[Denied]Meridan Erik Vanachez.

[Banter 5]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Cody_14

How old are you?:Twelve..

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern Time Zone

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:As far as I'm aware, it's rather nice.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, this is currently about two years and about a month after I've started.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My brother, a guy who frequents LOTC.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:Alright.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is assuming the role of said character. Like saying your a bartender, cleaning dishes, then have a talk with an adventure. That's roleplaying.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:It is using information your character doesn't know. For example; A guy walks around town, asking about The Dark Brotherhood. Or someone he had never met before.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-Emoting, is doing something that is unrealistic, power wise. Like being able to freeze time, or perhaps kill with looking a person in the eyes.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Meridan Erik Vanachez

Character Race:Elves.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:My name, is Meridan Erik Vanachez. I am a single child, wild, reckless, but intelligent. I have just reached what most humans call, 'adulthood.' Otheriwse known as the age of sixteen. I look forward to what the world can offer. The farms were never a place for myself, but everyone has a place in this world, perhaps mine is there?

I come from a realitivly poor family. I don't mind, rather, it somehow inspired me to change this world. I guess I'm just that motivated. Anyways, as a kid, I did anything I could, to get a good book to read. Even if it was military tactics, or history. I did do my farming work, but as you can imagine, I don't exactly enjoy a life like that. But as my mother said, "I did not try so hard to have a son, who would waste his life in the military!" So I stuck to farming, after all, even dreaming of military practice, didn't sit right with me.

Now, to my more... personal details. I guess you could say I am sorta intelligent, even for a farm boy. I guess I'm also a nice strategist, due to the books. I can farm, obviously. As for combat, I've used a bow before, but I don't think I would ever win against even a recruit in combat. I guess another important fact, is I've never even seen a sword, except for in a book. So they're a major shocker in my mind. Why would you charge an enemey, when a bow is so much safer?

One last thing, this one is more about how I am. I am six foot two, about one-hundred-sixty-seven pounds. But here's the part that scares everyone in my family, I don't truly think for myself. I just use knowledge, never emotions. Which generly scares people. For example, I don't care about peace, money, hate, war, winning, losing, famine, death, or anything else. Except for two things. My family and my dream. It was really a dream I had one day. I was feverish, tossing and turning, then I had a dream, the world was still filled with evil, but we were actually trying to be peacefull. Ever since the dream, I have felt one thing that the elves all want, peace. I plan to create that peace for the Elves, heck, even the world.

What are your characters ambitions?:To change the world, in his own way. Small or large. Any way he can, he wants to change the world.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:[[My computer won't load it, I apologise deeply.]]

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:I'ma what ya call Woodland Elf. Don't be fooled by the lighter skin, I stay in alot. I get sick rather easy, so I had to stay in when it came to farming. So I kinda paled a bit over the years. I still have the weak constitution, I think it'll never change. My strength is below average, but not by much.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I quickly evaluate the dwarf. His clothing, his hair, even his height. I then compare it to my already known knowledge about dwarves. From there, I'd start a conversation with him. "Dwarf, perhaps you are in the need of customers? I'd like to purchase some of your wares." I say, not really in the mood to buy something, but hey, I'm changing the world. He'll one day remeber this. Just like everyone will. Of course, I'd buy something cheap. Otherwise, I'd just be wasting my own money.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I slowly evaluate the situtation, taking enough time to check the whole situtation before progressing. Then, I slowly walk up to them, "Perhaps beating up a man who is half your size, who wouldn't put up a fight, would be tiresome, no? Plus, my green skinned friend, beating a dwarf, would bring your heart no where near as much amusement, as beating a monk. Here, I'll even help you with it." I know it might sound cruel to the dwarf, but the dwarf must surely realised I saved his life. Another thing changed. After all, they'll probably get rid of this green skin if he beats a monk up. Of course, this isn't exactly good, but the monk surely won't remeber me.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I smile sly-like. Any man who has that much money, must surely have more. But of course, I also realise that if I take the money, they'd have me arrested eventually. So instead, I say, "Please wait just a moment." I then pull out a hoe that I use for my farming, and try to strangle the head off, which, after some time, it comes off. I then hand the pole to him, then toss the rest. After all is said and done, I'll surely get a reward. Or atleast he'll somehow work into the bigger picture.

[[My skin is attatched at the bottom, I think. Regardless, I apologise for not having it completely on the character, for I'm not exactly sure how to capture a picture of that.]]

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Sixteen is not adulthood for Elves, that's essentially still a child. You may want to make him older. Please add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Try and use THIS GUIDE to get a skin screenshot. If it still does not alternate arrangements can be made.

There are some spelling errors throughout the application that need to be fixed.

All in all, an excellent first attempt. The bio is good and the ORQs are well done, but these minor details need to be addressed.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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