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b]Out-Of-Character

Brian Lemus

Minecraft Account Name:

QuickShot0502

How old are you?:

13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Pacific US

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I enjoy sports such as american football and basketball. I see myself as sort of a lazy person.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

5-7 hours a day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying to me means being someone that in reality you either do not have the ability to be or the courage to be.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

If acting as if a broomstick were a sword and fighting with your brother to the death counts then i basically dabble in the roleplaying arts weekly.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is using knowledge that your character would otherwise not know

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-emoting would be to perform an action and not giving the person that the action is happening to a chance to react

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

OOC would be reality

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

IC would be the actual roleplaying

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be both fun and challenging

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I actually have never been on a server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes i have done all of the above.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I promise to abide to all of the above.

How did you hear about us?:

A friend told me about this and I instantly became interested.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No this is my 1st app.

In-Character:

Geshmale

Character Name:

Geshmale

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Geshmale a 254 year-old Elf. About 5'6" with fair skin, pointed ears, and light hair. Born into an order of assassins and thieves. Raised by his father, Meldark, as his mother was killed in a robbery gone wrong. Although he was born into a crime bidding order he was taught proper manners and hygiene. As he went on through the years he was taught many different skills such as, farming, swordsmanship, archery, and building by his father and his uncle Gargamane. He then perfected those skills as he went with his father to rob many different villages. As he went about robbing and pillaging villages he began to notice the aftermath of what he and his father were doing. The destroyed homes and split fathers did not settle with him very well. As the years went by Geshmale decided that a life of crime would not suit him.

As his 254th birthday comes around Geshmale sums up the courage to tell his "family" that he has decided to leave the order. As he finishes his explanation for leaving his father is heartbroken. Meldark however allows his son to leave. His reason for allowing his only son to leave the order that he had built 2 centuries ago was unknown. However Geshmale knew that his father believed in whatever he could do as that was how much his father truly loved him. As everyone in the order finishes their far-wells Geshmale sets a course for the great nation of Malinore to begin a new journey that will lead him down many paths and tests his many skills.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To leave behind a life of crime to become an honest man.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Swordsmanship

and

Mining

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

Strong leader and very loyal

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Thy character shall banish these so-called warriors to the fiery pits of hell

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?Good man what are thou selling here today?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Good men and women may I rest in this great piece of land?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Thy character acts nobly and rejects the fine reward for honor instead

Anything else you would like to say?: OOC: Although my character was born as a thief and an assassin he feels as if he needs to stop all crime in the lands of Asulon.

[ShadowoKing 86]

-Feel Metagaming need a example.

-Bio has no form of link to our lore, add places e.g. can get information from wiki.

-Open response questions, answers you gave are too short. Put more detail, add movements and speeches.

Not bad just remember cannot make a crime requires a VA. Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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