[Denied]minecraft8101219 app

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Minecraft Account Name:minecraft8101219

How old are you?:17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Northwest pacific, America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes. although sometimes my keyboard messes up.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Ive played too many rp servers to count.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:I have.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:A friend of mine.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: #1 and #2 (Click on the numbers, they are links)

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: No. i cant find any free mcforums names, sadly.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Taking different choices that make your character evil or good.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Bad gamership, controlling other characters of others.

In-Character Details

Character Name:William

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:William was born to a mighty king and queen in a Large land, but he was in the woods often hunting and practicing archers with friends. One day William was exploring a cave and found a minecart. he jumped in and it sped away, going underground until he reached the new island discovered. he was dizzy and he walked in the port in his ragged prince robes, and he bought some archer clothes and started his new adventure. His parents are still looking for him to this day.

Extra details: William is 15. he also is a tad tall. i have no other details.

What are your characters ambitions?:To make a name for himself here and go back home possibly.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? William stares at the dwarf and looks at a bow hes selling. its not one a royal archer would use, but it is sturdy and a longbow. he moves his hand around in his pocket and produces 2 gold coins. he hands the dwarf the money and points to the bow. "Ill take the bow sir."

The dwarf stares in happyness at the gold coins, and says to william: "this oughta feed my family for some times. thank you sir." william takes the bow and walks off with a smile under his bandana

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

William stares at the orc and gets angry. after the dwarf he bought from, he has a respect for this. he shout at the orc to stop but the orc ignores him. so william slyly pulls out his bow and an arrow. he slides it back and fires, hitting the orc in the knee bone. while the orc cry's in pain William grabs some rope and ties the orcs hands, and helps the dwarf to get away. the monk still sleeps and William leaves.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

.William stares at the old man and produces a hard yes stick. he had found it but found no use of it, so he gave it to the old man and put the money back in the bag and gives it to the old man, a smile on his face as he walks away while the old man yells thanks.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Expand on the Roleplaying definition.

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition.

Missing the question asking for Power-Emoting definition.

Human characters should have surnames.

You cannot apply as the child of royalty. Your character cannot go on a minecart from a distant land to Asulon, as Asulon is currently the only world on the server and this technology does not exist. Bio needs to be at least two paragraphs and incorporate some server lore, found on the forums and wiki.

Missing the question asking for a skin screenshot.

Powergaming in ORQ, defeating the Orc so easily.

Expand on all ORQs.

Broken formatting. Copy and paste the server application from HERE exactly as it is without changing anything.

There are many spelling, grammar and capitalization errors that need to be fixed.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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