Razerkey's Application

[Razerkey 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Razerkey

How old are you?: 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+2, Finland

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I live in a small town with smelly cars and parks. I've lived here my entire life and I think it's awesome. If I could describe myself with one word it would be, beast.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 10+ hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is playing as if you were the character you are playing, anything you do or say in game needs to be normal for the character you are portraying.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I've roleplayed on stuff like SW:JA, Habbo, LSRP and much more.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Using knowledge you know but your character wouldn't.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Doing something that is basically "supernatural" for your character.

What do you expect this server will be like?: Like a rp server on an mmo.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: JAG's server, left because it's empty.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes.

How did you hear about us?: Petridagamernerd's videos

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No.

In-Character:

Character Name: GAREN FARSTRIDER

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Garen is a caucasian male, around 20-30 years old. He grew up on a farm with his parents, he was their only child. When he was about 17 three men raided their house, raped his mother and killed both of his parents. Garen ventured into town and begged for money for about four years, that is when he met Boldon.

Boldon taught Garen everything he knows about smithing and fighting. Boldon had no children of his own and saw Garen as his own son. But now Garen seeks to take revenge for his parents and become an adventurer! So he leaves..

What are your Character's ambitions?: To become stronger in battle and in crafting.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Sword & pickaxe.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: Smithing.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character: Brown hair, brown eyes.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Stop that! Garen says. The two warriors approach Garen in a threatening manner, Garen draws his sword and holds it up against them. The warriors laugh. Garen slices the throath of one of the warriors, the other trembles in fear and flees.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Greetings shopkeeper, I would like some bread and a bucket, Garen says. The shopkeeper happily hands him the wares, as Garen throws a few coins onto the stall.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Garen looks around to see if anyone is near, it seems quiet. Garen throws the things inside his bag and runs towards the forests.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?: Do you have any food? And where am I? Garen says. The traders spit next to Garen and tell him to leave, as Garen walks away an arrow land next to his feet. Garen charges towards the camp and starts to slaughter them and raid their belongings. He notices a young lady in one of the tents, she's obviously been beaten and raped by the traders, he offers her to come with him. She refuses and says: I'm dying, just leave me.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He lends a hand and happily accepts the reward.

Anything else you would like to say?: :D

[ShadowoKing 86]

Under review

-Defintion for power-emoting I feel is half explained, add more.

-Bio is short, add more details of his life. Could add why he wears the armour, more detail on how he learn his skills. Also need some form of link with our lore like places e.g.

-For open response answers they need more detail and few of them have their own problems. First one is power-emoting, killing a person with no effort. Fourth answer requires a VA to slaughter people for unprovoked attack/killing/stealing. Last one needs more detail with more speeches and movements.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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