Raiden App 2.0

[Raiden 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Grendal3

How old are you?:

17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Central U.S.A.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I believe so, yet I make mistakes like everybody else.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm looking for people I can be creative like me. I like building things with others. I am a team player.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

5-6 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Role playing to me is about being a character and ignoring all outside info and focusing on what the only the character would know.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I play many games role playing, and DnD

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

The act of using “out of character” information in character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power-Gaming is like choosing the outcome and ignoring the chance system

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Easy to understand but not too dull on what you can do.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Many other RPG severs and I left because it was barren with nothing.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes I do.

How did you hear about us?:

My friend Raxxtus.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No

In-Character:

Character Name:

Raiden

What Race are you?:

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Raiden started as a small fisher. Working very hard, barely making it. He saw much corruption in the human system. Growing older he gained respect through fighting bandits to gain more respect and fame. Evers since he was 7 he practiced with his bow and used the ledged he shot of to see who battles work. After many raids he studied commanding battles and became a great warlord.

At age 24 he traveled to the mainland. There he wanted to fix the world to solve the great war problems even if it meant more war. Raiden has seen much but is very nervous for the new world. Yet Raiden feels prepared in a way for he has a long ride there.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To fix the world of its problem.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Bow and arrow and the fishing rod.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Strategic war planner.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

A born leader.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Step in and stand up for him if they fight him he'll fight back.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

May I see your wares, please.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Keep wandering.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Ask if there's any work to do to get some food.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Do it to earn respect and money.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

-Character Requires a Surname (Last Name) [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient/Incorrect Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient/Incorrect Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Response Questions could use some Work. [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [X]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [X]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [X]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments: All of the reasons pushing towards your denial are disclosed/marked above. Overall, your application lacked detail and effort. The format was strange and could have used some tweaking. All of the reasons you were denied are listed above, read over them and re-apply AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS

Thank you, and Good Luck~

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum