How My Former Character Abaddon Was Killed

[JustinMc98 (Morte) 8]

I wrote this to explain my former character's death. Native suggested it and I was bored, so I wrote it.

Abaddon’s death was slow and painful. He was walking down the path towards Solace. When he saw a couple of Orcs beating a small elf child. Disgusted by what he saw he walked up behind one of the Orcs and hit him in the back with his sword. It barely made a dent on the Orc’s diamond armor. The Orc turned around and hit him upside the head with the butt of his sword. Abaddon fell to the ground and the other Orc picked him up by the throat and slammed him into the ground knocking him unconscious. The Orcs turned around and the child was gone. They picked Abaddon up and took him to their home deep into the wilds.

When Abaddon awoke he was in a cell. It was covered in blood and dismembered body parts had been strewn everywhere. One of the Orcs came into the room and said, “ You made us lose our food so now you will be our food.”(Don’t know how to talk like an Orc so I didn’t even try). The Orc walked to a lever on the wall. It was then that Abaddon realized the cell floors had been made of Netherrack. Abaddon sat down on the floor and welcomed death as he knew it was inevitable.

The Orc gripped onto the lever with a wide grin on his face. He grunted as he pulled the lever down causing the Netherrack to combust. Abaddon was unable to stop himself from

screaming in pain. While Abaddon burned the Orc laughed. Before Abaddon could die the orc pulled another lever that put enough water in the room to get rid of the fire.

The Orc pulled Abaddon out of the cell and into another room. The other Orc came into the room. They proceeded to shackle him the a table. The second Orc pulled out a large dagger and began cutting into Abaddon’s stomach. Unable to move Abaddon could only scream in agony as the Orc ripped his flesh off. Abaddon cried in pain as the Orc started to cut his skin over his entire body. All the while the Orcs laughter echoed in the empty room.

Abaddon was no longer able to scream. He was almost dead and couldn’t feel it any longer as his body was numb. The Orc saw that he wouldn’t get any more pleasure out of torturing Abaddon and frowned. His stomach rumbled as he remembered why they kidnapped Abaddon. The Orc smiled and reached his hand into the hole in Abaddon’s stomach. He moved his hand toward Abaddon’s heart and grasped it. Abaddon gasped but didn’t scream. The Orc slowly ripped Abaddon’s heart out of his chest.Abaddon’s body was then eaten by the Orcs.

Not long afterwards the Orcs were killed by a several townspeople that witnessed the Orcs performing cannibalism. Their corpses were burnt on a stake in the center of the town.

If you thought I did a good/bad job in writing this please tell me as I am trying to improve my writing skills for when I , hopefully, write a BIG biography on my new character.

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