Fireboy436's 5Th Application

[InterstellarMage 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:fireboy436

How old are you?: I am 13 years of age, I will be 14 in November.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in the western seaboard, in the United States.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have been speaking English my whole life and am pretty fluent, as for grammar, I fix my errors in typing, but when I am mad I overlook the errors

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a fan of computers. I am driven to do any project, whether it’s at the last second or 5 days in advance. I am also great at roleplay, I could roleplay in almost any situation, and almost and sentient being, hek I could try my best to be something NON-sentient.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I could be on every day, as for time, I would be on at about the late afternoon, because of homework.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is putting your mind in an imaginary body you have created, making you act, feel, and talk, even walk or do some minor habits that your character does. You can even kill off your character, you can’t legally kill off yourself in real-life so I think it is a free opportunity to do stuff you couldn’t do in the real world. You can even be something OTHER than a human, there are many “races” in games and RPs, you could be a skeleton, an orc barbarian, or some elf who wants to protect the forests

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have had rich RP and RPG experience and several games that require RP I have done, I know you aren’t looking RPG experience, but I have played a lot, each one I roleplayed often. Most of the time I RP as an orc, if that is not available, I would choose a dwarf. I am glad to know it has RP fighting system is “*attempts to stab” because that is the RP fighting system I grew up with.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: It is where a you find out about in-game knowledge through OOC means, such as if a friend tells you the coordinates to the enemy’s secret base, you can’t just go there and say “I found it on accident”. That would be an example of meta-gaming, another example is if you learn a secret way into the capital city of Oren by OOC means.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: I now know that power-gaming is still a despicable form of roleplaying, but It is where you do something without the other party being able to respond, basically doing the entire battle in one sentence. Such as “Leaps behind you, and puts your hand behind your head so you hurt, twisitng it then pushing you to the ground, forcing you to surrender.” That is basically all I can find out. However, it could also be when you act invincible, too.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be a good server for roleplaying and fighting and a friendly environment. I also expect the admins to be fair and no griefing or rudeness.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on a survival server called "Elutheria" I left it because it did not have any roleplay. I was also on a faction server called “Starcraft” , I left that because it was full of idiots.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read and agree by all the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, I promise to abide and follow the rules and laws.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you while I was searching for a lord of the rings-themed server on YouTube.

Have you previously made an Application? I have made a previous one, that was denied, but I am unsure how to create a link.

In-Character:

Character Name: Morkarth

What Race are you?: Orc

What Sub-Race are you? (Note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Nomad

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Morkarth was a strong, male orc child in that was well treated (all orc children are).His mother was a farmer, and his father was a mercenary, the family lived together in the big city. However his father was usually doing jobs for clients. He has gotten his taste for battle from his father and his gentleness to his own kind from his mother. The elders saw him as a strong, capable warrior. But, when he was 10, his father died by an ambush laid by elven assassins, giving him a hatred for elves. Now, 40 years later. He has become a strong, fit orc. He is at least 8 ft. tall, and at least 55 years of age. Morkarth have a large appetite but is surprisingly fit. He weighs at least 350 pounds, he also has a 6-pack , he prefers to go into battle with a battle axe and light armor.

I think archery and rogue tactics are cowardice. I strongly agree with the saying "Fight first and ask questions later." He is no coward but also no fool. Morkarth will fight nearly any race. However, he will not fight more than 2 enemies alone. When I fight I usually fight with at least 1 person by my side, if that is not available, I would start with a small group then advance on to the rest. He is also, one of the few orcs that are bald. All-in-all, he is a young orc that does not have much experience in battle.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Morkarth wishes to join the War-Uzg and fight alongside fellow orcs against the enemies that lie beyond the desert.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc.): I prefer an axe but I will not hesitate if I have to fistfight.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? I can pick up small boulders and can run pretty fast.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Number of downloads: 0

Other Information about your Character: Hates the idea of sailing, gets sea sick often. Morkarth also knows a scrap of common as well as his orcish tongue. I also think attacking someone when the defender does not have a weapon is complete cowardice He follow orders very well but has very hard trouble controlling himself when he finds an elf, because they killed his father.

Open Response Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? I hate unhonorable killing , I yell “WAAAGH!!!” as a battle cry, then I charge in, attempting to kill the bandits. 1 of them sees my coming then alerts them, they draw out their weapons, I charge in, hoping to break their ranks. Once I charge in, their get split up, I attempt to lob at one, but the defender blocks. Then I kick the other one, damaging him, then I attempt to finish him off. But the other one attempts to save his friend and tries to deflect it. But this time I break his deflect, stammering him. the other one regains his sense and charges in. I get a stab in the side. I kneel to the ground in my pain, they think I am dead, but I attempt to get up, and while they’re surprised I’m still alive. I try to chop one; it makes a deadly gash on his arm. I leap at the other one and try to slices him, however, that stab made me unfocused and instead of chopping off his head, I miss and make a mean-looking gash on his shoulder. Both of them run into the forests and I do a war chant. Then continue my travels, forgetting about the hobbit.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?. I say “Ug, Pinkie, yoer wairs ain’t ‘orthit!” I turn to walk away, but some gleaming spiked gloves catch my attention. The owner says, “Sorry, but those are being held for someone else” I say, “Hew mukh he be paein!?”. The shop owner would say “’bout… 50 minas, they’re just gloves” I put down a stack of 70 minas on the table, and I say “Woz about now?” The Shopkeeper reluctantly agrees and hands them to me and I try them on, un-surprisingly, they’re a little small, since they’re made my humans, I say “Woz!? Dese are teoo small, Iz goenaa have ta change it from dis pinkie size!” Then walk off.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I check to see if any race in particular made it, if it is an orcish, hut, I wouldn’t dare steal, if it is some other race’s hut, I would see if it’s truly abandoned, if it is, I take the items with me and I see if there is anything else hidden, seeing another golden ingot, I take that and leave the tent, if guards pester me, I would play dumb. If it is not really abandoned, I would leave the hut. Hoping the owner didn’t see me.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I say in my remains of common tongue, “Ug, Pinkie! Gimme somma dat food, I’z starvin!” The man, not liking my rudeness, but still gives me food anyway, out of king heart and makes me some chicken, I eat it. I thank him well (which we all know is poor treatment in other race’s eyes), and begin to pay him, he take the money, then I ask, “Watcha doin on da side of da big road?” The man says, “Why because we are heading to Krugmar, there are many valuables we could trade.” I say, “So am I, howz about I help ye kill summa dem bandits If I can travel with ya?” The Man says, “Of course!” and I complete my travel to Krugmar.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I do not wish to help with human affairs, I say, “ Ug, pinkie, Iz haz no meddlin’ with yer unorganized rogues!”. I suddenly get shot in the arm by a bandit, then I say, “ Neva minds on wot I said befoar, waaaaagh!!” Me and the guards charge into the bandit stronghold, I try to chop one, but he evades, I but one in the face with the end of my battle-axe then chop one on the stomach, I start slashing some more bandits and soon, I get several slices, as well, I leave bodies as I advance in their ranks, after many cuts and bruises, my side has won, I now realize the thrill of an actual battle, the guard pays me and I am back on my travels.

[Trouvo 205]

Well first, you still failed to apply some of the feedback

1.Blawharag told you to add in server lore such as that of Aegis and Asulon, as your character is old enough to have lived through the destruction of Aegis and the subsequent escape to Asulon, you also do not add any names of cities nations etc, and you have very little personality, quirks, flaws, fears in your bio

2. Damien told you to fix your ORQs as you still have one that is just a run-on sentence

Because you were denied twice for not following the 24 hour rule, by being too impatient, but also missed out on 2 good chances for feedback, I will give you ONE last chance, but if you submit your application in less than 24 hours from my posting this, then you will be automatically denied and have to wait 3 months before applying again.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Forum