Coolenzin's Submission

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Coolenzin

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I have been speaking English for my entire life, my grammar i will admit is not as good as it could be but, i know how to use and will do my best.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a grade nine student who loves minecraft and the lord of the rings series. i am a total nerd i have benn playing minecraft for about a year and a half and yeah.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:i usually spend about 5-10 hours on servers daily

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role Playing is becoming someone else with a different look and a completely different personality

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: i have had none in minecraft but, in others such as skyrim i have.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: don't know.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:don't know.

What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect it to be very good because it seems amazing from the trailers and its my too favorite things combined.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i left other servers because they weren't a 24/7 server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have, indeed.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: i promise.

How did you hear about us?: From planet minecraft.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:i have not

Character Name:Gimli Enzin

What Race are you?: A Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):I was Raised By elves I never met my parentss nor know where i come from.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):I was given away as a child but a elven Women named enzin brought me in and raised. me i speak fluent Elf, and i am a master at the art of battle axe. once i was was ten my new mother told me i was found and the story of what happened that night when i was found, so i packed up and ran to find out who i really am.

What is your Character's ambitions?: I want to go and find my real parents and who im supposed to be, i also want to learn to bake cake

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):I love to use my pickaxe and find new ores!

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? al though i am a dwarf i am quite skilled at elven language

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): it is attached.

Other Information about your Character: i am also only 4'11

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Why did I deny you?

Your roleplaying defintion was incorrect. It did not hold all the information that you need to know in regards to roleplaying in the world of Asulon. You need to know how to do it correctly, and thus, you cannot be accepted without us knowing that you know, what it means.

You must answer all questions. You cannot leave out any question, as they all lead to your acceptance, and our knowledge of you as a possible member of the server. You need to answer and include all questions.

Your ambitions were off-kilter. They need to fit into the world of Asulon, and fit into what we know about your character from your biography. Without this, the ambition is void and would not apply to said character.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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