Hey Guys! First App

[Leal10 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Mr_Leal

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Brazil São Paulo. (GMT -3)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Sure. I lived in Ohio for 2 years.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a peacefull guy, a kind funny and I little bit ugly, but not too much! :)

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Something like 5 hours! Yeah Im a little addicted

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Is play a role. It means you act with your character an story and feel all the situations in game and respond like the role.Playing a character in a story and respond to situations appropriately and there waiting for reactions to continue the story.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Already played in private server with my friends.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Using information of the reality to benefit yourself in game.For example: I find a treasure and call my friends to also benefit

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:It would basically do not give chance to other player's reaction. For example I take my sword and give you a hit right in the heart! (giving no chance to react)

What do you expect this server will be like?:Finally I found a server with such a structure for Role Play and I am very anxious. It would be wonderful if I was applied.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Just a private one with my friends!

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes, Agreed.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:I promise.

How did you hear about us?:My friends!

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:No :)

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

In-Character:

Character Name:Gordon Krün

What Race are you?:Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): High Elf :)(Like others RPG games)

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Gordon is a young elf Southern Malinor with long hair and dark Gordon was often confused with the hero of his hometown. Without knowing his parents Gordon grew up in a small farm and was educated by a couple of Kharajyr's. With great skill with his bow and arrow Gordon participated in local tournaments to earn some money to help his surrogate father in the care of the farm.

Completing 17 years Gordon goes to a temporary camp that finds during the hunt and sees three young adventurers.

Curious to know why these young people were camping there Gordon, with his great ambition to become a hero asks the young adventurers to join the group.

Without any delay, the adventurer who appeared to be a magician accepted his entry into the group.

Now all that remained was thrilled that Gordon picked up his few things on the farm and to dismiss his "family".

When he arrived at the farm that would be explained to a large famila oportinidade to give them a better life.

Once Gordon gets his surrogate father, an enchanted bow that his real father had given him to deliver to Gordon when needed.

So Gordon goes into a great adventure with his new friends, seeking the realization of your dream and make the lives of their "parents" better.

What is your Character's ambitions?:Became a big hero and make his parents life better

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Bow, and hoe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Archery and farming

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?With great courage Gordon picks up his bow and shoots the armed warrior disarming him, "Argh cowards" Gordon yells making the warriors come out running and leave small halfling in peace.

Thanked the small halfling offer to Gordon his money but Gordon does not accept that.

And go away

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Hello sir, I'm thirsty could you give me and my companions a jar of water?

"The Lord answered quickly," Sure, you guys seem very tired adventurers also want to rest in my tent?

Thanked Grodon finish the jar of water and says: "It is not necessary dear sir, we have to go fast!" . Gordon says goodbye and walks away

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:"Oh look what I found here!" Gordon says surprised. "Some iron bars and a golden sword! I'll get it! Haha. Gordon laughs." The sword can offer to my partner and the iron bars can come to make new arrows! "

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?"Thanks God" Gordon says with relief. Approaching a merchant Gordon says: "Please noble merchant had a slice of bread for me? I'm hungry!"

Baffled the merchant gives you a porkchop and Gordon eats rapidly quenching their ravenous hunger!

In a hurry. Gordon throws a few gold coins on the table and will look for his companions.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Gordon looks at his companions with a look that only they understand. And then Gordon's one step forward and says: "I and my companions will solve this problem!Wish us luck and out on the march up the road.

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

However correct, and not overly vital to your applications acceptance, your definition of roleplaying is somewhat awkward. I'd like to see it fixed, but again not overly vital.

Your definitions of meta and power-gaming, again seemingly correct, but you fail to demonstrate true understanding; perhaps give examples along with your definition.

Your biography breaks lore somewhat, and overly doesn't have enough lore-related material. You mention one city, and one race; and I don't find it realistic for that race to be teaching you the way of archery, but that isn't what I am focusing on. You need to explain how you got from Aegis to Asulon if you started in Malinor, as well as, sprinkling in more lore-related material to prove to me that you've read the lore.

Your biography is also a tad bit confusing to read, I can't tell what you're saying about your character in some instances. For example, is your character the hero, or continual mistaken for the hero? Either way, it needs to be expanded upon and fleshed out, and I need more information on your background.

Your open response questions are rather short as well, and do not give a clear depiction of who your character is, how he'd react in this scenarios and how you are as a roleplayer. The open response questions are a fundamental part of the application, it is done to show off your prowess as a roleplayer, and it gives us, the application team a first glimpse of who your character is, and how you will portray him. Please be in depth! Also please remember to incorporate a certain amount of realism into the open response questions!

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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