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Minecraft Account Name: Dontbepissed

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in the Eastern Standard time zone. My country is the United States of America.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, english is my native language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love to play computer games such as minecraft, World of Warcraft, and Overlord. I like to listen to Metal, and some Dubstep.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can be on the server about 3 to 4 hours a day, 4 to 5 days a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role playing is acting out another character as if it were yourself.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have role played on World of Synthesia, and Overture 4.5.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is knowing something your character does not know. EX: Your irl friend tells you he has the location to a camp that is undefended. You can not just show up there instantly saying "Hey I just randomly got the location from my head." This is metagaming because a player IN-GAME cannot take things he/she knows OUT OF GAME and use it IN-GAME.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: When you Roleplay something that may be impossible to do, or leaving

another player no chance to make a come back. EX: You are walking on a dirt path to your village, suddenly a theif jumps from the trees and head locks you. He then pulls out his dagger and slits your throat. This is powergaming because he gave the other player no time to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be friendly, creative, and very open.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play on World of Synthesia but I have not left yet.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have read all the rules about this server and agree with them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I promise to abide by all said rules and laws on this server or any other site/program about this server.

How did you hear about us?: Quixoticelixerr, and TMGMaXdAmAgE told me that I should apply for it being a good server to play on.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/49313-dontbepisseds-app/

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/): No

In-Character:

Character Name: Bradash (No last name for I have left my clan to become a sellsword, upon returning I should receive one)

What Race are you?: Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Bradash was born in the town called Sanjezal, in the nation of The War Uzg. Sanjezal, like all orcish towns, was in the desert. The sand was hot and the sun even hotter, but Bradash was an orc. He was made for this; his very skin was described as leather. Bradash's hut was small and cramped. You could see many patched holes and some mold growing in the corner, though his father did not care much for looks he was all about war.

Bradash's father, Vorg, was unable to join the Krughai for he was physically handicapped. Therefore he tried his hardest to sculpt his son into the form of his perfect vision. Vorg wished his son to become a blessed warrior, his skills to rival even the gods. Vorg trained Bradash so vigorously he would climb into his flee-ridden bed and collapse, his muscles not moving an inch. Every morning he would break his fast with dry beef and runny eggs, all the while groaning.

Bradash donned greasy leather armor with chipped iron bracers, for his father wished him to have strong arms. Next he would grab a heavy wooden training axe scraped and chipped from previous days. The handle was old oak banded with even older leather. The head was dull from countless training lessons. It was of old oak aswell, for it was cheap. Bradash would attack a dummy for several hours. Vorg trained him in many forms, including Beserk, Agressive, and Defensive.

Beserk being Bradash's favorite form was fun to train. He loved the recklessness of it and how his axes would find the target without guiding hands. Vorg called this very thing Warrior Instincts, but told him not rely on it to much. Bradash also knew how dangerous it was, by always keeping his axes spinning it left him seriously unprotected. Bradash would slash left and right, always looking for an unprotected side. Bradash knew Beserk was nothing without strength and if he had a moment's rest, all would be lost.

The Agressive stance was known to Bradash, but he had no real love for it. Vorg always instructed him as if it were pushing the opponent back but keeping his perimeter under control. Bradash did this very thing by using his axe as a weapon and shield. He would attack with the head then slam them with the butt of his axe finally getting ready for another strike. He would use the shaft or cross-guard as a shield to lock up the enemy's weapon or knock it out of his/her grip.

When Bradash is in defensive he allows his fellow brother to attack the enemy. He does things that seem ***** to a normal warrior, such as taunting the enemy to distract them or to simply take the opponent's mind off of the battle itself. He would also move constantly so the enemy was to keep his eyes moving, or be given a certain fate. Bradash knows it is not the common orcish way, but in battle, certain things are needed at certain times. If the tactic works, Bradash and his fellow brother should not be hurt.

After his father died, Bradash was to use his training in real life, so he left the town of Sanjezal and sold himself as a sellsword. He ventured throughout Aegis taking part in massive battles that swayed the acts of nations. Bradash knew his father would be proud, watching him from Krug's Palace. He also knew that he was not making any impact on the orcs. A grevious thought came to him one night after a deadly battle. 'How would I be remembered among my kind if I never saw them, and how will my father be proud if I am never known to my people?' he thought to himself.

What is your Character's ambitions?: My ambition is to join the Krughai, and maybe one day become a Warboss. The only thing I have ever learned was to fight. I was trained in the arts of blood and fire, I feel I would be a key peice to the puzzle.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My favorite tool is the axe but most of my brothers call it the Lusk. I prefer this weapon because it is heavy and cuts through armor and bone as easy as if it were water.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? I have a great vision for any flaws in the enemys defense.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): post-38342-0-31292700-1333592824_thumb.p

Other Information about your Character: I was told this was optional.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Bradash walks away nonchalantly as if he has not seen a thing. 'Everything man should fight his on battle.' he thinks to himself.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Hedo I hungry, lat hab boar meat?" "Yes sir I believe I do, that will cost you ten minas." "Ukee dat sound fair tu me." Bradash exchanges good with the merchant.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Bradash strolls over to the chest and looks inside. "Wow, dat be alut of gud tings!" "Me tink I will take dat." Bradash quickly takes the sword and some of the ingots, then continues on his journey.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

"Hedo, lat hab fud?" "Yes we do, that will cost you twenty minas." "WUD!?! Dat be alut." "Yes we are about to run out." "Ukee... Dis nub be fair but fine."

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Bradash overhears the man talking and walks over to the commotion. "I wull help." "Good you look strong, we need that out there." "Wud I get if we wun." "Minas orc, minas." When the battle commenses Bradash heads right into the fray. Bradash cuts down the first bandit in front of him within seconds. I heard heavy breathing behind me and ducked just in time as the head of a warhammer slammed into my last position. I went into Agressive tirering the man outuntil I could easly cut him from head to toe. When the bandits ran I returned to the city. "Wer my reward?" "Here orc you did good, you saved us." Bradash receives minas and adds it to his sum.

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Your RP definition is very weak and needs to be expanded

Your ORQs should be in full rp with more detail and dialogue

And you need to read more lore....Aegis was destroyed 20+years ago...

You may reapply in 24 hours

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