Altiak's Whitelist Application

[Altiak 1648]

b]Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Altiak

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States of America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I do have a good grip on the English language, because it is my first language.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am polite, nice, and can put a smile on peoples' faces. Minecraft is also my favorite game to play.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can usually play 8-12 hours a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Roleplaying means to act like somone you are not in a specific situation that you are not really in, and thinking and acting like that person would.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I haven’t had any experience of Roleplaying in minecraft, however my brother and I roleplay in real life for fun. For example, I pretend to be a doctor and my brother pretends to be a sick patient.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming is using out of character knowledge to your advantage. One example is if you are approached by an enemy and you tell your friend on skype that you need help and he comes to your aid.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power-Emoting is when you do something to a person and you do not give that person a chance to counter-attack. Let’s pretend the power-emoter's name will be Bob.

Bob: Come to my town, it’s taken loads of work to build.

Willy: My apologies, I am quite busy.

Bob: Then I will make you come.

Bob grabs Willy and knocks him out.

Bob carries Willy to his town.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A server with mature people that know how to Roleplay.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have not played on any minecraft roleplay servers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: I came by your trailer on Youtube.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: This is my first application

In-Character:

Character Name: Altiak Deryll

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Northerner

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):I was 6 years old when my life changed forever. My father, mother, and I were running amongst the crowd, it was a very tragic day when the people of Ageis were fleeing to a new world. Then suddenly out of nowhere someone bumped into me with great force and I fell to the floor. I was knocked out. When I woke up I was in a hay cart. I was light-headed and my knees were bloody. I suddenly had a gut-wrenching feeling inside of me. My Mother and Father did not have a hay cart, I had been kidnapped by someone. I don’t rememebr how long it was, all I remember was I sat there crying. Remembering how my Mother kissed me on the forehead, and my Father’s reassuring voice saying, "Everything was gong to be alright." Then the hay cart suddenly stopped. The hay cart doors opened, and revealed the face of my kidnapper. He was an older man with a grey beard, his eyes a piercing blue color. As Mother told me if I were to ever get kidnapped, I should try to run away. So I tried, the man grabbed me and I squirmed in his arms shouting at the top of my lungs, "Let me go, let me go! He said to me, "Child do not worry, I am not a kidnapper, I saw you knocked out on the ground and not only did I feel sorry for you, I saw great potential as well.“ I looked down, and said, „ Thank you for rescuing me.“ He nodded and showed me where I would be sleeping. Four years passed, and me and the man had grown very close to each other, I had started calling him Father. However another tragic occasion took place, the undead raided our home. We saw them through our Windows, Father told me to hide in the basement while he took care of it. I told him, „Promise me you’ll be careful I do not want to lose you too, with tears in my eyes.“ He told me everything will be ok, like my originál Father once said. I went down to the basement, worried sick. I heard screaming and shouting and I ran upstairs. The undead vanished and my Father was there, laying on the floor, I rushed to his aid and said, "Father, Father, are you alright?“ Father smiled at me and said, "Young boy, I love you so much, and I have always seen stunning potential in you.“ I said, "No, no father this isn’t the end, please I need you.“ Father said, „ Goodbye my boy, I will see you in the afterlife.“ I layed there next to him, with tears in my eyes.I didn’t know what I was going to do. I was all alone in this cold, dark, empty world. I knew that I must train and fight to avenge my Father’s death. So that’s what I started doing, I moved to the north where the northerners live. I settled there as a 10 year old boy. I observed the fights in the town (Which occured quite often) and learned from them. I learned how to dodge, weave, lunge, block, and slash. I practiced with sticks until I could finally craft myself a wooden sword. I trained on a wooden pole that I found on the edge of town. I did not have a home. I slept wherever the wind took me. Under the tables of the Merchants (Although I had to wake up early, because they got quite angry if they saw me), and sometimes if I got lucky a family would open their doors for me and gave me a place to sleep. This was my life for exactly 9 years. I am now 19 years old. I am a dark-haired, blue eyed, and a broad shouldered kind of guy. I do have quite the body, due to my hard training and exercises. My swordmanship is excellent, although I do need to work on my archery, because I never could afford a bow or craft one of my own. I decided to join the army that fights against the undead, to protect this town, but most importantly to avenge my Father’s death

What are your Character's ambitions?: To join a town and server honor and justice in it. Also to avenge my Father's death.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):<a href="http://imgur.com/Vt5tI"><img src=" alt="" title="Hosted by imgur.com" /></a>

Other Information about your Character:Altiak is good-hearted, brave, and a good sword fighter.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?Altiak is walking from the cloud temple about to do some training, when he sees a small halfling being harassed by two warriors. He walk up to him and says, "Hey, wow can I feel those muscles?“ The armed warriors look at each other puzzled and say, "Erm, sure…“ Altiak grabbed the warrior’s arm and said. "You're you’re such a big and strong warrior why don’t you pick on someone your own size, eh?“ The warriors stepped away from the halfling and he quickly runs away. Luckily, Altiak had a sword on him, so he knew what he must do. He says, "Alright, this seems a little more fair eh?“ One lunges at him and Altiak dodges his attack the other one comes and gashes him on the side. Altiak pants and says, "Phew is that all you got?" Whilst clutching his side. He blocked another attack from one, and kicks him on the stomach. He weaves away from a the other warrior and pushes him down. They both lay sprawled on the ground, but they were slowly getting back up. Knowing that he couldn't fight any more with his injury, Altiak made a run for it. The warriors stood up but Altiak was too far away to catch.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today? What is your character response? "Do you have any bows or arrows for sale, I am planning to start practicing archery.“ Asks Altiak. The Merchant says, "I am afraid not, I do however have some nice swords for sale.“ Altiak replies, "No thank you sir, I have a sword already. Altiak draws his sword. "A nice one indeed,“ the Merchant remarked. "Yes quite, I crafted it myself.“ Responded Altiak. "Well I must go, I bid you farewell,“ Altiak says. "Good luck on your adventures“ replied the Merchant.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:Altiak spots a hut in the wilds. He approaches it cautiously to make sure noone is near him. He enters the hut and spots a chest. Inside are a few iron bars and a golden sword."I shall leave these items here, because they are not my belongings," Says Altiak. He then leaves the hut and continues on his walk.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?"Ah great a fellow trader, what are you trading sir?“ Says a scrawny looking man. "Oh, actually I am not here for trading, I am lost in the forest and starving as well,“ Replies Altiak. "Oh dear, well let’s get you some food,“ The man says. Altiak thanks the man and gets a loaf of bread. "Well I best be on my way, do you know anyway out of these woods?“ Asks Altiak. "I have a map“ The man replies. The man gives Altiak the map. "Thank you so much for your generosity sir.“ Says Altiak, "Here are some coins.“ Altiak gives the man a few coins that he had in his trousers‘ pocket. The man thanks him in return and Altiak starts navigating his way out of the forest.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:?: Altiak accepts the offer eagerly and draws his sword. "I am ready“ Altiak says. He and a few others set out to kill the bandits. As they make their way through the city, Altiak sees a small homeless child on the streets and felt extremely sorry for him. After exiting the city and walking in the wilds quite some time, they finally found a campfire with tents surrounding it. "These are definitely the bandits“ One of them says. Another says, "Let’s charge!“ Altiak pulls the man down and says, "Are you crazy we need a strategy.“ Someone says, "Alright then, any ideas?“ Altiak says, "I got it. The archers will stay on this cliff and take out the the guards and anyone who tries to escape. The warriors will rush into the campgrounds and kill the rest“ Everyone agrees and the plan goes smoothly. The archers take out all the guards and runners and Altiak and the others take out everyone else. Back home everyone stands in line to get their pay. Once it is Altiak’s turn the man gives him his pay and Altiak thanks him. He then went back into the city and found the small, homeless child he saw when he was leaving the city to kill the bandits. The child looks him into the eyes and Altiak stares into right back into his. Altiak winks and give the child all the money he earned from killing the bandits. The child thanks him a lot and Altiak smiles and walks away.

Anything else you would like to say?: Hopefully I will see you on the server.

[ShadowoKing 86]

You got good understanding about roleplay and seems to roleplay well. Welcome to our server.

Please wait for a GM to implemented you.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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[Danny 2232]

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