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Out-Of-Character

Main Minecraft Account Name: Comanderbly ( Charles Mors )

Alternate Minecraft Account Name: amydavey

In your own words, define what the act of Roleplaying is: For me, Roleplaying is when you create a fictitious character and live a second life with it; So you have to act like him/her. For example: In this server you must use proper medieval like speech.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Metagaming is debating and taking decisions based on information that your character would never be able to know about. For example asking someone to send you character their house/town coordinates or speaking with a person you never heard of and calling by their name, just because it says it on the chat.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power-emoting is when your character never wants to lose, the character finds a way to win the fight , which isn’t realist ,in roleplay the character must be able to lose and accept it . for example :

*HT_Bannerman_Charles tries to tackle John while he is distracted.

*John turns his back and sees Charles,then pushes him.

*HT_Bannerman_Charles falls down and lands with his hands

*HT_Bannerman_Charles Stands up and tries to punch John

*John grabs Charles’ fist and twists his arm

*HT_Bannerman_Charles uses his left arm to take John’s hand off his right arm

In-Character:

Character Name: Prydain_Maas

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!): Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Southeron

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Prydain was born in the year 25, In Alras. Her father was Bert Maas, one of the blacksmiths in the city and her mother was a citizen, who ended up falling in love with Bert. Soon they got married, and so Prydain was born. She was always getting into trouble, as she had a little bad behavior: she rarely listened to what people told her to do. Yet, she was a nice little girl, she had some friends around the city and usually spoke with everyone. But one day, when she was 20 years old, her father and her mother developed a disease. When she was 21, both of them died. She got really sad and desperate… So one day, Prydain decides to leave Alras and become a trader and traveler along the lands of Asulon. She was a good merchant, always selling and buying things, making a good profit out of it, actually. But she didn’t want that life… she liked to tell stories and sing songs… So one day, when she’s making a trade in Salvus, she starts speaking with a man, who turned out to be the owner of the Way Stone Inn. By telling the story of her life, and revealing that she would like to sing, he gives her a job as a bard. Two years later, when she’s 24, she has already enough money to move to another town: Arethor.

In Arethor, she gets a job as some sort of amuser. She tells stories, sings songs and talks to people. Yet, she still makes trades: it’s not like she could just forget that phase of her life, she was still a great merchant… And one day, when she was selling some wood, she ends up meeting a competitor: Glenn. As they start saying their own wood is better than the others wood (although they were both selling red wood) the client leaves and Prydain shouts “You made me lose a client you moron!”. Yet, one day, he decides to pay her dinner. Since then, they become great friends. More than friends, actually. But, before they even think about marriage, a tragic accident happens. While Glenn is fishing, he is also wearing armor. Enough said: he drowns. And because the armor is to heavy, he can’t get up… Prydain becomes so sad, she basically gives up on everything… For a year of her life, she becomes a drunk.

But when she’s 28, Prydain decides to stop. She becomes a different person. She no longer tells stories, or even sings… She becomes a professional trader. And every time she got mad she started chopping wood. She never drank again. And so, her life starts changing even more and… she becomes happier. And so Prydain lived the rest of her life with happiness ,as she was nice and caring ,he never had enemies.

What are your Character's ambitions?: To find her cousins ,to be a great merchant

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):http://i1187.photobucket.com/albums/z395/comanderbly/2012-07-25_221346.png

Other Information about your Character:Prydain is Very determinate to complete her objectives ,and has talent with musical instruments, as well great singing abilities and a good mind to invent stories. She also very active in the physic part.

Open-Response-Questions

Answer at least three out of five listed!

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small Halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:

Prydain first tries to get along with them by speaking. She asks questions like “What did he do to you?” “Why are you doing this” and “Don’t you feel bad harassing the weaker?” . But obviously, those two are thieves and she could not expect any good coming from them. And she was right: one of the thieves grabs her arm and threatens to harass her as well. But she is stronger than what he things and kicks him in the “place”. The other warrior lets go of the Halfling and turns to her as well. But they had underestimated the Halfling has well: he grabs a big stick and hits them on the heats. They fall on the floor, unconscious, and the two others leave them there, and run back to the Temple.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?:

- Hail sir. Do you perchance sell ale?

- Ale you say? Well, I did yesterday… But a drunken man appeared here and bought my whole stock! *chuckle* But I do have some wine, if you wish some.

- Umm… Well, I guess I can drink a bottle.

- That will be 10 minas.

*hands over the minas* - Here you go.

*accepts the minas and gives her a bottle of wine* - Thanks for your purchase miss.

*drinks some wine* - Do you have any bread?

- Oh yes! Here you go *hands a loaf of bread*. Today we have a discount. That will be only 3 minas.

-That’s really cheap..! *accepts the bread and gives three coins.* I guess I’ll leave now.

- Farewell and thank you lady! *waves*

*waves and leaves*

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Prydain looks at the items, tented. Yet, as she is a good and respectful citizen, she looks away and keeps going her own way, trying as hard as she can to ignore the items the number of minas she could get from them.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:

- Hail ,I am lost and Hungry ,may I sit down ?

*The man nods and Prydain sits down on a log around the campfire

-Do you have any food I could have?-Asks Prydain

-Yes, We have some bread.

*the man takes out a loaf of bread and hands it to Prydain

*Prydain starts eating the bread fast “Thank you…Very much”

-No problem lady, when will you be leaving?

-I do not know, maybe tomorrow at dawn, I need a map though .

*the man starts looking into his bag that was next to the log and takes out a map of the area “Here , you have the map of the whole area

*the man explains all of the needed information

(AT DAWN)

-Thank you for all your help ,Farewell .

-You’re welcome lady ,Safe travels .

*they both wave at eachother while Prydain walks off.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Prydain ,goes to his home and gathers his armor ,sword and food .Then walks up the road to meet with the Leader of the Party ,the leader accepts his help .

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Powergaming in your Open Response Questions. Simply kicking someone in the groin does not knock them unconcious, nor does whacking them with a stick. In addition, you haven't mentioned any combat skill your character has, and yet s/he volunteers to help fight bandits in the final Open Response Question?
  
• You switch your character's gender in your application. You say in your biography your character is female, but refer to him/her as a male at the end of your biography and in the last Open Response Question.
  
• Some of your Open Response Questions need to be expanded. They are all required to be at least one paragraph, and written in full role-play. Some ways to expand on them would be to explain in more detail what your character does, and also explain why they do it, and "what's going through their head" at the moment. You should also include both detailed actions and dialogue in your answers. You should not include "if"s in your response. You are narrating a scenario, not listing the possible courses of events. Also remember that for an alternate account, you are not required to answer all five.
  
• Your grammar could use a little work. Specifically, you over-use commas
  

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

You may reapply in 24 hours from the time of this post.

Why not browse the forums or read up on some helpful guides while you wait?

[Cappy 1599]

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