[Denied]My 5Th And Last App For 3 Month

[Bofauk 19]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

lovetrolls

How old are you?:

13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Arizona, U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[/

Yes for my age

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I’m a good builder at minecraft. I have a good grip on console commands and I don’t use hack clients, and I got a down grader to play on your great server.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

8-16 hours regularly but with school coming back, I might only be able to be on 2-5 hours some times

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Role playing in my own definition is something that deals with a character you're pretending to be as.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

Not much but I played warhamer 40k but I stopped because there was no one to play and the sets cost to much.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

An interaction between characters when one character knows something when they’re not supposes to know in character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Having your character suddenly have abilities that they would not normally have, like a small dwarf slaying 12 enemies that is Power-Emoting.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

Something that you refer to as something that isn't related to the character you play as, it is used to be out of line, text, and to get to know people themselves or to socialize, without involving the role play.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

In Character is something that involves a character you play as, it is their story, not yours, their actions, not yours.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be very fun and I hope to find out.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have mostly played on raid servers but I left them because there are too many hackers/xrayers.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, yes and yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and TeamSpeak set Rules:

I will.

How did you hear about us?:

A lot of the YouTube videos so I decide to try you’re server and it looks great, so I'm applying.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

1st try,

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/63880-dwarf-application/

2nd try,

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/64024-dwarf-application-for-lord-of-the-craft/

3rd try,

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/65605-dwarf-app/page__p__513937__fromsearch__1#entry513937

4th try,

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/65776-my-4th-dwarf-app/

In-Character:

Character Name:

orezy age: 8 seasons aka 56.

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (Note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

I was born in Kal'Urguan the capital of the dwarves a long time ago. My mom died in child birth and my dad spent most of his time in the mines trying to support me but he didn’t make a lot of minas and he couldn’t support me so when I was 12 I got a job working with a black smith I hated the job and I hated the old man, the black smith. I didn’t even get 12 mina for working a 12 hour job. So after my dad died in the mines of Kal'Urguan in a mining accident, I quit my job and I joined the army clan.

In the army I learned how to fight with a sword and shoot a bow. I was real good at shooting a bow. It was no more than a year when I first fought in a battle, my fellow dwarf where killed and I was almost but I got hit in the head and got knocked out and the stupid orcs didn’t know that I was just knocked out so they left me. I wake up after the battle in a daze, but I soon come out of it, so I limp out of the castle. After walking for hours I come to an old abandon shake and I spend the night there, so now I wonder looking to regain my honor.

I am now a wondering bum with a stained shirt, greasy hair, breath that smells of ale, and a long beard that I never cut and a horrible smell from never taking a bath. I wander from town to town helping out my fellow lads and fighting the evil monster of this world. Height 4’9, Weight 130.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

He has no ambition but to wander tell he regains his honor.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

His old bow and his rusty sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

His bow man ship.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Go to http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/571250 then click view uploads then search lotc and you then will see my skin, it should be the first one.

Other Information about your Character:

He will wonder tell he get his glory back or tell he dies.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in R-P

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Your characters respond?

I walk up to the two orcs that are trying to robe to poor halfling, I pull out my sword just to let the orcs know that I mean business, but truly I’m scared of the two orcs because they both have diamond armor and I only have leather so I say to myself if this goes down I need to run, so I look for a way to run. The orc tell me to scram but I respond no u ferker greenskin leave this halfling a lone, and there responses top that was to draw their swords, so I SHOUT for a guard. But no one hears me but for the orcs and the halfling. The orcs respond to the by trying to hit me with their sword but I block it with my sword, and then I run and they run after me buy they can’t catch me because of their armor.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well-dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Yes I say to the merchant, do u have any arrows. In a bored voice he asks me why I need more arrows so I tell him about some of my adventures and some of the monsters I’ve killed. The merchant then tells me some of his stores like that he was in the battle of west Alras and the battle of the sands. We talk for hours until I see the sun setting so I say goodbye and I walk to an inn and spend the night there.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I was walking in the woods for hours then I finally come to an old hut that looks like no one lived in I for years, but tired and hungry I walk in to it. As I walk in can’t see anything but for the fire place so I take my flint and steel out and I light the fire place. As I set down in an old chair but then I see an old chest, I get up a walk up to it and I open in and I see some rusty old iron and an old gold sword. I leave the iron there but I take out the old sword and I set back down. I look at the old sword for hours with the light from the fire place, I finally fall asleep. I wake up hours later and I’m tempted to take the sword but then I realize that I don’t need the sword so I leave the sword and move on to my next adventure.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I come up to a little trading camp, and ask a merchant if I could have some food but he walk away desperate at this time I offer to pay him my last 5 mina I he gives me very little food and it not enough for me so I pass out and wake up in a bed with an old lady standing over me. She finally tells me that she moved me here and I can stay with her for a few days for free. After getting back to health I say think u to her and I keep wandering.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guards have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering rewards for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Support. How does your character act on this information?:

It was midnight when the guard knocked on my door, they tell me that they need help with some bandits and they told me they are paying 500 mina if u help them kill the bandits so I accept, so at 3 am we move out to get the bandits. When we get to the bandit camp. Many of us die in the battle. I was really scarred that I would die because my fellow men where all dyeing all around my but me and guard only make it. The guard pays me my 500 mina and he asks me if I would like to be a guard but I turn him down and I leave the town, and I keep wondering.

Anything else you would like to say?:

I know my app is not the best by a long shot, but I tried my best and I think, wait I know I will be a good R-P, Thank u for your time.

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your power-emoting definition is incorrect.
  
• Lore inconsistencies in your biography. Since you were born in Kal'Urguan in Aegis, your character would remember several major events such as the conclusion of the Undead War and the Escape to Asulon, yet these events play no part in your biography.
  
• I couldn't find your skin.
  
• Still using "1337" speak and "txt tlk" in your application.
  
• Formatting is still not correct.
  

Please use the correct formatting in your next application as it makes the application significantly easier to read. You can do that by finding the application format here, and copying everything inside the white box. Then paste it somewhere, and begin filling in your answers outside the tags, like so:

[b][color="#add8e6"]Minecraft Account Name:[/color][/b] <Your answer here>

Do not change the application format in any way.

Since this is your 5th application, you will be required to wait 3 months before applying again for the server. I wish you the best of luck!

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

You may reapply in 3 months from the time of this post.

[Cappy 1599]

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