Bawd 222 Share Posted April 4, 2012 MC Username: Pengepi Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Kitten Raanar Character Skillset: Swords: 28 Fishing: 7 Archery: 25 Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): 11-Year-Old Kha'Pantera Male Personality: Easily angered, fear of axes, and obsessed with female Kharajyr. Please include a short bio of your character's life: At birth, Raanar was orphaned. He walked the streets alone, as he still does, and got in many fights. Once he was attacked by an axe-wielding Kha'Tigrasi, and he still carries a long scar down his face from the tragic event. The Tigrasi Raanar was walking, begging for donations of food. He walked toward a muscular-looking Kha'Tigrasi, asking for a donation. "You want food? How do you like stone?" The Tigrasi brought a large stone axe down on Raanar's forehead, leaving a long scar, as well as unconsciousness. Waking Up Raanar woke up, still laying in the streets. The place was empty, and he was hungry and alone. He continued his search for food, scrambling to his feet. He finds a puddle, in which he looks at his reflection, finding a long, pink scar running over his right eye. We Meet Again As Raanar walked, he saw a familiar figure. The Kha'Tigrasi was holding a sword, staring right at him. Raanar tried to walk away, stepping on a twig. The Tigrasi turned. "You again..." Raanar stands slowly, the Tigrasi charging at him, the sword aimed for his head. Raanar ducks to the side, the sword catching his ear. He now wears an iron ring in that ear, as jewellery. Explanations "Who are you?" Raanar asked the large Tigrasi. "And what do you want with me?" The Tigrasi looked at Raanar, and spoke quietly. "Your mother abandoned me for that... that idiot, your father... I killed them both for it." The Tigrasi smiled evilly, as Raanar runs away, crying quietly. Raanar continues to wander alone to this day. Character's ambitions: Raanar wants to survive. He wants food, and a place to sleep occasionally. Anything bigger seems too much to him. Food and sleep are all that matter for now. _---Situational Rp Questions---_ 1. As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?: Raanar looks at the human, unsure what it is. He pokes it. Raanar shakes his head, as if to say "No food, nothing.". Raanar walks away, uninterested in the strange creature. 2. As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak. "Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!" He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?: Raanar feels very offended, and pulls his sword from his back, growling gently. Raanar glares at the Dwarf. "How do you like the feel of iron, small man?" Raanar has quite clearly offended the Dwarf, who draws his weapon. Raanar steps toward the Dwarf, before the people in the tavern attempt to break up the fight. Raanar sheathes his weapon, bares his teeth, growls, and leaves. 3. One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response? "You have betrayed the Kharajyr and disgraced them. You have no honour." Raanar calls for a guard and slams the door on the traitor. Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? Yes. Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Praetor 1550 Share Posted April 4, 2012 DENIED Expand HUGELY on your personality, and appearance, I mean way more...like 15 times more. You bio is too short, and doesn't really describe his life well. Add detail, alot. Your open questions are hugely lacking, and you need at least 7 lines. Details of what is happening, what they say, etc... Also, you char is 11, while I disagree with you being a pervert, he should by more shy. He can not use an iron sword, for he would be severely lacking in skill and strength. ONce again, your char should be shy, as he is a kitten. But I have to tell you, we won't be really accepting any kittens ATM, because we have to many. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princeton 396 Share Posted October 11, 2013 Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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