Godfrey0 1 Share Posted March 24, 2012 MC Username: godfrey0 Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread:( My characters role play name is Kai'Segatarus Character Skillset: Archery-41 Swords-67 Blacksmithing-43 Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender:( Age: 23 Gender: Male Subrace: Kha'tigrasi Appearance: Check the skin section Personality: Kai'Segatarus or Segatarus for short, is an arrogant character, though loyal and kind hearted to his kin, he is quick to anger, Segatarus is more a brute than a brainiac, learning things that do not involve hunting and killing to Kai'Segatarus are normally stupid to him. Segatarus is a dedicated follower of Mother Metztli and would never betray her, being a Kha'tigrasi to Segatarus is like being a god to him, he feels inferior towards other races, especially Dwarves, and despises other races as he knows little of them, and does not wish to learn much more, unless it involves how to kill them faster and without as much of an effort. Being a hunter, Segatarus wants to be a warrior, a hunter and protector of his land. Please include a short bio of your character's life: Segatarus was raised among the wilderness of Asulon, his younger years were simple, gathering for his family, though the largest of his siblings, he still had to do the same chores as them. Later he became less recognised by his parents as he had many younger brothers and sisters, but he still had the hardest work, after he turned 13 his parents told him that when his siblings were out gathering he could start to hunt some of the wild animals around with his older brother. As this happened he proved to be a better hunter than his older brother, and soon his brother became jealous as his parents would offer him even more food for getting bigger catches and kills, later his father got him to go hunting with him at night, though this proved much less useful than day as Segatarus's coat was easily visible in the forest. As Segatarus started to go properly hunting his brother became even more jealous and at one point told him to back off, and that his father was supposed to call him to hunt in the night. Segatarus felt threatened by this, but carried on. Learning and hunting became a new habit for Segatarus and he enjoyed it, but soon after Segatarus yearned for a challenge, a test to prove himself he was ready to leave his den... After some years Segatarus had to go hunting with his younger brothers and sisters and teach them with his older brother, he started to feel he was being used by his parents, so they would not have to leave the de in order to train their young. As time went by Segatarus became more arrogant, his older brother had already left the den and he was next in line, but he still hungered for satisfaction, a challenge so he went to his father and told him he needs to fight something stronger, something harder...an ape. His father told him that is nonsense, apes live a too far away, that if he were to ever fight one he would have to travel for days, weeks, but Segatarus told his father he had seen an ape, it lived in a lodge, not very far away, he had seen it while he was hunting, but never came closer than at least 100 feet. His father continued to deny Segatarus, he knew it would not work to keep asking his father, he wanted to kill it, but his father just sent to go hunting alone day after day. Except one day, when he was carrying his kill back home, he saw smoke rising from the East, no where near his home, so he neared it only to find it was an ape sitting outside of it's lodge drinking some strange drink, as Segatarus knew what his father would do he went to walk away when the ape stood up and shouted "Ey' boys! Looks like we got ourselves a tiger! Wait no, thats no'a tiger, whatever it is kill it!" As this happened Segatarus drew his blade and pointed it at the people, they all drew nets and spears and ran at Segatarus, Segatarus knew he could not take them all on, so he dropped his kill and jumped up into the trees jumping from canopy to canopy. The people threw their spears and Segatarus only just dodged them, until he reached a clearing, he had nowhere to jump to but the hardened dirt below him, the people surrounded his tree and began to try and chop the tree down with small hand axes, Segatarus saw that his den was not too far away, but he knew he could not risk his Siblings's lives, so he leaped down from the tree and ran in the opposite direction throwing his remaining javalins at the people, he wounded two of them, as he began to outrun them they started trowing nets with weights on the corners, Segatarus was only just fast enough but as the people threw one last net using 4 people to throw it, the net grasped around Segatarus's leg and he fell flat on the ground, Segatarus roared in anger showing his fangs at the oncoming people, but they just found it strange and pointed their sharpened sticks and spears at Segatarus. At this point he knew he was done for, the apes tried to pick him up, but he was much to big for them, so they threw more nets around him and dragged him a couple of feet until they heard many roars in the distance, similar to the one of Segatarus's, they drew ever closer until the trees around them started to rattle vigorously, out came Segatarus's older brother with javalins ready to be thrown, and next came two of his younger brothers heaving blades that were only a bit to big for them and then came his father holding his blade ferm and steady. The people stoof there holding up their weapons, but were in a state of shock, "where have these beasts come from?" the people muttered, "What ar'they?" others shouted, but Segatarus's kin just circled the group, the people though they would be no match, outnumbered 20 to 5, but they were wrong, as Segatarus's family began growling more roars came from the distance, many more than before, "T'is more of these demonic beasts! I 'aint losin' m'life t'day boys, see'ya!" Some of the people stood their ground but as the roars got even closer and in greater numbers they fled in horror. Suddenly Kha'tigrasi emerged from the surrounding forest, Segatarus did not know any of them, they were strangers to him, but his father said, "We are brothers in arms, family, we know each others cries. Come Segatarus, my son, let us go home, and thank you brothers for aiding my family, for that I can not thank you enough" Segatarus's father spoke in a deep, rich voice that tainted the air with his mark. Segatarus did not feel the same hunger he once did, for a challenge. Character's ambitions: To show himself worthy in the ranks of the Kharajyr, to become a hunter, a warrior. To prove that he is a true spirited Kha'tigrasi, and that he is ever more loyal, and proud to be what he is. He also wished to show the true might of his kind, his brothers and show the world of Asulon that the Kharajyr are a force to be reckoned with! _---Situational Rp Questions---_ 1. As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?: Firstly I would observe the strage creature and decide whether it is a threat to my people or not, if it were a great scout of sorts I would draw my sword and say "What is your business here? Ape! Get out of my lands before a slice you up!" But if it was a helpless ape I would tell him he must begone! And say "Why are you here? You should never pass on my peoples lands, begone before you regret your decision to stay, if you require water, there are streams about, but beware. Tainting our water with your dirty mouths will not go well in this society. Leave!" And I would point him to the direction to get out and also point him to the direction of the closest stream. 2. As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak. "Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!" He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?: My character would try and act as normal as possible to start off and I would say-"No wonder you dwarves live in caves, because everyone hates listening to you idiots ramble on about your stupid habits and addictions. You make me sick, I think you'd be better off drinking that milk, by the looks of you, you'd better start eating healthier before you have a heart attack." Then I would look away and go on with my business until he rambles on again, then I would say-"Are you really looking for a fight? If anything someone could hit you with an arrow from miles away by the size of you, I would stop laughing at other people when people are laughing at you, good luck finding a girl with that belly of yours." Then I would go back to my own business. 3. One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response? I would tell him that he must leave this place immediately, to leave the jungles, that there is no place for betrayal in these lands! Then i would tell him "If you wish to live, you'd best be leaving, and never coming back, the betrayal of your own kind goes harshly, now get out of my sight!" Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? I swear to upheld these commands, with my life. Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin Extra bit: I know my character needs to be a bit stupid and speak with an accent of sorts but I will do in game not in my app so you can read it much more precisely. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wretched 2075 Share Posted March 24, 2012 The apps are currently closed. This is explained in the 2 pinned topics in the application subforum. Here is the first announcement. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/47884-warning/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wretched 2075 Share Posted March 25, 2012 DENIED. All in all a good app. But it needs a few adjustments, Your character is 23 and you say that he was raised in Asulon, this does not fit the lore as we have only recently arrived in Asulon, and we have not been here for 23 years... Your bio is impressive and I can't see much that needs to be added, but you could give more detail on your character rather than a story of a situation your character has been in. And I think you have misunderstood the Situational RP questions. You need to write it as if you are in character, Don't give possible outcomes, just carry on the scene as if you were this Kharajyr. Do not include things like "My character would try and act as normal as possible to start off and I would say" You wouldn't say this in an RP event would you. And the last question could be extended. Edit this post and I or another KAT member will view it again. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godfrey0 1 Author Share Posted March 26, 2012 Ok thanks a lot, just a quick question though, could I just make these adjustments and leave the rest as is? Thanks for your time. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wretched 2075 Share Posted March 26, 2012 Yes of course. Only edit the bits I have mentioned. Or anything else that you think may improve your chances. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Praetor 1550 Share Posted March 26, 2012 He made a second app today. Which I also denied. Knowledge of the apes is anti-lore http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/48202-godfrey0s-application-redone/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wretched 2075 Share Posted March 26, 2012 Ah yes, thanks for pointing that out Spamshock. And please, in future just edit the same post, don't post another. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princeton 396 Share Posted October 11, 2013 Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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