Awesomesnow's Applaction Part 2

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In-Character:

Character Name: lrileth Snow

What Race are you?: Human.

What Sub-Race are you? I have none.

Biography: Snow is a tall 24 year old, beautiful (but deadly) girl. Although not the smartest person around, she can deal with many situations very quickly; she does not like it when people mess about with her because she has such a short temper, she hates it when people are picked on because she likes to help those who cannot defend themselves, She wishes for that one day she can become a personal guard of a king and queen because as a little girl she always wanted to meet the king and queen as they are her idols and she wishes to hopefully be close friends with them and if she does not she would open a small stall in a town and settle down there and just be part of the whole town, helping anyone who needs help, only to be one of the most respected town’s folk there.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To be know across the land as a knight.

What is your character’s favourite tool? Sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Her most skilled talent is fighting monster’s.

A screenshot of your skin:

Information about your Character: She is not afraid to get herself in to the action and also to help and protect the people.

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: AwesomeSnow

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a young excitable Girl and also not afraid to be in a conversation or let people know about me, I am also easy to make smile with jokes and hate seeing people being made fun of because I know how it feels.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 7-10 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is where you play a character which you create on what you would like them to be someone you wish to be.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have been on other server’s which were very Roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is the act of using out-of-game information in the game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is the act of defeating an opponent without giving them a chance to fight back.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be very enjoying and very interesting and also to be a huge amount of keeping me entertained playing as someone I could relate to.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: It was a yogscast server which I left because all of the people there where very racist but also because it was a RP server and they was not very good at Roleplaying.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do agree to the rules of the server, Forum and Teamspeak.

How did you hear about us?: I heard of you from a friend who told me the server was one of the best RPG server’s on the internet.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No I have not made a application before now.

Open-Response-Questions:

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? She would go up to the warrior’s and ask what they are doing if they said “we are harassing this person” she would reply with “why are you doing that?” and if they said “because we can now move on before we hurt you!” she would retaliate with all her might to help that poor person even if she failed she knew she would have saved that person’s life.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? She would say “Hello there, how are you?” then if he said “I am good thank you, how are you?” She would then reply with “I am good thanks” Then she would ask “Do you have any food and supplies because I have been travelling for days” Then if he does have what she needed she would say thank you and leave.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond? She would first look around to see if it was actually abandoned and then shout “Hello anyone here!?” and then if there was no answer she would take it and find a nearby village and stay the night before selling what she did not need.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? She would say “Hello there how are you?” And see how they are and ask “I am sorry but you don’t happen to have some spare food do you? I have been travelling for day’s and have not found a single village or house”.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guards have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?: She would go up to the town guards and she asks “what is the reward?” And if it was something good like iron or a sword or some money if there was a good reward she would help them take the reward and leave for the next town.

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Why did I deny you?

You lied in your application, saying you had not made one before now? You were denied before by Thuum.

Biography was very short and did not include quirks, a personality, flaws, weaknesses.

Your ORQs were not roleplayed adequately. Your character is there right now, what is he/she doing, smelling, thinking, seeing and feeling in that situation?

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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