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[BurntToast74 183]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: burnttoast74

How old are you?: 14 years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central time United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yea i do very well in language arts, i am sure i have a good grip on my grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a fan of any Lord of the rings game. I read all the lord of the rings books, also seen the movies a ton of times, i love the guitar and drums. I like playing on Minecraft Roleplay servers, I am also a Christian. My favorite game is Minecraft, but i'm looking for a good server for it, and this looks like a fun server, i seen it on youtube.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I play a lot of Minecraft, and if this is a good server i will be on this server all the time. Monday: 3-4 hours

Tuesday: 3-4 hours

Wednesday : 1-3 hours

Thursday: 4-5 hours

Friday: 2-3 hours

Saturday: 5-6 hours

Sunday: 2-3 hours

About 24 hours all together.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

I know a lot about role playing, I know that roleplaying is about being your own character that you made up, you have to do everything that character would do, if you did anything besides that would be very unusual, people would think it would be you, because your supposed to on a roleplaying server to act like your own player, or person.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I've played on a lot of Roleplay servers. But the only thing i hate about the ones i've played on is that they don't take Roleplay seriously, there characters are very poor with very personality, i found this server on youtube and it looks very into Roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming

is when you take information form the outside world and put inside the game, as in putting the information in your Rolplaying Character. Say that i get attacked by villains, then they kill me If i went to that same place and that i knew that they just attacked me, and if i went to go attack them i would be Meta-gaming, because i took information from outside world and put it in the game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is when you do something to a player without letting them to react to the action that you just did. For instance, lets say i attack someone without letting them give a reason for why they should be killing, the person Power-Gaming is not giving the objective person a chance to speak, and why they should be killed.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think that Lord Of The Craft will be all for Roleplaying, and have good fair Admins. Lord of the craft seems it will be against Power-Gaming and Meta-Gmaing. I saw that there are a lot of good custom plugins!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on a server called Battlecraft it was a Faction and Roleplaying server, the rules were not as tight as i wanted, there were to many people who would power game, even thought that it said on the rules that there is no power gaming allowed, so i left the server ,because i just kept getting power gamed.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i looked at the rules very carefully.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes i indeed trust the rules.

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?: I herd about this server from petrythegamernerds channel, on youtube.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

yes I have

1. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52086-my-first-app/page__p__398634#entry398634

2. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52086-my-first-app/page__p__398634#entry398634

3. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/52594-app-3/page__p__403207#entry403207

In-Character:

Character Name: Ronald_Fitz jr.

What Race are you?: Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Ronald_Fitz jr. a 52 year old dwarf that does not mine as much as his father does, people think of Ronald’s father as the hero who created mining. Something interesting happened to Roanld’s father, when Ronald was five, living in Aegis, he saved his parents from a group of undead, so people say. Ever since Ronald was a boy he has been working in farms, while his father stirred attention , about his mining skills. Ronald has 3 older brothers that are charming, warriors and least of all highly respected miners.

When Ronald was a child he was working in the fields, and also hunting animals.

Although Ronald seems like a wimp, he is not. He is led a great warrior who has accompanied the kings knights through very dangerous roads infested by mobs. He's been a very respected person in his town. He is a very clever person who thinks of ways to get friends and family out of trouble. Ronald is not prideful, but very humble. He wants to go out and help more then what he has, he wants to start help the government, he wants to be a leader, but his father is very depressed because his mother just died, so he does not want to worry his father in becoming a leader, because his father hates being involved in government, so Ronald has been look for new places to live. People think that Ronalds mother went Kal'Dwain to leave Ronalds father, but Ronald insist his mother would never do that. Ronald has been trying to get a group together to come with him to Asulon. Ronald likes to bring people with him on his trips, because he is a very social dwarf. He is very respectful to people he does not know, and has a close eye on evil deeds.

Ronald has a nature for protecting people from danger, and evil. Ronald has always done so, with his family. Ronald has one big problem he is an alcoholic, he goes to bars everyday. He thinks that the wounds he has got in battle are causing him to drink. His Father has the same problem.

Ronald needs to fix some of his problems in a new world. Ronald has a hard time hearing, he often says to people "aye" or "whats that?" Ronald is very

immature thought at times, some times he gets so drunk he does not even know who he is talking to, most of the time he is drunk,from going in bars.

Ronald can see an evil deed ,when he is not drunk,but when he i not drunk, he is a brave fighter for justice.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Ronald's ambitions are to become a leader, get a large house and grow a farm on the property, he wants to make new friends and become a highly respected person in the town. He wishes to move in Kal'Dwain and settle down there, maybe even open up a public bar.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Ronald's favorite tool is by far his hoe, still h never goes anywhere without his pickaxe, its his extinct to have his pickaxe near him at all times.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Ronald's most skilled talents is his digging, but most of all his most skilled is his farming.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): sorry this is the best i could do=====>http://www.minecraftskins.info/dwarfrogue.html

Other Information about your Character: Ronald's Mother died so he is a bit depressed because of that. Ronald has no intentions of hurting innocent people he wants to help those in need of help.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? After Ronald found the hafling calling for help, he just went to a bar , and might be a little dozy."Aye, there mate what you doing!" Ronald said. "Im being mugged, help me please!" The halfling said. "Shut up you, stupid halfling!" the warrior said.

"uh, why are you mates touching him, uh" Ronald said stumbling on his words. "Cant you see were mugging him, you drunken dwarf!" the warrior said. "what that you say mate?" Ronald said. "Do you fine gentlemen no were a tavern would be?" Ronald said. "I do!" the halfling said. "well come with me,uh and lead the way!" Ronald said. "what were you going!" the warrior said. "Shut up, he showing me the way, back off! Ronald said. "I need my dwarven juice, now carry on go, go lead the way!" Ronald said. "See ya later, you touchy warriors!". "uh, if i see that dwarf again im going to rip out his heart." The warrior said.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "umm what do you there sell here?" Ronald said. "O, o we sell food, clothing and ale." O, boy would i like and ale!" Ronald said. "That will be 5 minas please." The man said. "Ok here, take this, give it to me." Ronald said. "Now, now dont be to hasty."The man said. "ahhh, that was refreshing, I would like another, now." Ronal said. "Wow, you just finished that, very fast, here take this." The man said."O, man that was good, i am pumped, well thanks i best be......ahh."Ronald said. "Are you alright Mr. dwarf?" "No, no take the money." Ronald said. "Well come again any time. "uhh, boy i got to rush to the bathroom." Ronald said.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: "Hello, is this anyone stuff!" Ronald said. "Hello, anybody there!" Ronald said. "ah, well i will just take on of the iron bars i dont want anybody chasing after me." Ronald said. The Ronald runs out of there as fast as posible to keep from anyone getting to him.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Uhh, anyone there hello?" Ronald said. "Yea im here, what can i do for ya?" The Merchant said. "Do you have any bread, or a pork, of something to feed on?" Ronald said. "Well that depends, it cost 2 minas for bread, 4 minas for pork." The merchant said.

"Damn, O boy, well you got anything for free?" Ronald said. "Well we just killed some zombies last night, and we got some rotton flesh, that would be the only thing we got free." The merchant said. "Uhh, ok i will take that, i guess." Ronald said. "I know there very spoiled, so.The Merchant said. "well thanks ,but do happen to know were i can get some free hospitality?" Ronald said. "Yea , there is solace, thats west of here, i recon you go there." The merchant said. "Ok well thanks for the help, the rotton flesh tasted like horse ****, so,but thanks!" Ronald said. "Well see ya later dwarf." The merchant said.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Ronald looks for a guard were he can go sign up for this ordeal. "Hello there mate, were can i go sign up for the fight?" Ronald said. "You can go to the lords palace, just follow this path up to his palace." The guards said. "Well ok, thanks and i see you in the battle field because im signing up!" Ronald said. "Hello good sir, can i help you?" Ronald said. "Yes indeed i do need help, because of these savages, i do need help go report to the guard and help them in the fight!" The lord said. Ronald runs down to the men and they are already in battle, so Ronald grasp his axe and goes into the fight.

ATER THE BATTLE

"O,boy mates im hurt, some stupid bandit stabbed me with his sword." Ronald said. "Here take this bandage it will help." A guard said. "Thanks, for the help, but im really looking forward to the money, were do yee think i can, get it." Ronald said. "Go to the lords palace" A volenter said. Ronald opens the doors to the palace, he ask for the money from the king, but then he thinks to himself, if he should get bear instead for all the good lads. "Sir, can you actually throw a party, you can keep the money, but could you give me some barrels of ale?" Ronald said." I guess so, here take the ones right next to me." The lord said. "Ok thanks, my lord" Ronald said. Ronald brings the ale to his house, and throws a fun party for all the soliders and volenters that fought in the ordeal.

[Haelphon 407]

Please reapply in 24 hours.

Your application was denied for the following:

Multiple grammatical errors [PROOFREAD YOUR APPLICATION]~

Your biography still shows lack of lore~

Rephrase the following quotes:

people think of Ronald’s father as the hero who created mining.

This makes it sound like his father invented mining~

Ronald's most skilled talents is his digging, but most of all his most skilled is his farming.

This is a double negative~

Ronald's ambitions are to become a leader, get a large house and grow a farm on the property, he wants to make new friends and become a highly respected person in the town.

This is literally everyones' ambitions. Please try to reform it a bit~

You also need to make your character's speech less 'articulate' and more 'dwarfey'

Such as: "Yes, that sounds excellent! I'll have some cake!"

Reformed to: "Aye, sounds lovely! I'll be havin' me some o' that cake!

[Haelphon 407]

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