Why I Should Be On This Server

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Minecraft Account Name:

Gaffney467

How old are you?:

14 almost 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:(Eastern Time Zone)United States of America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes i do think i have a good grip of the English language as well as a good vocabulary.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am 14 (15 on the 21st). Years old and i am a very creative,interesting and talkative person and i play the double bass however, i'm currently working towards a drama GCSE. Doing drama really helps to develop my people and social skills, and so i love a bit of good RolePlay.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

10-20 hours would be a about accurate time.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Role play to me, it means adventure, sides between good and evil and a lust for power. It means working up from where you start to get known. To me it also means embarking upon legendary quests and creating myths and fables of your own.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have few experience with role play but seeing videos of it had really inspired me.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Metagaming is when you abuse the knowledge you gain from outside of the game world/character's world, it includes knowledge of Names, classes, places and such things. Also a form of metagaming would be to know that a NPC/player will act in certain way or do a certain action when you ask or do something for them.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

In Roleplay powergaming is when you perform a action, for example: *Kick's him in the face*, to avoid this sort of difficulties you do *attempt's to-...* back to your opponent etc. But this action can be taken advantage of, by doing an action that is not possible in game, for example: *He calls down lighting*. But it is still a form of powergaming, not allowing the enemy to attack.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Whenever I join a new server. I never join it believing that it will be a really good server this is because I always like to go into a server with an open mind. But so far from what I have seen and from the professionality of the website I would say that I have high hopes for it.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on many servers, getting admin/mod in over 10. Although it could be said that I left them, I always keep anyone that I was close to or knew well in contact. As well as sometimes go back onto the server to check up on old friends and to see how the server is going.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have read the rules, and I understand why they are there to help increase other players and your owns experience in game.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes i do promise to abide by them.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about this server on Planet Minecraft and I was always interested in joining a professional Role play server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

http://www.lordofthe...544#entry391544

In-Character:

Character Name:

Greetings I am Firedun GreatHelm.

What Race are you?:

Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): I dont have a sub-race.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

The battle of five armies, The Marshlands of the East, The battle of the four hammers, Attack of Gruin’Ath. Oh my friend, sit down, and prepare for a long journey.

Let me tell you of the marshlands of the east. Our hammers wet and heavy from the crushing storm, pouring down like a raging river. We stood hammer by hammer, sword by sword with our shields held high! My helmet glistening from the radiant flames spewing out light, like a ferocious dragon! Our feet weighed down by the slowly sinking mud, consuming all it touched.

“ORC’S!!!”

One of my dwarven comrades call out! And before we knew, we were confronted by a wall of disease stricken Orcs. Their faces looming in the darkness, their red, blood shot, ugly eyes, grew from the darkness. They wielded blunt swords and axes, but made up for this by their scale of numbers, it was like a swarm of locust growing from the darkness.

Our commander Harold ThunderMace called out.

“These creatures, from the depths of hell its self are not to be feared. They carry feeble weapons which would be better off being used for cutting butter! These aren’t foes, these are animals! And we will crush their skulls with the might of our HAMMERS! CHARGE!”

We charged into the mist, with the thick mud not holding us back, hammers raised. The orcs readied for us, rising their weapon. But it was no match for dwarven steel! And like a crushing wave crashing onto a beach, we broke their weakened and useless defenses. I swung my hammer wildly, crushing Orcs heads, like I was squatting fly’s.

The battle was now almost won. Orc blood seeping into the ground, we raised our hammer and shouted.

“AAARRUU ARU!”

Only a couple of dozen fell during the battle, but this was nothing compared to the loss of the orcs entire army. With the orc corpses littering the battle field, the smell was other whelming. With this victory the orcs knew to keep their distance from, the mighty dwarfs!

But this was all before your time young one, and the battles I fought in are only stories now and the army I fought in is no more. Never the less, there are still many more to come! And many more Orcs to crush!

Firedun is a hardened war veteran who has had his far share of battles. He fought in a army that is now lost… Now 54, Firedun wise with knowledge and experience of battle, Seeks out for a new adventure and to join a new army under one banner. Firedun although stubborn at times like all dwarfs, is a wise, noble and a warm friend to everyone, helping out with tasks of any kind. Firedun was born into a noble family that’s banner fell many winters ago. Although being from a noble line Firedun treats all dwarfs as if they were his own. Firedun wears his ancient family’s armor, passed down from father to son throughout his family’s history as well as wearing his amulet around his neck that was given to him on his death bed, and is inscribed with the words “kondolo kun frezztra undra parklo dra”. Which is written in ancient dwarfen text, and that has never been translated.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

My character's ambitions is to join a new army in search for battle. As well as discovering the words that were inscribed in his farther's amulet.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

His Sword skill, being a veteran dwarfen warrior he knows his way around sword.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

At the top of the page. As my profile picture.

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Firedun approaches the two men.

"Is there a problem here?" The men look into firedun's eyes and say

"No problem, why you looking for one?"

The two warriors stand there facing Firedun. As Firedun puts his hand on the hilt of his sword. he says. "Trust me this is the last thing you want to do”. The two warriors look at each other, back away from the halfling. As the men walk into the forest Firedun then takes the Halfling to the nearest town.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

A man dresses in a smart suit looked standing over a stall.

Looking once into the merchants eyes Firedun asks to see the merchant’s goods. He sees nothing of interest to him and so says a far and happy farewell and walks off.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Firedun approaches what looks like an abandoned hut and looks inside the chest, finding valuable items within. With one look at the items he is quick to put them back and leave them for the owner.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

"I am in need of supplies and food do you have any for sale?" Firedun asks

"Depends what you paying?" A local asks

"I can only offer my help as I have no money" The local looks into Firedun's eyes.

"I can give you what you offer but there is a task that I need doing… There is a bandit base up in the hills to the east of here, and they continually raid us for supplies. I’ll give you what you need if you take care of them." The local says. Firedun is quick to accept the offer. And tells him that he will be back before day break.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Hearing of the word that there are bandits occupying the road. Firedun rushes to the leader of the party offering his support. The leader accepts it and they soon venture off to kill the bandits.

When returning to the town the leader offers Firedun a bonus, and asks if he will help with any other similar quests.

"I will accept you offer and the money. Tell me where and when and it will be done." Firedun says.

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This application has been

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-Open responses are too short

-Biography doesn't contain lore

-Biography is too short

Please fix this up and include a skin next time so any mishaps don't happen. Please Re-post after 24 hours thanks.

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