[Denied]Miningking

[miningking 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:<aardbei68>

How old are you?:<16>

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:<Netherlands>

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:<normal the most I can understand>

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:<I am a fan of world of warcraft and lord of the rings>

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:<With holiday long time but if I have school not long>

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:<You are playing a story with your character>

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:<This is my first time I gonna do roleplaying at minecraft>

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:<Meta-Gaming the use out of game information such as the location of a certain player to give a person an in game advantage such as being able to sneak up on said player>

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:<Power-Emoting is when someone uses emotes to perform actions which no one can prevent but can have a large effect on the victims>

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:<OOC is when someone wants to talk as themselves as opposed to their in-game characters>

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:<IC is when someone speaks not as themselves, but as their in game character>

What do you expect this server will be like?:<A nice server were you can very good play roleplay>

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:<I have played on a dutch minecraft server>

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:<yes of course>

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:<I promise>

How did you hear about us?:<I looked at minecraftforum>

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:<No I don't>

In-Character:

Character Name:<Muradin Bronzebeard>

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :<Dwarf>

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):<I don't have a sub-race>

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):<My name is Muradin Bronzebeard I was born in the greath city Tumunzahar and I am 100 years old.

I had a wife and children at Tumunzahar but they dead at the great war when Tumunzahar were been attacked by the undead. It was the worst day of my life the undead came with a huge army and their leader was called Morgoth. We fight a glorious battle at the great entrance of iron we could hold them long because we had an armor of the strongest iron called Mitril.I killed their leader Morgoth with cutting his head. But they were with more en they cilled my wife and children and they captured me and brought me to their prison Utmundo. They hurt me at the pain table much times.But after 10 years of being in prison I found a secret way to get out and when the guards were away I runned for my life to that way and I breaked out. From that moment I was back in asulon but I had nothing left. I am hoping for a new start in my life and get revence at the undead.>

What are your Character's ambitions?:<mining and soldiery>

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):<axe>

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?<blacksmith>

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):<dwarf-legionnaire-2(2).png>

Other Information about your Character:<No other information>

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.<No questions>

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?<He helps that man and if it is necessarilly he kills that warriors>

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?<Hello noble man could I buy someting from you>

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:<He doesn't take it he never go stealing>

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?<Hello would you sell something for a noble Dwarf>

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:<He helps the town guard to kill the bandits>

[ShadowoKing 86]

-Roleplaying definition for roleplaying is wrong, need more depth.

-Bio needs more background information on your character to relate to ambitions and how you got to Asulon. Way is sailing and Undead are gone, try reading more to understand.

-We want a skin link, so your skin link is broken.

-Answers for open response questions need to be longer, add movements and speeches.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[ShadowoKing 86]

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