Wazapdude's Application #2

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Minecraft Account Name: wazapdude

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes I have a very good grip on the English language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a very mature person. I have a respect for authority. I work well in teams and small groups.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I would say around 20-30 hours due to school , homework , most hours will be clocked on the weekend.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is putting yourself in the shoes of character and living that life.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have clocked 50 hours on Garry’s mod RP servers.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta gameing is using outside experience or knowledge to influence in game results such as a friend telling you that they are a bandit and when you see them you run away .

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power gaming is when you ignore RP rules and how RP works ex: You murder everyone for no reason just to get their stuff.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I think this server will be amazingly fun to play on due to amount of people playing on it.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played once on a small time server it was not to my likeing.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I agree.

How did you hear about us?: My friend ThanonZi.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes I have voted for you I was voter 4,148

In-Character:

Character Name: Leo Osbur.

What Race are you?: Human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Leo Osbur was born into a family of war. His father ,and brother both joined the military as soon as they were old enough. His father was a high ranking officer and had taught Leo many aspects of war such as flanking, using higher ground, and how to use your sword properly . Sadly his father was shot during a small skirmish between some elfs. Leo’s brother had always tried being better than Leo. He tried everything even trying to best him at swordsmanship but he was never able to beat him. One day he got too cocky and tried to best him by killing more bandits than he did but he went too far into an encampment and got himself killed. This was an unfortunate tale but it was not the end his mother was harvesting some crops one day when a small raiding party of bandits killed his mother while he was out hunting. Although all his family had died due to war he was determined to make his mark in life to by becoming a mercenary. Although all of Leo’s family has been killed in war; He believes that there is no greater calling than fighting for your beliefs. Although money has the strongest influence on him.

He has spent his whole life trying to be better fighter. He is 18 years of age and clean shaven. He always tries to work with team mates and fellow soldiers. H has tried to farm, chop lumber, and farm animals but he has little patience for it and favours the quick action of a sword fight. After he is done fighting he likes to come home to a neat and organized home. He has always wanted to join a group for good but could never find one he truly liked.

What are your Character’s ambitions?

Leos ambitions are to become a skilled mercenary, and to make his mark.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (Sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc.):

Leo’s favorite tool is the sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Flanking the enemy and using his sword combat.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

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Other Information about your Character: None.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:

Other peoples problems are not my own for all I know he could have promised money but never paid it. Perhaps he could have taken some things without paying

*Leo listens to the conversation*

*Leo realises it is nothing to worry about*

*Leo walks away*

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well-dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response:

Leo: Hail good sir I am looking for swords and armour for my adventures.

Seller: Hail. I have a very fine stock of many things that may interest you.

Leo: Do you have any iron swords or iron armour?

Seller: Why yes I do. It’ll be 200 minas for iron boots , 400 minas for the pants, 500 minas for the chest plate , 250 minas for a sword , and 200 minas for the helmet.

Leo: I appreciate you telling me your prices but they are too high for my wage I’m sorry I will have to go elsewhere.

Seller: Alrighty then see you when I do.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

*Leo appreciates the fine crafts man ship of the golden sword but does not take it because it would go against his morals*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:

*Leo walks up to the greeter*

Leo: Hello good sir Do you have any food for sale?

Greeter: Why yes I do!

Leo: May I purchase some bread?

Greeter: That`ll be 4 minas please.

Leo: Here you go sir.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?:

*Leo walks up to the guard*

Leo: Hail

Guard: Hail

Leo: How much minas for the elimination of the bandits?

Guard : Around three fifty minas for the whole group.

Leo: I shall assist in the elimination of the bandits !

Guard: Let me assemble the others and we shall go.

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Why did I deny you?

Your ORQs somewhat lacked detail, your skin was NOT in the correct format and you answered some important questions incorrectly.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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