Alliianz

[Alliianz 1]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

My Minecraft account name is Alliianz

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

Nope

How old are you?:

I am 16 years old currently.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I like to think I have exceptional English skills however, as humans know, people can make mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I enjoy gaming such as WoW, Combat Arms and guitar hero. My favourite games at the moment, Skyrim, Minecraft and combat arms. if im being truthful here i believe i can be a kind a friendly person.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I could be on anywhere from 15 to 25 hours every week, however that could change on how many assignments i get from college.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

Roleplaying is abit like acting, you have to portray someone else's personality whilst ignoring my own thoughts. this means that you act and speak like them at all times; even think like they would. It is RP if you avenge your friend after they were unlawfully murdered. It isn't RP if you randomly kill someone without any conversion before hand.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is the use of out of character knowledge to advantage your in game character, this could be: using a strategy guide, using third person in MC or copying a mining style from the internet or it could be that you have been told the cords to a secret base and go there first time with no one to lead you.

Powergaming is a playing style that is action in which the person performing the action has complete control over the situation and the other person has no time to react or do anything in a fight it could also be used to grind for lot against mobs.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect that this server will demonstrate a strong RP environment and a social system. I hope to be able to constantly interact with players and the environment.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

i have been on a friends server, but other than that, i have pretty much kept to the single player mode.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have read, understood and agree to the server rules.

How did you hear about us?:

one of my best friend's are currently playing on LOTC.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

I have voted the number is 1119.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

My forum name is AlliianZ

In-Character:

Character Name:

His name is Nouiia

What is your Race?:

human.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Nouiia was born in the land of ageis in the city of Oren. His family wasn't well off but could get by, Nouiia had an older brother called derrick who he looked up and admired. At age of four Nouiia father set off in search of riches as the farmer life he had did not please him.Derrick took over as the man of the house despite only being 7 years old he was working the farm with their mother while Nouiia desperately wanted to help but instead only hindered them both. At age of six Nouiia started to help out with the fields as well but was awful , he kept destroying the good soil and wheat, in the end his mother banned him from helping with the fields so Nouiia went back in side and just watched. At the age of eleven Nouiia decided that he was just wasting his time watch so he decided to do something usefull and learn swordsmanship however no one would take a short and weak looking kid , he had short brown hair and blue eyes. This greatly annoyed him so he set of to the woods in search of wood to make a sword so he could practice alone. At the age of fifthteen his older brother moved out of the house and set on his journey in search of fame and fortune just as their father did. just before Nouiia sixteen birthday guards came to their house and took his mother to there jail for not being able to pay her taxes for months, Nouiia was sent to a orphanage were he had to spend the rest of the year there until he was sixteen finally that day had come he could leave. Nouiia set out for work so that he could pay his mothers debts and live freely with her however this didn't go as planned , no one wanted to hire the short muscular man all he would do is scare away the customers, so he wondered around hunting the creatures of the land to be able to survive.

At the age of 17 the undead attacked the land destroying all in there path so Nouiia fled to the safest place he could think of, the cloud temple when he got there he looked for shelter.Not many made it to safety and many were slaughtered the people that were able to escape did not take a liking to Nouiia because of his scary appearance, this didn't bother Nouiia he was used to it by now.

When Blundermore was giving his speech about discovering a new land, Nouiia thought this could be a new start so he help him build the boats to escape this forsake land. Finally, Nouiia was 18 and the boats had been finished, so they set sail after a many weeks they finally reached the land and Nouiia instantly left the boats alone to discover this new land and try and find his mother and brother.

Your characters ambitions:

Nouiia wants to find what happened to his Brother and his mother and if they are still alive he also wants people to accept him instead of not even give him a chance because of this looks.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

Nouiia pulls out his sword and walks up to the bandits he tells them to "stop what they are doing or pay the consequence's".

*the bandits look at each other and then both pull out there swords*

Nouiia defends against the bandits tell the elf to run as far as he could.

Nouiia try's to attack the first bandit striking his right arm , forcing him to drop his sword and retreat.

Nouiia attacks the second bandit but he defends letting his comrade escape. The bandits hits Gilbert on the leg reducing him movement , barley able to stand he puts all his strength into his final attack striking the last bandit. Nouiia then uses the cottage to heal his wounds before being on his way.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

"hail, do you have any food for sale or any armour?

The Merchant replies "i have apples for sale at 15 minas "

Nouiia replies with "i'll take the 2 apples for 30 minas"

The merchant "ok , here you go"

Nouiia "thank you"

Nouiia leaves to look for more shops in the city.

A screenshot of your skin:

[High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ 144]

Denied.

Overall, the application is good for a first try. A few things are wrong that you can take actions and steps to improve.

The Opened Response Questions at the bottom could use some improvement. You can go more into detail with the bandits, and explain what made the first bandit run away. Who is Gilbert? And was Nouiia with other characters beside himself?

With the shopkeeper, that is more of a dialouge, a small skit in a play. You need to put more action into it. Did the shopkeeper hand over the apples? Did Nouiaa hand over the coins? Go into more detail with this, and include more action.

The biography needs more description to it. You need to explain how Nouiia went from a weak kid to a muscular one. How did he get so muscular and scary looking? Explain how he became so muscular and expand more on the details of his training in swordsmanship. You can also expand more on how he felt when his mother was dragged away to jail and how he planned to find her.

You can improve on the grammar a bit too. Fix the run on sentences, capitalize the names and places and beginnings of sentences, and watch your commas.

Overall this is a good first application, but could use work for improvement. Please wait 2 hours to re-apply and goodluck on the next application~

[High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ 144]

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