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Minecraft Account Name: DracoRailgun

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, the only language I know is English.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like Minecraft a lot, if I am accepted I think I will be spending a lot of time on the server. I don't like sports much, I rarely get out, I love TF2, and I have a steam account. I also try to be nice and fair.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: In all, maybe 72 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I know that when you roleplay, you should try to stay in character, and when you arent talking in character then you ((put these around what you say.)) I have played on a roleplay server, I think I have a decent amount of experience. Roleplaying to me is trying to stay in a different persona and usually making friends and enemies, while ic. When ooc, you can talk like you normally would on a server, as long as it's polite.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Like I said, I have played on an rp server before, and some of my friends helped me out and taught me how to roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: It is using ooc information on an ic role, and usually is like knowing everything about a character without them telling you, and that would interfere with roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: It is forcing another player to do something without them agreeing, and can be used to kill someone when you dont actually have the ability to, or hurting someone who cannot be hit, etc.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: It is playing without roleplaying, you can use this to talk to people out of your role. So if you don't want to talk about what is going on in character, you can go out of character to talk about something else.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: In character is acting out your role, if it is fighting, talking, or moving. Use this to show what your character says or does.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect a nice community, great builds, and I expect to have people following the rules.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on another server called World of Toria, and I left because the rules were to strict for me, there was barely anyone on anymore, and it was not very fun for me.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, and I promise to follow them.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: As I said, I swear I will do my very best.

How did you hear about us?: From a skin creator named SerenityOnix, on their planet minecraft page.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No, I have not.

In-Character:

Character Name: Aaron Farias

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Halfling

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): He was only 12 when he fell out of the wagon. He was forgotten while he explored the wilds, and got used to forest life. He was so small, that when he encountered a group of goblins, they didn't want to eat him. He loved climbing the trees, hunting(even though he was not good at it), and especially farming. He had a nice small cave house. He didn't want to leave this place, but he knew he had to find help or he would go insane. He ventured into the wilds.

He walked for days, hunting and jogging, but rarely found food. He started to think himself an animal, with his ratty clothes and dirty face. He wasn't sure if the town he found would accept him. That is, if he ever found one. He always looked toward the bright side of things, and always perservered. He never gave up on anything he did, and that payed off when he found the town of Dunwood, who accepted him, and he knew he would live there a long time. He was now 14, having survived two years in the wilds.

What are your Character's ambitions?: To find out why his parents left him to die, and also to learn how to use a sword.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): He loves playing with his shortsword, made of a dull iron. He didn't know how to use it, but he would learn.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Aaron is very good at farming.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): file:///C:/Users/Lucas.Seth-Sony/Desktop/2012-07-27_14.32.07.png

Other Information about your Character: His favorite food is watermelons.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? I attempt to help a fellow halfling, but I will probably get beat up too in the process. I then try to make friends with the other halfling, and we become good friends. Watermelons were shared, even though we lost all of our money, we are still very happy. We forget about the incident and be done with it.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "Erm... Sorry sir, I was, uh... just looking. I thought the wares looked fake, as the shine is not quite-" I pause as he looks ate me madly. "Oh, ah... haha. Sorry to, uh, bother you." I then walk away akwardly, everyone looking at me like I am crazy. I am so embarrassed, I sprint home.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I should just leave that where it is. Someone else may need it more than me, and I don't like stealing. On the other hand, I could take the sword... It's dangerous without a weapon. I end up leaving it be, thinking better of myself to not have taken it without permission. I soon come across a wolf, and I get pretty badly wounded since I didn't have a weapon.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Oh. Hello... uh... everyone? I... uh, was just wondering, might you be able to, er, spare some food, water, and directions? I um, am a teeny bit lost, do you mind telling me, eh, where exactly I am? I don't want to maybe... get eaten by wolves...?"

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I walk up with my short sword, and ask if I can help. I join in, and only a minute into the fray I get my arm cut open badly, and end up spending my time in the infirmary. I only got an eighteenth of the reward I was supposed to get, and spend it on lots of melons. I don't care that I didn't get the full reward, because I still have friends to come home to, right?

Anything else you would like to say?: No.

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Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Open Ended Responses Require Elaboration [ ]

-ORQ 1 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 2 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 3 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 4 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 5 is flawed [ ]

--All ORQs are flawed [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

I'm sorry, but your application has been denied. Please fix the following:

Your biography is too short. Please expand it to cover two paragraphs please.

And also, I would advise following the instructions here: http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot Your given screenshot did not work, and an image is required if you so wish to be accepted.

I wish you good luck in your next application!

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If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account! <3

You come to Asulon to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

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