Ventus2's 5Th Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: ventus2

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: (GMT-05:00) Eastern Time (US & Canada)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Not really I’m actually Croatian and I came to Canada when I was in grade 4. I still try my best.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am fairly good at drawing and go to high school and am trying to graduate and am thinking of having a career in animation.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 20-50 hours or more

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is when a person makes a character and breaths life in to that character. He makes a story and does what the character would do in that situation.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I play some W.o.W and many mmo’s like mabanogi, maplestory. I was also on a role playing minecraft server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is when a person takes something OOC and puts it IC. Example: You heard coordinates on Teamspeak out of character and you use the coordinates in character, when you were not supposed to know them.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-gaming is when someone does something which is unrealistic and gives the other person no chance to respond, like person a kills person in an instant without giving the other person or character a chance to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be a really good server were people actually role-play.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I was on a server that was a survival server I was banned because there was a glitch were you press f6 you float in the air. I did not know what was going because I did not know I did press f6 so they told me to press f6 and I did but shortly after, they banned me for flying, so it was just a mistake. Never cared for the server so I never tried to get un-banned. I was also banned just recently for half cutting trees but most of the other players were also banned for the same reason and most of the trees were already half cut anyway. Right now I am trying to get un-banned. I was also on a wasteland server and left because it shut down. These are the only servers worth talking about.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes I have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do

How did you hear about us?: From my friend on your server who said it was endless fun.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Not yet I want to see what it’s like before I vote.

In-Character:

Character Name: Akutare Flame-Bringer

What Race are you?: Dark-Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Dark-Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I am Akutare Flame-bringer I am a 15 year old dark elf with grey skin and unnatural purple eyes. I wear my goggles and a dark black tunic since I don’t have many clothes to change into. I travel the world in search of 2 things, my lost friend and my father. My father was an elven soldier, I don’t really remember my dad, he was drafted off to war, when I was only 2 years old, my mom told me so, she would always talk about him, when they were both young and in love, she would always say that my dad was a very skilled swordsman and had a lot of honor in his heart, honor that was not seen in many elves, my dad teached my mom how to wield a sword properly and with that knowledge my mom trained me to be as good of a swordsman as my father. Oh how I wish I had met my father. I bet he had armor from the fiercest beast’s leather, beasts he had to slay on his own…My mom told me my dad was a hero, and he was a hero because he went to war. My mom told me he was dead by now. When I heard that, it left a cold felling in my heart all I wanted to do was train and get stronger so the next time I see my dad he could be proud of me. I knew deep down that somewhere he had to be alive.

After some time when I was 9, I had a dream…It was a very strange dream, lying on the floor, unable to move then in the distance I saw a hand coming towards me I reached for it and put my hand into the hand, there was a warm feeling inside my heart, like I knew this person, he suddenly showed his face and I knew then he was my father, I could tell because of the resemblance. "mom told me you died, I know you didn’t, where did you go"? He looked at me with a warm smile he said in a mystic voice that I shall not forget “Go to the city of Malinor there will be your first task and the beginning of your journey. And he left in a puff of smoke, I woke up, my mom was calling me downstairs for breakfast, me and my mom talked about it over breakfast. My mom said “So your planning on leaving the house?”, “Yes mother I must adventure I am not a kid anymore am 9 I can wield a small Iron sword by myself.”, “Il make you a deal we will both go out into the wilderness and we will train your agility and mastery of swords, when you prove to me you can take care of your own I will let you go to Malinor.”, “Alright let’s do it!”, “Ok, when you finish breaking fast you go upstairs and pack your most important things, because tomorrow morning we leave.”, I finished eating fast and packed my things. I brought the iron sword my mom said my dad practiced with, my short bow and wood arrows, I ran downstairs, put some food in a sack, and told my mom I was ready to go.

Four years have passed since I started training I am in my final task. I have killed boars with my fists; I have slain spiders and quickly jumped on to trees to shoot my arrows. And this was it, the test where I could call myself a man grown. My mom wanted me to survive for 3 days without food or any of my materials. This last test was no problem at all for me. 3 days have passed and no problem. I made myself a tent, got plenty of food for at least a week, and have enough fresh water for a week also. My mom came to check up on what I had done. When she came her face filled up with joy, she seemed so proud, yet she knew that meant she had to let go of me…when she realized this she was really sad you could see her face expression changing dramatically. I felt sad too I had to leave…but I knew I had to do it. For my father.

When I arrived Malinor I had to find somewhere to sleep. I ended up sleeping in the streets since I had no money to stay in an Inn. At night I would sneak through the guards and go to the training grounds to train by myself. I stayed here training and sparing with some soldiers when they had time, I did this sort of routine for about a year until I met someone who changed my life. I met him while I was in the training grounds, it was a pale faced man with black robes and blue eyes, those blue eyes that pierced right through my soul when I looked at them. The man said coldly “Hey kid, wanna spar?” “I am not a kid I am 14 almost a man grown!” “I don’t care get a wooden sword and we will see who wins” Our fight lasted for hours until it seemed he was too tired to fight, but when I thought I had him the fatigue catched on to me too and I collapsed. After this we became good friends he gave me some money so I could sleep in the Inn for a long time. One night he left and I never saw him again. Right after he left I thought to myself, maybe this was the test my dad was talking about. I must venture out to find him too he might know something I don’t or it could just have been coincidence nevertheless he is my friend and I want to see him again.

I have a very innocent heart and even if I am being mistreated I am very forgiving. I don’t care for wealth only care for my friends and family, people who only care about is wealth sicken me.

What is your Character's ambitions?: He wants to find his father and his lost friend. Both which mean the world to him. I travel the world in search for adventure and the thrill.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (Sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): I love swords they are what have kept me training all the time, their brilliance, when iron or steel clank against each other make such ….music. When I wield a sword it doesn’t feel like a weapon it feels like an extension to your arm, something that has been there your entire life, it is this feeling that really keeps me training.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Akutare is very good with swords but he is exceptionally good at dodging hits and counterattacking them every single hit he takes he makes sure the enemy feels the pain too he uses the space well and his attacks are graceful yet fierce.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: He has intentions of joining a guild that he can stay in for he will have no other way of getting food and sleeping over night.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Akutare charges in to battle for there might be no time to think, he charges from behind one of the warriors, and quickly stabs his sword in to the man’s back leaving him heavily injured and not being able to fight. The other warrior quickly turns around in a attempt to stab his sword in to my body I quickly block the sword with mine. A clash is made; I knew only the strongest would win so I quickly take a back step. The warrior’s sword is stuck slashing at the ground. With all my strength I make a side step and slash the warrior’s legs making him inmovalized. Then I looked at the Halfling and took him down the road to Mailnor where I told him "Sorry you had to see that I will bring you to an inn were you can rest" when we arrived I brought the Halfling to the inn so he could rest. Then I went on my way to find my father.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I look at the man and say "Yes I hear you sell stuff cheap here don’t you"? The man replies "well of course Alras is supposed to be a utopia with affordable living and cheap shops". I reply with "I see ill take your finest blade" the man gives Akutare the finest blade he has, Akutare pays the man says thanks and continues his journey in Alras.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Akutare takes the iron bars and makes armor with them, as much armor as he can. he tries to make a chest plate which would give him the most protection. A man comes behind me and says “Halt! This is my home. Leave now and I won’t hurt you”, “You need to do some cleaning up around here, look at all these spiderwebs”, “How dare you judge me!?”, “Easy, let’s not rush into anything. Here have the chest plate, and il help you clean up”, “Really? Thank you”, “My pleasure”. I help the man clean up his hut and then leave.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Akutare says “Please, please give me some food and if you could be so kind to lead me to the closest city.” Someone walks up to him, a rather old man with skin like leather, “Ah a visitor, I will give you a map and plenty of food and water only for the price of 200 Midas”, “200 Midas is too much!!” then man says "Allright ill give it to you for 100 Midas" Akutare pays the man and trys to make his way out of the wild.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guards have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?: Akutare goes up to the guards and says "I will gladly help you, I hate bandits…those good for nothing thieves.” I go into the fight, everyone is fighting someone, when I see my target I rapidly point my sword forwards and charge at the man who still does not know of my presence. The man blocks my attack with his sword but I still injured his shoulder. I look into the man’s eyes; he has fear in them I can’t stand to kill someone who is this afraid. While the man is trying to relieve his pain, I charge once more, this time I quickly dash to the side and slash one of his legs immobilizing him, then the bandits life was about to end, even he knew it. I came up to the man but instead of killing him I stretched out my arm and helped him up. The man in shock of what just happened was not able to speak. I took him back to town where I put some bandages in all his wounds. Everyone told me to kill him but the man told me he was forced to be in the fight, he never wanted to be a bandit, he was forced. I knew keeping him alive was the right thing to do. he wasn’t part of the common rabble of bandits.

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Rp definition is very lacking

W.O.W. mabinogi, and maplestory are not examples of actual Role-Playing

Your bio includes very little lore, unrealistic circumstances, powergaming, and goggles are non-rp

I am/We will be more strict with your application having been banned from multiple servers, though we do appreciate your honesty in telling us that, but we do not tolerate any hacking whatsoever, and absolutely no floating trees.

Because you were banned for such reasons and your rp definition is lacking as well, on your next app I want you to answer an additional question.

It happens occasionally that someone leaves a floating tree, (they usually get warned, or banned depending on how many times once found), but since we are a full RP server, how would you RP seeing a floating tree on your journey?

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