Headesploder's Application

[headesploder 0]

Hello moderator or admin,

My name is Brandan.

My minecraft account name it headesploder.

I did not attend Minecon because I'm only 15 and live in South Dakota! So ya I live quite a while away.

I live in the USA central time.

English is all I know!

I think I am a good kindhearted person. I am quite athletic but I also like video games. I love to play online games like minecraft, and would like to boost your servers reputation.

I am normally able to play an hour or two on weekdays and a lot longer on the weekends. so about 15 hours at least a week.

Role playing is making games seem like real life, and is quite fun. I have played some other role playing games and I understand how to play.

It is using real instincts in videogames.

I can picture a massive and expanse world that is fun and exciting.

I have played on random craft and that is a role playing server too, it got boring after a while and the admins were mean.

Yes, and I like your rules and understand them.

My friend told me about your server.

Yes I voted for the server, look for headesploder.

I am biester1 on the forums.

My name on the server will be Draco.

I will be a human.

He will be an outgoing adventurer, always looking for adventure. He will always be optimistic and friendly. He is young, around 20 years old. He has skin that is somewhat tan and brown hair, blue eyes and somewhat tall.

My character would like to explore the world!

Since I am a human I would help the elf and kill the bandits, I would then make sure the elf was okay and be on my way.

I would ask to buy something or be on my way.

I can change my skin if you want me to.

[hypercrit 237]

The app, to say the least, was ALRIGHT. It was below average, for a number of reasons. First of all, you didn't get the formatting right, and that is understandable for new members such as you. What you need to do is copy the format from the thread where you get the format, and fill in the blanks. Also, your biography is too short, what made your character friendly? Was it a good childhood, or did certain events make him that way? We want to know about your character, about every aspect of it. The answer to the elf and bandit question needs some work. How did the bandits react when they saw you? Did they try to slice at you with a knife? Also, for the second question, try to make something fantastic happen. I always like apps I read when they don't use the usual stale answer of, "I bought something then left." Use your imagination, I'm sure you could turn that into a very interesting read. Your answers for power and meta gaming are wrong, read up on them and look at all the support threads in the application center, they have information on them to help you. Also, you NEED a skin to get accepted, and it has to suit your character.

Thank you for reading, I hope you can learn from your mistakes you made here.

[hypercrit 237]

Not sure how to move this to the Denied Forum yet....

[High Prophetess Mezua~ ♥ ツ 144]

Moved to Denied Forum