Application For Thekalebkid

[TheKalebKid 0]

((Okay, if your the person from the app team looking at this, can you go back to my other posts and look over them. I don't mean to sound whiny but, My apps have been reviewed by two different people who said different things were wrong. No offence, but it appears that this team is flawed. That, or some of you guys have your own definition of what a proper application is. It makes it really hard to write an Application as well because we can't write something that will please everyone. So please, Go back to the other applications of mine and tell me what the deal is. This would cut down on my confusion a ton, Thanks. Now for the third attempt at the application.))

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: TheKalebKid

How old are you?:16, I turn 17 in a month

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: UTC/GMT -5 EST United States or America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, In fact I do. The only issue I have with the English language is spelling.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a typical 16 year old teen. I love drawing, and watching anime. I do two things religiously: Listen to dubstep, and play The Legend of Zelda. Oh, and im pretty much a hardened person(And by that I mean, I dont really care what others think of me. I'm me and if they don't like it, oh well.)

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: It honestly depends how busy with school I am. The weekends are usually my gaming time.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you :Roleplaying is filling the shoe of a set character(either one you've made or say one from a game.) You basically act them by /their/ personality, while still maintaining control over that character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Facebook rp accounts, and groups. Derp roleplays and cosplays with friends. Random chat sites if you want to count those. I've also been in a couple plays.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is the use of outside or OOC sources to effect in game experiences of adventures. Like using chat to give away the coords of a hidden quest treasure chest.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power gaming is the forcing of roleplaying onto others, or giving others powers that are unobtained. Example: Odin uses his bow and arrow to shoot you in the face, you die. That is forcing roleplay onto others, Or forcing a roleplayer to recive an action.

What do you expect this server will be like?:It seems like a lot of fun. Hopefully the third times the charm and I can get to it.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I currently play on minederp, I have not left. Its actually a decent server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, yes and yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes.

How did you hear about us?:The god child called google.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:Yes, It gives me no number.

In-Character:

Character Name: Odin

What Race are you?:Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Human

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Odin is a simple elf, He grew up in the forests learning as a kid medicine and archery. However that peacefulness soon after his 16th birthday. As war approaches his village, the elders throw him into the test of Tranquility and Nature. The test to adulthood in his village. After many difficulties during this ordeal he passes and receives the tribes adulthood necklace.

The village elders then give him the responsibility of getting the kids of the village to safety. He leads them to a small neighboring tribe then sets out on his own to find out what happened to the rest of the tribe. He travels back to the tribe to find their village burned to the ground. In a fret of worry he takes off heading towards the great elven nation of Malinor. That is where his adventure is left of.

What is your Character's ambitions?:To find out what happened to his tribe and possibly try to rebuild the village on his own. (If I can find a group of orcs that are willing to roleplay the ones who attacked our village, well lets just say that should be fun.)

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The bow and arrow, followed closely behind axe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Herbal Remedies

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):(I may change this later if I make a skin that I like better. If thats allowed.)

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?He would pull out his bow and get ready to take on two warriors and defend a small halfling.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Takes caution but stays polite to the merchant, Odin would think he's a bit shady

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:They're not his so he would leave them there. Someone could miss them later.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?He would trade with them for a bit of food, and if it was late he would see if he could rest for the night.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:He'd first check out the situation for himself and see if there really were bandits. He would then asses the situation for himself and then decide if he would join or not.

[ShadowoKing 86]

Denied

-Your bio is okay but you could do better, go more in-depth with his childhood. Who taught him, why. Was his tribe in Aegis or Asulon.

-You did not follow what the previous app team member said, you need to add more to your open-response questions.

You need more detail in your open reponse questions. Tell more than your character's initial reaction, including dialogue and details of combat. You need to really explain the scenario and follow it to its end.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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