Sentaru's First Application

[Sentaru 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Sentaru

How old are you?:

17 nearly 18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Denmark

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

yes i do, but its not my main languish. I'm trying my best to write english with no flaws.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im a danish guy with lots of love for the people around me. I have a weird humor but you will find out about that later.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

It all depends on my studys and home work. but i could prob spent 3-5 days a week on it.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is were you make up a person, his/her background, how he/she looks, what kind of person he/she is and then play him/her. The only thing needed for roleplaying is the players themslef and a good bunch of imagination.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have done some roleplaying in World of warcraft aswell as playing on a RPG server hoasted by My link

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

It is were you in some way gain infomation about for example sertant players or towns or what ever, outside of the game and then use it indside of the game. This would only create an hole in the roleplay as the part were the player gains the infomation is never mentioned in game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

one might best remember power-gameing from one's childhood ''haha! you went into my trap now you are doomed!'' ''na-a! cause i have a super force feild that is unbreakable'' basically totaly overpowered abilityies

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect this to be a server where one can find roleplaying going on at every city small town or farm. I expect the server to be quite entertaining as i like acting and roleplaying quite a lot.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on a RPG server hosted by the yogscast, but it was closed down.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes i have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

yes i do.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about it from my friends from the Rpg server i once played on.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:

no i have not.

In-Character:

Character Name:

Galliea Sentaru.

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Nord

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Galliea Sentaru was born into a powerful Nordic clan, in control of many vast lands far north of Asulon. He was the older brother to Tharik Kaup and the strongest of the two. In his youth, he often took his little brother on grand adventures across the mountains and plains, often pretending to be Nordic heroes inspired by the stories told to them by their mother. Despite having less charm and intellect than his beloved sibling, he was exceptionally strong and had a high endurance, often using his strength and endurance to help out at farms and building sites. His muscular physique and endurance made him the renowned strong man of his city. Sentaru and his brother were the pride of their home city.

"It is a great life we live, brother! Let it never change!"

"And let it never change us!"

Their lives changed during the famed Nordic Clan Wars. Their family were locked in a bitter feud against a neighboring warrior clan. Galliea Sentaru, who was 18 and eligible for fighting, went to battle while Tharik stayed back at the bases, serving as a junior strategist for the army. He slowly saw his home destroyed, and his childhood friends dying. Sentaru did have much time for friends or family, he needed much of his time to preparing and repair his gear for the next battle.

In time, however, Sentaru and Tharik's clan lost to the opposing clan. Their fate was sealed in a battle that took place in the plains outside of the city. Sentaru Battled hard to keep the enemy from gaining access to the town and its people, but it was in vain. The enemy was too great and the city defenders were to few. Sentaru being the last to get dragged away in protest from the battlefield by 3 friendly guardsmen, had to flee with the surviving guards away from the battlefield. Only a dozen men had survived the battle. They stayed together as a group and travelled to the closest town they knew. They stayed in the town for a few days before setting out again, not knowing what their next move would be.

After a few days of traveling, Sentaru decided to look for his brother. The other tried to convince Sentaru that his brother was dead, but Sentaru would not listen and began to look for his brother all by him self. Years went by and Sentaru is now 25 years old and the trail of his brother got colder and colder. But one day Sentaru stumbled over a old emblem from his old clan. Sentaru finally had a clue as to where Tharik would be. Sentaru followed the road were he found the old emblem to a mansion were his brother could be. Sentaru was refused entry into the mansion but refused to leave before at least seeing the slave quarters. The guards of the mansion then tried to remove Sentaru by force which resulted in Sentaru killing 5 of the guards and wounding or knocking the rest of the guards unconscious. Sentaru finally had accesses to the slave quarters, but Tharik was no were to be found. With great sadness Sentaru left the mansion. Walking towards the nearest city of Hyrethia Sentaru spots a poster hanging on a tree telling about a deadly plague that have hit Hyrethia, turning everyone it hits into undead. As Sentaru reads the poster he discovers that it is signed by his brother!

Sentaru starts running back to the mansion. At the mansion Sentaru forces one of the mansions employees to bring him ink and a feather. Sentaru then tell the employer of the mansion to take his ,not so well written letter to Tharik Kaup. The employer quickly runs of with the letter and Sentaru soon afterwards begins his travel to the town of Asulon, the place he had written in his letter as a meeting point for him and his brother.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

Finding a place to call home with his brother, since his old home was destroyied

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

His trusty Sword and axe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Fighting with hands and swords

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

ignore it. If the halfling were to call after helpm he would help interfere with the warriors.

If the warriors were in any way threating or provokating, he would attack them.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Sentaru would greet him, ask him for what he was selling, if there were anything he could use he would by it, else he would just leave.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

He would leave it alone, stealing is not honurable. Sentaru belives in honest work and honest battle. He only takes what he have earned.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

He would stumble in the camp asking to buy food and ask for the way to the nearest town. if they tried to cheat him he would likely get hostile.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

He would not pass such and offer. He would go with the party leader put he would also probaly be the first one to charge into the bandit camp.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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I am sorry to inform you that your application to the server has been denied. It is always sad to deny an application and I can see some potential in you.

So don't loose hope! You can re-apply in 24 hours with a better and improved application!

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You did have quite a few problems.

Firstly your spelling and grammar isn't good, I understand you aren't natively English and that you are trying hard to get the stuff right, but its nevertheless a problem when reading the app. It doesn't help when there are quite a few typos and incorrectly capitalized letters.

What is more important is that you have some problems with RP. Your character seems to be able to take on more than 5 guards by himself, in a mansion! This is by the way, one of the other [not needed] definitions of powergaming. We don't want that. In accordance, your open-response answers were a bit 'incomplete'. These questions are there so you can demonstrate your skill in RP, be creative!

Lastly, Asulon isn't a town. This is important! Asulon is a 'world thing/island collection', anything which isn't there doesn't exist. Please, look over the lore of the server a slightest bit before applying.

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I hope you re-apply with a better more complete application that I (or another) can accept.

[Lego XBOX 915]

Moved to Denied Forum