Third/second Application Third Time Lucky.

[TheMichaelBez 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: michaelbez1

How old are you?: 14 becoming 15 September 12th it says i am 12 in my first app i honestly ment to put 14.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: UTC+0, Greenwich Mean Time, England

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, My spelling can be a little off when I write quickly. But English is the only language I know.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a School pupil who goes to a English boarding school. I am an average teenager who likes football, girls and computer games. I spend most of the holidays playing minecraft on severs.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Almost every day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I learnt about role play through a friend who plays on a role play sever it sounds as if he has a really good time on it so i want to give it a go. as i have read all LOTRs books this sever looks like it is the one for me. RP is the player (me) forgets all i know about my life and lives the life of the character he is controlling. So if a large army of creepers are walking towards my character he does not charge for a laugh he shouts run to his constipation's and runs because it is scary and intimidating. In RP you try and feel what the character is felling.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: This would be my first go at a RP sever.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: To influence the players IC with OC info. to give him and advantage. over the other players and game in general. this rewins the whole point of RP and the fun of the game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: to force something on a player and not give him a chance to counter what is being done to him. so if a police man did it on another sever it would go something like 'the police officer grabs the robbers legs and trips him over pulls out his tazer and socks the robber. the robber is now knocked out. the police officer flings him in the back of his car and drives off.' all of that happens and the robber could not do anything.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A amazing world filled with great buildings and people. Hopefully a really fun experience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: legendary craft, it was just to big and had no purpose. the admins had no control and bribed players with diamonds.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I agree and have read the rules and understand.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes, i promise.

How did you hear about us?: Planet Minecraft, the sever section.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www.lordofthe...plication-form/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51195-second-application-form/

In-Character:

Character Name: Michael Windfire

What Race are you?: Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When i was born my parents were killed by an evil force. I was brought up by a elven family who had a son. me and the son who i practiced fight with bow and sword. However, soon i became of an age (27) where i believed i need to leave home and make my own fortune and start my story and seek revenge on the evil force that killed my mother and father. before i left my adopted mother gave me a green cape and hood and my father gave me a mighty elven two handed sword.

My character is quite tall had brown hair and a beard I wear a green cape. my character has a a great felling of hate for the evil forces that killed his parents. Which can lead to him becoming aggressive sometimes. he is a good warrior because of the training he took with his elven family. he has dark brown eyes. his hair is quite long just touching the bottom of his neck. Because of what happend to his parents he has a strong felling of right and just ment and he dose not want anyone else to feel the same pain.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To get revenge on the evil spirits that killed his parents.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The Mighty Two-Handed Sword (sword) given to him by his adopted father. (not trying to get free sword. just part of story the first sword i make or buy will be this sword. if that is okay.)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? He is a surprisingly good shot with a bow and arrow. His elven family helped him master this ambition.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):There is one with hood and one without. is that okay?

Other Information about your Character: He is very adapt to nature due to elf training. he can move quickly through thick forest.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

He would notice the warriors are armed and possibly going to kill the hobbit I would get the people around my characters attention and ask the warriors what they are doing and depending on their answer I will attack or leave it.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

'Hello, how are you today? what type of wares are you selling?' lets say he says very expensive wares. i reply 'show me these wares!' and he pules out from his coat a huge diamond. 'A Diamond, that must be very expensive. However, i am not in search of an earth rock. I need a Sword and Bow. Fair-well!'

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Looking in the chest and seeing the iron bars and a sword my character leaves it be because he does not need the items and looks for other people around the hut. After not finding anybody he stays the night in the house and carries on with his journey in the morning.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Hello, i am lost and Hungry do u have any food to trade. They say yes and after a quick meal my character asks the locals whether they had seen a two elfs and a child pass through the camp. they explain how they had seen two elfs but no child. you say that would be good enough and ask which way did they go the point and my character leaves the next day.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: 'Ye i shall aid ye in this engagement it will be good practice. Also there is no need for the reward just a meal and a warm place to sleep tonight should be fine.'

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

~DENIED~

Reasons:

-Fix up spelling and Grammar

-Role-play definition is "unclear"

-Biography is too "Cliche"

-Character is dull and bland

-Open Responses are done incorrectly

-This is not Lord of the Rings

Please fix this up and re-post after 24 hours please.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

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