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MC Username:GavLan

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):

Kitten Drolur

Character Skillset:

I just got a reset so I have 50 Credits to put into the skills of my choosing.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

A rather young kitten at the age of seven, his fur is well kept. Although he has no parents to ensure his well-being, he tends to keep himself clean. The kitten is a Kha'Tigrasi so his fur is a deep orange with gray and white stripes extending from under his shoulder all the way down his back and onto his tail. He is rather small: It is unsure how tall he is as he fails to even stand on his hind legs. His eyes are green; almost as green as the grass we all walk on. He is often found with his tongue partially out of his mouth on a strange note.

Personality:

The kitten does not speak words, so his personality can not be observed on that note. However, actions can describe this kitten's interesting personality. As a Kha'Tigrasi he is rather pushy by nature, but his small size limits him from doing any real damage. Although the kitten can come across as annoying to the passerby, it is also because of the natural life cycle of a Kharajyr. At the age he stands at, seven, he always craves attention. As he has no parents to bother, he tends to bother the common crowd doing anything to get the attention he needs.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Born in the bustling city of vu’Ankhraj, Drolur would never expect the beautiful city to be destroyed by the rage of his creator. However, this innocent newborn would not bother to think of anything. The assassination of the emperor Tla’Jhaan did not affect him or his family – they just thought of it as a simple rift in the political upkeep of their empire. As Tla’Xerdun took the throne, life went on normal for Drolur’s family.

The seventh day of Emperor Tla’Xerdun’s rule will always be remembered. On this day, the beautiful city of Vu’Ankhraj was destroyed by a Volcano near the Kharajyr’s island over the rage of their creator , Metztli. While the emperor and his closest friends were rushed to the ships, bringing them to mainland Asulon, ash covered the city. Drolur was in his mothers arms in a market square at the moment of the eruption. The shock of their pending doom caused his mother to faint and sent Drolur to the ground. In the panic, nobody bothered to pick up the kitten who was lodged between a market stall and the stone ground for quite some time. As the last of the Kharjyrs to become survivors passed by, one picked up Drolur and brought him to the ship. As the ship sailed away and Vu’Ankhrai was engulfed in flame, years of culture was destroyed with it, however, it will be revived.

While the group of surviving Kharajyr spent time in the “Ape’s” land, Drolur stayed in the Wilven Sanctuary. There were many other kittens here all being watched by the peaceful monks of Asulon. These kittens were left behind while the other Kharajyrs made their journey back to Va’Ankhrai, soon to be renamed Va’Khajra. Drolur grew quite a lot in the temple although he cannot speak he is quite aware that he does not belong here. He will now begin his journey to make it back to Va’Khajra alive.

Character's ambitions:

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

The man takes another look, shaking his head.

"You're just a kitten. You can't help me.."

Although Drolur could not understand the words coming from the human's mouth, he could tell he was in distress. Slowly and cautiously Drolur approaches the man, crawling on all fours. The man looks down chuckling as Drolur gently touches him with his paw.

"You're a cute one, aye. I should get going."

Drolur flinches as the man pats him on the head and walks away.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Although it would only be natural for a prideful Kharajyr to respond with force, especially a Kha'Tigrasi, this Kitten can not do much. He understand he is being racist and insulting his race, however Drolur just hisses and takes a few steps back. In repsonse, the Dwarf jumps at him in an attempt to scare him. Drolur is intimidated and scurries out of the inn on all fours. The sound of Dwarven laughter can be heard behind him.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

As this situation would not be possible with my character's age, I will respond as if he is an adult. - His reaction may not be accurate in the future as I plan on having his personality develop more in game.

Drolur grabs the Kharajyr under the jaw.

"What kind of fool are you?" - He violently lets go of the jaw, obviously inflicting pain to the Kharajyr.

"I.. It's just that.. I.."

The Kharajyr is obviously shocked and unable to respond efficiently. Drolur shoves the man from his home using his Kha'Tigrasi strength. He closes the door as if nothing happened. A murderer is no longer his friend and what becomes of him is not of his concern.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

Law is must to keep things in tact, I do swear to follow the Tlatlanni's law. In fear of the wrath of Metztli, I do swear to take her actions as Sacred.

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A good app, this is not a denial or acceptence.

Few things I would like to see changed and added.

-Add you characters ambitions, you appear to of missed that out.

-Add some more stripes to your skin, looks like a Kharajyr that has fallen in a big tub of orange juice. Make it look like a Tigrasi.

-Possibly extend your bio too, a little more information about your character would be nice. This is not that important though.

Note you do not have to wait 24 hours like a denied app, just edit those changes and I will view it again (Make sure to comment here when you have edited it)

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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