Last One......i Hope I Get It

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Out Of Character/ Minecraft account name: razor_haxor

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I enjoy playing Roleplay servers. i have had minecraft since 1.7.3 i think thats the update.I am good with younger kids.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: about 6hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: i know it should be a acting experience to act like a character strait through,and usaully to act out something in the past or future.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have had some, an economy server called ecocitycraft,and a server called minewswarm.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:it mean strategy, but for roleplay being the oddman out and no sticking to your roleplay character giving information that is not known or needed.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: like one someone writes out an occuring event for example: "razor_haxor sneaks around petridagamernerd".

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think its going to be like fun and games but also strict roleplay.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on many but not living them unless they are boring or unorganized.ecocitycraft,mineswarm,citywars,and hopefully currently this one.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes

How did you hear about us?: PetriDaGamerNerd new/old.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:i have.i am sorry but i cant find it :{

In-Character/ Character Name: lyon The Unknown (lee-on).

What Race Are You: Human

What Sub-Race are you?: none

Biography: Lyon a young boy who was raised by his parents untill the age of 7. his parents sent the boy off to his grandparents. about 1 year later the boy with dirty blonde hair and green eyes was told that his parents were murdered and he was left with his grandparents.at the age of about 14 his grandmother died of old age and he was running out of caretakers. his friends he had none, sisters he had none, brothers he had none, only his grandfather who was surely going soon.after lyon was older he got a girlfriend a job and was moving out,but he still visited his grandfather very often. but one night he couldnt,and it just so happends that night his grandfather's house was burned down with him in it.after lyon finding out he searched for any clues if his grandfather may still be alive he found none.after searching he found a cupboard that was half burnt. he opens it and finds many letters that belong to his parents.his parents knew they were in danger so they sent him off to his grand parents.the letter also had a name....a suspicious name, the name Raduel.after searching more he found that his bed was only merely burnt so as he looks under it he finds a large chest filled with money,a bow,32 arrows, and a white/brownish suit. after lyon maturing he got into fights,and got friendly with the women, since he had no caretaker he was on his own and wasted much money,but after they age of 18 going on 19 he decided to find the man called raduel and not knowing what to come he decided to get a combat trainer for stealth,speed swordsmanship and archery.and now he wanders.

What are your Character's ambitions?: to find raduel, and help as many people as he can.

What is your character’s favorite tool?: Bow and arrows

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: stealth,archery,and swordsmanship.

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information about your Character:he has dirty blonde hair,green eyes he has his father's bow that is very old,but powerful.

Open-Response-Questions:Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors.They appear to be trying to steal money from him,How does your character respond?: He walks slowly up to not alarm the warriors grabs one by the neck and tells the halfling to hide untill he comes back. after the halfling runs away he pushes the warrior away sheathes his knife and says. "i wish not to fight you only that you leave the poor halfing alone". if the warriors decide to fight then my character would un-sheathe his knife and do combat,but if they walk away my character would find the halfling and help with anything stolen and take him to the nearest town.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. inside you see a few iron bars and a golden sword.How would your character respond?: he would leave them be knowing he has no use of them and continue his way.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest,they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?: I would ask for directions to the nearest town and politely ask for any scraps of food and pay the man handsomley.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them.The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He accepts, and takes a strategic potion on the nearby hill with two other bowman to flank the enemy.

Anything else you would like to say?:No,but just that this is my 3rd application.i hope i get it accepted.

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Under Review.

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Denied

Reasons:

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• Your Meta-Gaming definition is wrong.
  
• Your Power Emoting definition is wrong.
  
• I think you rushed your biography. It seems you put in little effort due to the fact there are many grammatical errors. I advice you to check your application before submitting it. Try to give reasons to why your character choose to do something, or how someone died. Finally I get a feeling that this doesn't suit the lore of Asulon with caretakers etc. Try to think in the mind of someone living in our realm.
  
• Your character questions should be expanded on. Explain why your character's favorite tool is the "bow/arrow" and maybe why his ambition is to: "find Raduel and help people".
  
• Your Open Response questions seem rushed and lack effort. Remember these questions are designed to test your role play and how you can cope in certain every-day scenarios which happen in Asulon. Try to set these out as role play as well by writing the actions and then speech. Also remember to try not and Power-Emote, Many of your characters reactions couldn't be stopped by anyone else which doesn't make your role play fair.
  

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