications on the server. After you fix the issues that I've detailed in your application, it will probably be accepted.

Where can I get help to fix these errors?

It really depends on what you need – you are not allowed to have anyone else write part of your application for you. As the Application Team we're here to not only accept and deny your applications, but it's our job to give you help for fixing them. We'll help you as much as we can, but we will never write a bit of your application, no matter how much you ask!

The best way to get help, is to contact the Application Team member who denied you, (in this case, myself; Danny). You can contact me either here on the forums, via a PM – or you can also find me on TeamSpeak most of the time, either in the “Application Team” channel or in one of the private channels. Feel free to poke me, or send me a message for any help, and I'll try my best to help you!

I'd also suggest that you do some reading up, depending on why you were denied, as there's some good help out there, already written for anyone who needs it!

The Wiki provides almost every scratch of lore that we have, there's people dedicated to expanding on it, and making it as detailed as possible.

You should also read the various posts that have been made by GM's and Application Team members to help with your applications, and believe me, there are many. The most useful is the “Application Team's Advice” thread.

Can I re-apply?

Of course you can! Often people post as many as 3 applications before they're accepted! Just make sure, that you wait until after 24 hours before you re-apply or your application will be denied. We have the 24 hour wait system to keep the Application Submissions forum tidy, and to ensure that the application team aren't overwhelmed by applicants posting a new application every five minutes.

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[Danny 2232]

Moved to Denied Forum