Marshal

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:xXPr0xSn1pesXx

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:PST Pacific Standard Time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:In real life my name is conner. I play minecraft a lot 3-5 hours a day. I would say I'm smart for my age, I sure make good choices.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:2-5 hours a day, 10-15 a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I am new to Roleplaying. I know that you play as another charactor, usually not in modern times.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Not much i used to play on another server a long time ago, but i did not stay very long. I didnt like the feel

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:I'm sorry i don't know what that is

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Also don't know what that is

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be one of the best Roleplaying servers I've seen, it looks to be so. The videos I've seen show great admins, good community, and a very well thought out server

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on Mel-Lenxia a long time ago. I left becuase i no longer have my old account so i don't want to really go back.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes

How did you hear about us?: Google and looked up more on youtube

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: No but i can if i feel this server diserves it in game.

In-Character:

Character Name: Marshal

What Race are you?: Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Hello, my name is Marshal. I am a traveler from the world of Mel-Lenxia. It was tough times there. Food ran short, and I found myself feeling sick. I then heard of an unknown world in the far distance. I felt very weiry of leaving the fellows i met here in Mel-Lenxia. The journey will be long, but i can do it. I am strong and cunning. This will be the challenge of my life, but I can do it.

The journey be very hard so far. I have fought many monsters i have never seen before. One had 8 legs, and spit a strange material on me. It was sticky and made it hard to draw my blade, but I did it. Killed that being and was on my way. I will be in this new world in a few days. I can almost feel it.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Become a well know merchant

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): How for the getting of the food

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Farming,Fighting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:None

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Ello good sirs what might you be doing that for it is un needed. *Trys to talk it out* *if Fails* Try to save the halfling from certain death

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

What have you be doing behind that stall? Might i suggest i better area to be selling your wares?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I might want to leave a sign here to alert the residents if they happen to come back. If not i will talk to someone of higher standard to assist me.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Thank them for their kindness with whatever I can,ask them for directions to the nearest town, and be on my way.

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Why did I deny you?

Fix the formatting, it's way too hard to read.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

An FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

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