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Minecraft Account Name: Kyledeathbli

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S.A Eastern Coast

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:English is my first language, i have an ok grip on Grammar

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a soccer player, who's now a sophmore in high school. i like to be out doors a lot, but i also like being inside. I help out around the house whenever i can, and i have a good humor. I consider my self a people's person

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could probally play 3-5 hours a day, besides weekends.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: What i know about roleplaying is, it's where there's hundreds of people, ( or AI ) with their own stories, personalities, and weaknesse's and strenght's. It's where people could interact, not as themselfs, but as their chachter's who could be completley diffrent from them. You can all stick to the time setting and place of the Game, and have a blast, and you can make enemies,freinds, and even a family! A definition of what roleplaying means to me is, Where you create a whole new you, acording the time and setting of the Rp age. you can have strenghts, weakness'es, personalities, and go even farther like fears, goals, and desires. it's were you don't have to be you, you can be whoever you can create.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have learned the skill of roleplaying on a lesser role playing server, and on several Xbox 360 games ( ex. Skyrim, Fable II ) I have also played many Rp games onlin ( Wow,Runescape, Hand's of war, etc )

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:The act of meta gaming to me is, where you're chachter in RP may not know thing's, but you do OOCyl so you act as if you're chachter knows ( ex. You know this man's name oocyl, but then in rp you call hisname, even though you're Char. dosen't know his name ) another form is, where you might know information oocly, ( like someones being atacked by bandits ) and then use that Info. in Rp ( you go save the person in rp even though you have no idead it was happening in RP )

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:The act of power emothing to me is, Where someone does something not within their chachters limits ( ex. An orc picks up a building and throws it across the city ) or where you do something against other people, and not give them time to react. ( ex. The dwarf steals the mans sword and runs away-The man didnt even get to react before the dwarf ran away )

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect the server to be Well organized, and under good rule. I expect Amazing Roleplaying, and great citys and a amazing map.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have rareley stayed on a server for to long, i usually go on raid servers. the reason i leave them, is becuase i get bored of poorly built bases, and just mind numging killing, and becuase i just get bored. i have also played on one free build server where i contributed to many houses, i left becuase the server fell apart without good gm's.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i have, i completeley agree with them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes, i do promise

How did you hear about us?:I heard about you through youtube, and a freind.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Yes i have, (i changed this one up a lot), http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61205-kyledeathblis-first-application/page__p__478913__hl__kyledeathbli__fromsearch__1#entry478913

In-Character:

Character Name: Walter_Braverman

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): At an early age of 12, Walter_Braverman was a scrawny boy in the less noble parts of Arethor. His father was pressed into the oren navy, never to return. His mother was a chamber maid of a Knight housing in the noble district. Walter, and his mother Lisa, lived in a rented out 1 room apartment on top of a local pub. Lisa could bareley get by, so Walter had to help his mother. He'd do odd jobs, act as a stable boy, and when he had to, Beg. When Walter grew into the more exposed age of 16, he was Tall, maby 5'10. He was still very weak, but he aquired a life saving skill. He had a velvet tounge. he could tallk his way out of many things, even sometimes haggle a merchant down a couple of minas. Life was horrible for Walter and his mother Lisa, and a year later things became worse

At 17 and two months, Lisa was cuaght stealing a golden necklace out of a jewlrey box of the Knight's Wife. She was cuaght by the head butler. when she was thrown into trial, she could either get mercy, and lose a finger. or if the Knight wished it, he could have her hung. She spilled out pleas of mercy, begging forgiveness, and even shouting oaths, All of this was cut short as she was hung. Walter_Braverman witnessed the whole thing from an alley. Walter fled Arethor that day, crying stumbling, and with barely a mina on him. At the age of 27, Walter was a pennyless pauper, wandering the roads of the world, looking for a job, or even a meal. one day, while in a pub,deep within the mountains north of Arethor Walter was drinking a pint of ale,and suddenly Local warders walked in, and took all the uneployed men to a millitary camp. they conscripted him and told them they would have the honour of fighting for the noble lord, against a small uprising. They were very wrong, the uprising took full momentum, and the mountains north of arethor rang with the sounds of war, and streams ran red with blood for a whole ten years.

Now at 37 the war came to an end, Walter was tired to the bone, but proud that he had aquired the rank of captain. he got that rank, not becuase of strenght. but becuase of being clever, cunning, and ruthless. All the men under his regiment called him ol' Bloody Braverman, for two reasons. He was the oldest amognst their ranks, and becuase Walter would stop at nothing to win, even if he had to show no mercy to the Rebels. With his sack bulging with minas, Walter went to the main area of society, though he carefully avoided Arethor becuase of his hatred to the injustice it did to his family. After antoher 13 years of job to job, Walter aproaches his older stage of life. He's Now 50,6'1. he has grey hair, deep black eyes, and many war and travell scars. He's a marvelous talker, and very very ruthless. he seeks to make a name of himself. Walter is very nice and mannerous on the outside, but on the inside a cold rage builds in him at The injustice done to the Braverman's family. As well as that but hes very cruel and ruthless, but hides it well.

What are your Character's ambitions?: Walter want's to make a name of the Braverman family, maby even become a noble.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Walter's favorite tool is, The hoe becuase it can create a whole farm to feed everyone, or it could be used to end lifes, Walter likes the irony in that.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Walter's most skilled talents are, he is a great talker, and he is good with the Bow, a sword being a bit to heavy for his liking

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): (i cant get a ss atm, but i promise i will)

Other Information about your Character: Walter is old, bud still can swing a sword, or mend a wound, he is ruthless and cruel, but is also very mannerous and kind hearted-to the poor that is. Walter does not like Noble's-especially Orens nobles

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Walter would go up to try to help the halfling, telling the Warriors to go away, or else he will defend the halfling. if they do not comply Walter would stand strong, but fight as dirty as he could.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Walter would join the guards asking for arms and armor, and as soon as he got his in advance pay, he would find a way to slip out before the battle.

Anything else you would like to say?: This server looks really really fun, i have honestly spent an hour on this second application, becuase i really want to exprience good minecraft roleplay.

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Your Roleplaying Definition was definitively Expanded. You did seem unsure about yourself in your Metagaming definition, but your Powergaming definition was better.

At the near end of your Biography you rank yourself to Captain through your Biography.. You can't do that until you actually begin Roleplaying and you RPly earn that title..

Your Open Response Questions are much to short and you only replied to two of them..

-STILL UNDER REVIEW CPU-

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Actually, I should say you just ruined his chances CPU but I am not a mean person so I will not do so. Next time I ask that you allow for me to finish the Applications Review without going and finishing it yourself.

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