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MC Username:

Recklez

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):

Si'Galandra

Character Skillset:

I dont really know what is ment with this question, but if you mean my skills.

100 Axe fighting, 100 lumberjacking, 75 blacksmithing.

But, il delevel them all soon as my character is not a fighter.

I kind off want her skills to evolve in roleplay so I am not entirely sure what her skillset is going to be and what profesion she is going to be.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

17, Kha'Panthera, Female'

She has light gray fur, she is 5,7 feet tall, and lightly muscled.

She wears slobby clothes and walks a little "nobleish"

She looks happy, but is always hold back and very shy.

You rarely start a good conversationship with her, as she then tries to avoid it and get away.

Personality:

A strong, healthy but not very self confident Panthera female.

She thinks very high of herself, but weaknesses are fast to find in her.

As example: If someone tells her she is ugly and stupid over and over again, she starts to belief it and get very depressed, she thinks of herself as someone who would walk after the higher ups to be acknowledged. She is also very shy and tender.

She doesnt like to be in big crowds, being alone makes her feel alot more safe.

She also wants to be loved, because she never got many love.

If she gets judged unfairly, she will get really mad as she is always being very honorable and trustworthy, so if someone tells her differently, she will get very upset.

She is also very soft and carefull, but gets hurt fairly fast.

If she isnt able to help someone she gets sad about it, and sometimes start crying.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Si'Galandra'xa was born in a poor family, they always tried to survive and had just enough to afford food every week, her youth was horrible, she always got picked on because her fur was very light. They always called her greyskin and mutant only because she was different then the others.

Her skin was light grey, not white but light grey. Her mother Xulandraza'xa acting like she was noble telling her she was an abomination. Her father Gurunda'xa was always treating her good, het best friend was her father as she never got any friends or attention from anybody else, everybody ignored her and picked on her.

She even got beaten up by the girls in her class sometimes.

Her youth was rough, every night she cried herself to sleep and she never wanted to go outside.

Until one day, that her father and mother got into a fight.

Her mother was being really mean and rude against father, like always... and he was fed up with what she said, something snapt inside of him and he charged at my mother. I started screaming, running to my room and hiding under my blanket, because that was my save spot.

I could hear my mother screaming in the other room, and my father roaring. when it was all over, I heard footsteps of my father coming towards me. I was terrified, begging Metztli to spare me.

My father slowly pulled the blanket away, he was bloodied all over but not of his own blood, he kissed me on the forhead and left. I was crying for 2 days straight until the guards thought something serious happened and they took my mother and burried her, from that point I never saw my father again.

From then I took care of myself, worked for a noble female who helpt me alot through these rough times. her name was S'Guwonda and that is a name I will never forget, as she always cared for me when I was all alone. I lived alone in an other house, smaller then the previous one because I couldn't pay the rents. But it was fine, it was a cozy house and big enough for one person.

For 3 years long I worked for S'Guwonda, cleaning her house every day.

When I turned 17, I told S'Guwonda that I wanted to stop working, and get a proffesion, as I am now at an age were I should have a real job. She was fine with it and wished me best of luck.

And that is where the tale of Si'Galandra.

Character's ambitions:

She wants to be accepted, and when she ever get married she wants to be a good mom. Better then her mother. She also wants to find her dad, but she is not sure how to do that. She wants to see more of the world, travel far and meet all other races as her father always told her many stories about the other races she never saw before, she would be excited to meet them.

She also wants to become a higher noble, as her mother was also so obsessed by it.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

She would walk away slowly, backing off and looking around if it is somekind of ambush.

"W-who are you? W-.. what do you want from me?"

As he begins begging for food, she sighs and smiles giving the olds man some bread she carried with her "I hope that is enough for an ape, I dont have more..."

She twingles her tail around in excitment, being happy she helped someone but if he asks for shelter she has to say no. "Sorry! Apes like you arent welcome in our capital..."

She would have to turn him down, and she would start to cry softly as she sees the poor man walk away.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

She would tell him to stop being racist, and tell him to just talk normally.

The dwarf replies "Oi, ye' just a fawkin' cat! Dun't talk so 'igh against meh!"

She will get really angry, and trying to intimidate the dwarf.

"Shut up stupid missformed little ape! I can skin you right here!"

If he would still insult her she would try to ignore him, but then run away out of the inn and go home as fast as she can, she would go inside of her house and cry.

When she sees the dwarf the next day, she would ask an other Kharajyr to beat him up for her as she still wants to take revenge on him, but she self is fairly weak.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

She would be shocked, and she wouldn't know what to do. First she would ask him what exactly happen "What have you done?! Why would you do that?" And ask him if he is being followed by someone. if he needs to get out of the city she would help him escape, but if it is too dangerous she would say she never knew him, as she gets scared and intimidated very fast.

But if he gets followed she wouldnt be able to help him "I am sorry, but you have to turn yourself in.." She would try to explain to the guards that it was an accident, but if they still take him away she wouldn't be able to help him, as she will probably be shaking on her knees.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

Yes, Galandra'xa swears to follow the law of Tlatlanni, and holds Metztli and all her actions sacred

Link of skin > 5pqin.png The skin is alot darker then before :3

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DENIED

While when I saw "Recklez" I went Omygawsh he's back! :D

I can't accept this app :/.

Reasons:

Your Panthera is 7ft tall, much higher than any Panthera should be.

You also say you are a Tigrasi, so I don't know which one you are.

Your Bio is a bit short, and lacks detail, try expanding on it ;).

In the open questions, you talk like this "She would", what you should do is describe it as a story, not from your points of view, likes this "Galandra looks at the dwarf in shock, saying in a trembling voice "Stop being so mean!"" Tell a story! ;)

Your character does not have a prefix, such as S'Galandra or something of the sort, look it up!

You have a skillset at very high axes, and such things that go against your char, change that too ;), though If it is from your old char, it is fine, as long as you slowly delevel these skills in favour of Character-like skill.

Good luck! Re-apply in 24 hours, Get accepted or I'l eat your entrails!<3

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May I also point out, that your skin is white-ish. Please do change. (sorry for posting KAT, just thought it post that)

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May I also point out, that your skin is white-ish. Please do change. (sorry for posting KAT, just thought it post that)

Just saying "sorry" each time you post on an app won't cut it. Don't do it, if you have something to say about an app, pm us about it.

Though the point is valid, please darken it too Reck ;)

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DENIED

While when I saw "Recklez" I went Omygawsh he's back! :D

I can't accept this app :/.

Reasons:

Your Panthera is 7ft tall, much higher than any Panthera should be.

You also say you are a Tigrasi, so I don't know which one you are.

Your Bio is a bit short, and lacks detail, try expanding on it ;).

In the open questions, you talk like this "She would", what you should do is describe it as a story, not from your points of view, likes this "Galandra looks at the dwarf in shock, saying in a trembling voice "Stop being so mean!"" Tell a story! ;)

Your character does not have a prefix, such as S'Galandra or something of the sort, look it up!

You have a skillset at very high axes, and such things that go against your char, change that too ;), though If it is from your old char, it is fine, as long as you slowly delevel these skills in favour of Character-like skill.

Good luck! Re-apply in 24 hours, Get accepted or I'l eat your entrails!<3

Sorry ;-; it was 5 am and I was derping XD

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Upon special circumstances, concerning exams, and the pending removal of your PC, I will judge it now.

ACCEPTED

Though be careful of two small things:

-I'm not sure there were clases in the Kha' lands.

-You don't know what a "ape" is, so you don't call him ape.

PS: You owe me a beer for this one. Remember to darken your skin some.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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