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b]Out-Of-Character out of character or ooc means when you are not rping for example if your ooc in a rp event you are not in the event and no one can see you in rp

Minecraft Account Name: drfate786

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: northern timezone / canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: no i have a horrible grip im not even that good in punctuation. mainly because im autistic i even go in a special needs class because of it so dont judge me on my grammar please

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I play minecraft team fortress, skyrim,terraria, roblox, runescape, and world of warcraft so im a gamer (so be nice to a fellow gamer k :D)

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Atleast 20 hrs a week.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: It means using your imagination to have fun and creating lore whit your imagination to double it.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Not much.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: metagaming can be alot of things in rping such as the following (not copied in wikipedia this time): It can be gaining knowledge from out of character. Or using certain attacks and defenses based on weakness or strength that the player is unaware of. Or creating gunpowder in the darkages (unless he invented it in rp wich is not metagaming as he invents it). It can even be knowledge gained from a dead character you previously played as. In other words its when you rp something that cannot happen or your character does not know about and cannot do.(the act of going ooc in rp)

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: its Initiating a roleplaying scene which the participant loses control of his or her character unwillingly.Aslong as both parties of players agree to this it is not powergaming. And or poweremoting.

example: If a group of players get a player to a corner whit a sword aiming for his throat and kills the player it is not powergaming. As the player is able to do it. If the other player runs away it is not powergaming but it is a awful example of rp.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: Ooc is when you are not rping.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: Ic is when youre rping.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect the admins wont focus the important roles of rp on themselves and make the other chaacters owned by the players look weak and stupid. And all the items for rp (like iron armor and gear) is supplied for rp so we do not have to go get it ourselves and miss out in the rp.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Yes i did i was either banned becuase the owner was a 12 year old who was not mature enough. Or i quit becuase the server was boring.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes i do may i kiss the wife now. (lol jk sounds like i was going to marry the rules)

How did you hear about us?: I was googling to find a good rp server and i found this one.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Yes i did on this forum but it was denied and deleted by now. I also made other apps for other servers but i cannot access them.

In-Character: In character is when you rp.

Character Name: Syreno

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Syreno was born in asulon and went to alstion he was once a elven ambassador untill the day death itself arrived. He was there the night the city fell. And watched thousands die to the undead . And get risen has undead warriors he even said this phrase in pure sarrow when he ran away from the city. : One minute we had it all

Next the kingdom began to fall

i was Away from all that it once was

They all cried for my aid, but I laid there frozen like a coward of pure regret now i know it is better to take a stand whit a bow in my elf hands then to suffer in undeath as they all now did. He fled the city and went on a long journey to find a boat leading to asulon. His first day he comes outside a bandit camp that has been raided by the undead. The corpses in it were freshly eaten by ghouls and barely any food remained he rested there for the night scared and helpless. The next morning he wakes up only to find one of his men got bitten by a zombie and turned into the undead. He killed the man and started following the path to reach the boat to asulon. He finds a village that has been invaded he goes around the village to the village docks. He encounters the undead and is forced to fight untill the boat arrives. He takes out his sword and starts killing countless ghouls whit the other elves and humans. Soon a ghoul called timmy charged and killed 2 of his men and now looked at syreno whit grey blue eyes timmy runs for syrenos leg and scratches it whit his ghoulish fingers syreno screams in pain and the ship arrives. Syreno limps onto the ship whit the other men and escapes he was sadly unable to walk whitout a cane after this incident.He arrives in asulon whit the other survivors and goes to the elf capital to inform the people of what he has witnessed.syreno is a 800 year old elf who was a ambassador before the fall of alstion now he is a healer for the elf kingdom and working his way up to become a druid.

What are your Character's ambitions?: To pass his knowledge. And help all who need it.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Syreno grew up whit a sword. So his favorite tool is a sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? He is skilled in healing and teaching.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/druid-1030133/ i have given you a url to the skin instead as i do not know a crap about screenshots lol

Other Information about your Character:

Not much.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? syreno: good god how dare you harass this halfling how would you like it if i harassed you warriors: what are you going to do old man eh? syreno: simple i could outwit you both warrior: really in that case *warrior attempts to slice syreno *syreno dodges and hits the warriors pressure point freezing the brute*: the next warrior charges at syreno. syreno dodges and the brute falls on a pile of crates the other brute wakes up from the pressure point attack and *syreno takes out a cane whit a sword in it and stabs the brute in the leg* *the next brute wakes up and does a second charge syreno hits his neck and kills the brute* *the other brute then begs for mercy and a wagon comes to pick the brutes up*.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

syreno: yes im looking for seeds do you sell any? well dressed man: yes ofcourse sir syreno: il take 2 seeds then *hands the man 20 copper coins* * the well dressed man gives him the two seeds*

Syreno goes home and plants the seeds. Waiting and sleeping in his small condo the next morning he goes to check the seeds he waters the seeds and goes on a stroll were he sees a adventurer who has been injured on the side of the road he helps the fellow elf up and says

syreno: oh dear god youre terribly injured lets get you to the inn

syreno helps him to the inn and goes to check to see if his herbs were fully grown is herbs were grown and he goes to mend the adventurers wounds whit them the next day the adventurer wakes up and knocks at syreno,s door

adventurer: thank you so much for helping me back there

syreno: it was no hussle sir

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: syreno: hmm very nice i could use these *takes the items* and leaves on his way back he sees a tramp who seems to be starving whit nothing to buy food whit syreno looks at him whit sadness

syreno: here you need these more then me *hands him the treasure

tramp: oh thank you kind sir

syreno says his goodbyes and walks back home to sleep

and the next day he goes to the inn to sit and talk to his fellow elders

elder says: why does our youth never learn that iblees will return

syreno: nonsense iblees died many years ago its the undead that remains a threat to us now

elder says: you are right but there return may never happen

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

syreno: hello i dont suppose you sell any food and maybe a map do you

traders: why ofcourse we do

syreno: really how much for 3 loafs of bread and a map to the elven city

traders: 1 silver coin

syreno: *hands trader 1 silver coin*

tradeR: *hands syreno the bread and the map*

syreno heads out and finds a village he pays the inn a few silver and sleeps the next day he arrives at the village again

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Syreno decides to help them and goes to the bandit camp. he walks into the camp whit his sword cane and a *nearbye bandit attempts to stab him for his loot* *syreno takes out his sword and stabs the man in the throat* the bandit leader gets killed by the guards and the camp was set on fire syreno heals the wounded whit healing herbs and later on syreno gets rewarded whit 4 gold for his help in healing the guards

Anything else you would like to say?: Yes i cant wait to join the server.

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your in-character and out-of-character definitions need to be expanded.
  
• Lore inconsistencies in your biography. The Undead are sealed away in Aegis, which we left over 50 in-character years ago. They are not in Asulon.
  
• You need to include more server lore in your biography. Show us that you are at least a little familiar with the places and major events of our world. You can research the lore on our Wiki here.
  
• You need to expand more on your character's skills and ambitions in your biography. You biography should provide reasoning behind those answers. Why is your character a swordsman who's skilled in healing and teaching when it's not mentioned in your biography?
  
• Your character is rather a "Gary Stu/Mary Sue" character. This generally means they have many skills and strong points, and very few balancing downsides. Click here for more information on what it means and how to fix this.
  
• Powergaming in your Open Response Questions. You cannot instantly knock people out with pressure points, dodge every attack and kill the men with no trouble whatsoever. The same goes for your final question. You cannot just stab someone in the throat, since that is power-emoting.
  
• Villainous activity in your Open Response Questions. Actions like thievery and murder require an accepted villain application to commit. Make sure you read over the villain rules (here) so that you are aware of what you can and cannot do without applying for a villain application.
  
• Your second Open Response Question needs to be redone. You are not supposed to go and create a new scenario, you are supposed to detail your character's actions and thoughts in the situation provided.
  

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

You may reapply in 24 hours from the time of this post.

Why not browse the forums or read up on some helpful guides while you wait?

[Cappy 1599]

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