Ko'Althran attempt number 2

[nobody 146]

This is my second application, In my first application I was told by Benboboy that in order to increase the quality of my application I had to change some things;

“-You state that he is very strong, yet is somehow very stealthy? Tigrasi are the least stealthy of all the Kha'. It's one or the other I'm afraid.

-We don't accept Kha' that are implemented to live/like apes and avoid all other Kha', that's something that must happen ingame with a vast amount of lore and reasoning behind it.

-If you were born into a normal Kha' family, then you'd be brought up to hate apes. A female ape would be one of the most unappealing things for a Kha'. Not only is it an ape, but it's an ape slave.

-That's a lot of 'Ssss' Kha' aren't snakes. The talk more like this: "Sa'vi Kha', Tiazar issa hungray for fuud...."

MC Username:  

"My MC Username is Fabmor123"  

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):  

"My character is called Ko'Althran"  

Character Skillset:  

"Using strength to his advantage Ko'Althran is a Kha' of strength using his brute force and physical build to his advantage during brawls and battles. (100 Unarmed)"

"Although being extremely powerful with his body, although not being his primary attribute is able to, in very small occasions, hide himself from his enemy, although he still much prefers using his raw strength.. (A decent amount of Stealth ~35)  

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):  

Ko'Althran is a seven foot Kharajyr, he is a male... as you may have guessed and is currently 34 years of age, also known as a Kha'Tigrasi using his strong relatively sharp teeth and claws to advantage in battle, or even when out hunting for food.

Ko'Althran has a blond... almost gold coloured fur which protects him from the worst of the elements along with his sharp pointy ears... well ear, he had one "removed" during a nasty brawl with a fellow Kha’Tigrasi.

Ko'Althran has a healthy build but no really noticeable unique things about him... at least not appearance-wise... although he has his distinctive left ear.

 

Personality:  

"Ko'Althran is a mighty Kharajyr... he is very confident being because if he were to ever pounce onto somebody... dive for a fish or brawl outnumbered... he can always rely on his confidence to back him up... to give him a little bit more of that adrenaline rush or to be able to sink his teeth into an enemy... either way, this forward drive of confidence is one of his strongest points, although it cannot always win battles physically, when using this forward drive, he most definitely always wins mentally, in the form of pride."

"He is also very ambitious, and by that I mean he is always set onto his next task... its his ambition as a Kharajyr to be able to do these tasks without fail and to prove himself to anybody considered higher then him in authority or power."

"Ko'Althran is a very strong willed Kharajyr, many times in his life has he come close to death... has he been tortured and blackmailed and even his and his families life has been put at risk... and this brings me to mention the day he was kidnapped by enemy spies who had ambushed Ko’Althran, who were trying to figure out the location of where the Kharajyr lived, but no matter how much he was beaten and whipped and cut he kept on refusing to give out the location of his Holy Lands, and only just before the point of death, when he had lost nearly all hope, there was a tiny opening and he managed to escape with what little strength he had left, combined with the raw energy of what we call "will", the essence to carry on and to not give up, even if it meant being so close to death... (Where there's a will, there's a way)"

"Everybody has their weaknesses and encounter their odd hiccup... but Ko'Althran has a very costly personality trait... being he is quite short tempered and is also very stubborn which some would say is a negative and others a positive trait, always being the one to wan't to move onto the next step and progress... he never really sits back to take a look at the bigger picture and to embrace the moment, this will be very dangerous around the wrong people, he will be looked down upon by elders and because of this arrogance, he could find himself in some, sticky situations indeed."

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

"Ko'Althran was brought up on the island of where the Kharajyr lived, he trained to hunt, kill and brawl with his father where on the other hand he learnt how to cook and make clothing with his mother. You might have thought of them as being a very conventional Kharajyr family. But his family was no ordinary and had encountered a few humans or ‘apes’ as they call them in the past, helping them behind the backs of the elders. Although Ko’Althran did not know this, his parents never enforced hard hatred towards the ‘apes’, and even though the many other Kharajyr tried embedding it into his brain “WE HATE APES” There was always a bit of doubt in the back of Ko’Althrans’ mind.

Ko'Althran's dad was an elder hunter and would spend his days stalking his prey throughout the vast but dense forests, Ko'Althran was inspired by his father and so took on some of the same traits his father posses, when Ko'Althran turned to the right full respected age, he was introduced into one of the darker sides of the Karnataka forests, where the air was humid and smelt like old rag to Ko'Althran, and in fact this was the day he found out some of the Kharajyr where enslaving humans, he walked down this opening where rain was exposed to them. Although they were Apes, Ko’Althran couldn’t help but question the morales of the way the slaves were treated. It seemed in humane to him. As times passed he would keep going to these labour camps to see bodies being piled up as the deaths started building up. But as Ko’Althran got older, so did his family and friends, his father became too brittle for hunting, and his mother too shaky to sew and so he was their only hope for survival. Ko’Althran had to hunt for his family and earn the bit he could. But Ko’Althran sometimes had to ask his friends for money and food as his raw work would not suffice. Little did Ko’Althran know that his ‘friends’ were actually stealing and had been thieves from a young age...and one day, passing the slave camps, he saw one of his former(You will understand why they are no longer friends) friends being tortured. Ropes tied to all of his limbs, cuts and bruises staining his body and slices of the former tail of his friend.”

"So Ko'Althran spent many days passing this slave area, on some of the days he would chuck him a peace of bread, and on others maybe a few minas, but then one day whilst Ko'Althran walked passed the cage he would have been on the time he passed, he could no longer see him hanging in solitary confinement, he wasn’t there. Suddenly when he would least expect it a guard held Ko’Althran by the shoulder. His friend had sworn by Metzli that Ko’Anthral had been stealing and murdering....all of the things that his ‘friend had been doing. Before Ko’Althran could say anything he had been cuffed and forced into a boat. After going down stairs and stinking corridors he was pushed in, with a bag over his head’ into a dark musty room. He could hear whispers, voices, shuffling but could not find the power in him to move, let alone say a word. After days of travelling Ko’Althran woke up to screams and shouts of Apes, Orcs, Dwarves (even though he did not know of this race yet) and even Kharajyr himself. Something was happening but he had no way of finding out! Once again there was another wave of screams and the boat titled sending Ko’Althran along with a dozen other passengers slamming down onto the left wall. He slowly felt the life getting sucked out of him. He blacked out.”

"He woke up and felt moist, dirty and couldn’t help but notice a nasty smell...that of rotting corpses. But he looked down upon himself and there... there was nothing there... no marks... no blood... nothing, Ko'Althran couldn’t help but smile. But this smile and joy didn’t last long as as soon as he gave a glance to observe what had happened, his heart sunk lower than ever before. It was an image of death. Nothing but death. This was an image no one should ever see. No matter the age. But this incident was definitely one that would have marked the beginning of the rest of his life. He found a raft and took the little provisions there were to go on what he knew would have been a long, if not eternal journey.

"After nearly a year of sailing, with no direction no family, and nearly starving, he woke up by what he thought was heaven. All he could see were tall trees, as far as a human eye could see, although of course he could see further. Even though he hadn’t eaten in a while, seeing such a familiar thing made him giddy inside and he couldn’t help but jump up and climb the vines to the top. But the worst of the worst could have happened, and something that would have dampened his pride if he had remembered. After being so long in a raft, his legs and arms were weaker than usual and he ‘slipped’ and fell off this large tree. Now I know what you are thinking....cats have nine lives....well Kharajyr...they only have one and Ko’Althran nearly ended his right there. He was woken up, no one was there to witness for how long, by an odd Dwarf named Drikk, and since Ko’Althran had never seen this race, he was initially quite surprised as was the case with Drikk. ‘Aye never toght that ‘em tales be true ‘bout ambulant cats, but ‘ey aye guess aye was wrong!’

Drikk approached the relatively young Kharajyr before taking Ko'Althran into shelter away from the harsh elements. Drikk was kind to the Kharajyr and decided to start a home in a small jungle so that the Cat could live like his own, and fed and participated in hunts with him. They soon developed a bond unimaginable. Ko’Althran was nearly 3 times Drikk’s size by the end of everything but Drikk still treated him as if he were a son to him."  

Character's ambitions:

"Ko'Althrans true ambitions are to become a fully fledged hunter, being able to creep up as close as three feet away from a victims ankles although he has basically deemed this impossible due to his extremely large build and has decided to become a physical hunter.

"Ko'Althrans other true ambition is to someday rid Asulon of slavery, and to put his name on the face of these lands... to be recognised and respected just like his father is.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

"Ko'Althran: APE!? What ape doo in Hollay Lands?!"

"Human: Please I beg of you! I am so hungry... so thirsty!"

"Ko'Althran: Are yous'ta a sa'tupid Ape?! Awnser Ko’Anthral’s qoo’estion!" 

"Human: I... I can't think! You furrball! I just need... need some food!"

"Ko'Althran: Ape, did you jussa call Ko’Anthral foorball? You be’st bother soomone else beefor Ko’Anthral get angary."

"Human: Please!! I beg of you!"

"Ko'Althran: *Spins around and aggressively slashes the human on the cheek*"

"Human: *Freezes before slowly turning around and then shooting off like a squirl*"

"Ko'Althran: Dontcha be dissarespectin the Land of the Holy... ape."

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak."Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

"Ko'Althran: *raises his hand as if to impersonate somebody who is holding a glass ball, sharp fingernails then start to raise from the tops of his fingers before running his hand down the tavern curtain."

"Dwarf: Oi! Ye stuupid fur bawl! Ge' out! *The Dwarf comes out with a bucket of water and starts to approach Ko'Althran."

"Ko'Althran: *swipes his hand at the bucket hissing loudly alerting all of the tavern, even over the drunken dwarven rampages going on inside, before managing to split the bottom of the bucket."

"Dwarf: *Watches the water pour onto his feet before backing off repeating the words* "N-N-Nice kitty! nice kitty!"

"Ko'Althran: *Slowly walks out of the tavern running his nails along mahogany tables, knocking over stools and finishing it off by kicking a door down*"

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

"Ko'Althran: You'sa dumb Ko’Kirikenlo, go back to the'sa home and conafess to whatch’a you deed..."

"Friend: But brutha the cayka! Was so tassty!"

"Ko'Althran: Im’s not sorting out'sa problems'a... get'a-out!"  

"Friend: *Exits the building sobbing and punching his leg at the same time*"

"Ko'Althran: Ssstuupid brutha, must learn."

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

"I take an oath on this very day to follow Tlatlanni and to forever uphold his laws, also to solely hold Metztli and all of her actions for forever and forever after."

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

[Wretched 2075]

I've just had a skim read, not officially viewing it yet. But the bio is very similar to last time, if not the same. And this was in fact one of the main reasons of denial.

-We don't accept Kha' that are implemented to live/like apes and avoid all other Kha', that's something that must happen ingame with a vast amount of lore and reasoning behind it.

-If you were born into a normal Kha' family, then you'd be brought up to hate apes. A female ape would be one of the most unappealing things for a Kha'. Not only is it an ape, but it's an ape slave.

You have a lil' while before I view this, in that time feel free to edit your application.

[nobody 146]

I've just had a skim read, not officially viewing it yet. But the bio is very similar to last time, if not the same. And this was in fact one of the main reasons of denial.

You have a lil' while before I view this, in that time feel free to edit your application.

I have hinted at it being a little less of a conventional family, meaning that the hating of Apes would have been less although I can still change it if needed.

[nobody 146]

I have hinted at it being a little less of a conventional family, meaning that the hating of Apes would have been less although I can still change it if needed.

EDITTING NOW

[nobody 146]

And I am done editting!

[Wretched 2075]

Your application has been...

ACCEPTED

Welcome to the Kharajyr.

Put in a modreq for your race change and TP to Xer'Tlaasu, the current Kha' home near the Mori'.

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.