Wasp911's 5Th Application

[wasp911 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

wasp911 (in-game name) Adeln_WolfWind (what i would like my character name to be)

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No

How old are you?:

12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Austrlia, Adelaide.... GMT +9:30.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I have a great grip on the English language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I really love Minecraft and have been playing for at least 2 years. My friends and I used to play dungeons and dragons I always liked mapping and the roleplaying feel of it all.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

10 or more hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

I know a bit about roleplaying as I have been on a few servers in multiple games and have roleplayed before. To me it means you take up the role of another character may it be a dog a cat all the way to a tree. It is a fun thing to do!

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are:

Metagaming means to make an out of character statement or action which your character isn't meant to know or say.

Powergaming means to make your character say or do something that is succsessful without letting the other player act.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect and hope that the server will be really awesome with many amazing structures with amazing friendly players/admins and I feel that I will be welcomed.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on House of Gioboi... I got bored. Skyenet....Closed Down. and some more i can't remember the names of.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I agree to the rules and accept that if i break them (I won't) I WILL be punished.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about Lord of the Craft on PotatoOrgys YouTube channel.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

Not yet i don't know what it is but if someone could tell me I will.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Wasp911

In-Character:

Character Name:

Adeln_WolfWind

What is your Race?:

Human.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.)

Adeln was found on the steps of an Abbey one rainy morning. The monks who had lived in the abbey many years peeled back the rugged torn brown rags covering the basket and were surprised to see bueatiful young baby looking up at them. One of the monks picked the boy up and held him while the other monks realised there was an envelope sealed with the High King's stamp. The monk holding the baby then went inside and layed the babie down on the guest room bed. He decided he would call it Adeln_WolfWind. The other monks glared at each other as one of them peeled open the envelope. A letter fell into a muddy puddle on the ground and the monks rushed to pick it up before the ink faded away they unfolded it and to there shame most of the letters had faded but the rest read... I H g K f Oren gi e child t e protec ion of monks at abbey. Pl se l ok a er my b y.

Thankyou.

The monks could not make out many of the words or could work out who had sent the letter but what did stand out was child and protection. They then knew that they must keep this boy alive even if it meant their life.

16 years on.

Adeln had grown into a fine young man and had been living with the monks for several years he had made many friends with the travellers who like to stay in the Abbey as it is cheaper then any hotels or inns in Oren. The monks who were very poor had eventually run out of food and didn't know what to doas they couldnt buy any food. Aldeln liked to go hunting and get the meat off wild pigs and cows and that would feed the Abbey for a week or two.

2 years on.

Adeln had decided that he had had enough of eating meat every day of his life. He was now 18. He was short tempered when angry, nice and friendly when in a good mood and all together a helpful sort of person. He would always help the monks with any work that needed to be done. He had black scraggly hair, a hairy chin and beady hazel eyes. One day while Adeln was sweeping the floor in the dining area he overheard a group of travellers upstairs who seemed like nice blokes. But as he began paying more attention he realised that they were talking about theiery and how they had just recently robbed some travellers. Adeln realised theivery was an easy way to earn money as he was very good at it. One time Adeln wanted to buy some ale from the local town over the hill but the monks wouldn't allow it. So he went against their orders and stole at least 40 Minas and ran down to the inn in the local town and bought himself some ale. He never enjoyed it anyway but now it had given him a great idea. The next day Adeln went at grabbed a stick, he practised using it on a tree as if it was a sword. He Then became very good at sparring. In the evenings he would go and spar with the knights down at Oren he was eventually so good that he would beat them.

So now that Adeln was trained he was ready to go. He geared up grabbed a sword and ran through the woods all the way into the Elven treetops. He waited by the road and jumped out at anyone passing and demanded their money or their life. He then became very wealthy and returned some of the money to the Abbey the monks were worried they were unsure of where Adeln had gotten the money from. He lied and told them he had won it in a sparring competition they doubted him.

1 year on (19 years old)

Adeln as a child had always wanted to sail and had decided that as he was wanted all over Asulon, no one had his identity, he would buy a boat and leave the monks. He would live on the water and constuct himself a cave into the side of a cove on the beach. He would band together only the best thieves and would eventually overthrow the Kingdoms of Asulon. He would become very rich and thats were we are now....(aged 19!)To be continued......

Your characters ambitions:

My characters ambitions are to get a job, earn minimum wage and find his parents.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

Adeln runs to the elf's side he quickly draws a sword and holds off the bandits. One of the bandits seems to be older than the other, and he laughs at how easy it would be to kill a young human. Adeln pushes back one of the bandits with his foot and spins his blade through the older one. He doesn't seem to die, but he replies with a quick swing of the blade and manages to cut open Adelns arm. Adeln grunts and quickly drives his sword through the older bandits stomache. The younger one turns to face Adeln. Adeln can see the fear in his eyes, he yells at the bandit loudly spitting in his face and he turns and runs, tripping on a crack in the road. The elf turns and thanks Adeln and offers him some money. Adeln replies "no thanks, im only here to help." He smiles and trots off into the woods.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

Adeln:"Hello, who might you be?"

Owner: "My name is Joden, and yours?"

Adeln: "I'm Adeln, could i please see some of your finest bread?"

Owner: "Sure I'll show you what I have in stock." "We have some bread here made by some farmers down the road, they produce some fine bread. Would you like to try a bit?"

Adeln: "Yes thankyou" *bites* "oh it's nice and crunchy but yes indeed very tasty. How much for a loaf?"

Owner: "Oh we have discounts for first timers, probably for you sir, maybe 5 minas"

Adeln: "Oh yes very cheap, I'll take one loaf then thankyou" *hands Joden 5 minas*

Owner: "Thankyou have a nice day, come again soon."

Adeln: "I will do thankyou, I'll tell my friends aswell."

*smiling Adeln walks away feeling very happy at such a cheap loaf, he goes home and tells some of his friends*.

A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.planetmin...highway-robber/

If I get denied this time is it my last time? Am I ever allowed to try again? Because i really want to go on this server it looks so awesome.

[James Undercroft 129]

Denied

Sadly this is your last application for quite some time. I would say around two months.

This long time gives you a chance to improve your roleplaying skills on other servers, and to become more knlowedgable on certain things needed to join this server.

This is why you were denied:

-Your biography portrayed your character being evil, when infact you are not allowed to be without a villain application (which can only be filled out AFTER you have been accepted)

-You have not written an example for your definitions of powergaming and metagaming.

-The only lore you have included from the server in your biography is the word "Asulon", a lot more is needed.

-Your skin is not embedded

-You have not voted for the server (although that is not your fault as no one told you, although a quick google search could have fixed that)

-You deleted the and [b ] parts of the application, making it really bland and annoying to read without an easy distinction between the questions and answers.

I am really sorry that you are not allowed to apply again for another 2 months, but I hope that when you come back then you will be refreshed and ready to apply again. The rules are the rules and I am not allowed to give you another application sooner :(

~Lucas

[James Undercroft 129]

Moved to Denied Forum