Izo (charles/Sealhorn) 16 Share Posted September 9, 2012 MC Name: Sealhorn Mori Name: Xundra Alean'ndar; private name: Taluit Age (In Mori and Human): Mori: 86, Human: 430 Mother's Name: Teken'ani Alean'ndar Appreance: preview: novaskin.me/xA8vx | apply to minecraft now Xundra possesses slightly above average muscle for a female Mori, having planned to become a warrior until recent events, she bears the normal piercings, tattoos, and eyecolor of her house, her strange attire consists of wrapping herself in white bandage-like strips of spidersilk often with prayers to Nemiisae scrawled on them, further estranging herself with a shaven head beginning to grow back Brief History: Xundra's youth was one of some privilege amongst Mori, born to a noble house and capable mother who taught her well, she spent most of her childhood picking fights and trying to make certain that the young would know her all too well as their superior there were quirks however, possessing the deviant nature of a homosexual in a society that she was aware would require children of her, she had varied engagements across her adolescence, some intentionally short-lived, others cut down by herself or her partner due to power struggle within the relationship or familial distastes for the choice of course for outliers, there are yet more outliers, for Xundra there was Shrianna, a mere commoner who had through capability earned herself a place among the more powerful of the youth, in recurrent conflicts it was Shrianna whom matched Xundra, able to bear the brunt of the deception and underhandedness often played against anyone capable of becoming a challenge an attraction existed in this for Xundra, their relationship flowed from it as a matter of course, meeting in what they believed to be secret for sparing, the two had difficulties understanding the emotions never discussed with them, the many shades of desire other than lust were alien and unfortunately, all too dangerous tired of their tarna's relationship interfering with family goals, they twisted the misunderstood emotions for Shrianna into fear,there was little difficulty in orchestrating Xundra's Uaul'Selu, it wasn't especially hard for Xundra to perform either, she thought of this to herself as she held Shrianna from behind while overlooking the caverns of Menocress, such were the faults of Shrianna's trust, thus were the faults of the balcony overlooking the cavern she fell into the cries she heard of "dhaerow" from Shrianna as she fell were ended with a distant thud below, the face of her object of infatuation so twisted haunted Xundra as she whispered "Valm vlos xuil vlos" and prepared to throw herself after her beloved, interrupted by a voice like a thousand spiders crawling inside her skull humming out "Usstan tesso dos nindol ussta dalharil" halting at once she called out for who was there before hearing in the same voice "Wun dosst juss'a whol ussta Infriet elamshinae; dos ulu zhal tlu thrityh" Xundra shuddered at the voice of Nemiissae, falling to her knees Skin: le up there in appearance personality/notes: not in the new app, but thought it best to add a little detail Xundra believes she hears the voice of Nemiissae, though more likely to be merely mad, ever since her Uaul'Selu she's spent her time almost exclusively in Arach-Tinlith attempting to become closer to Nemiisae, often lashing out aggressively towards those considering themselves "zealots", believing them to be false champions Wuyonyrr is highly mentally unstable, suffering from PTSD and possible schizophrenia, furthermore she has no clarity over her future, unable to bring herself back to the warriors-to-be cliques, being too far along to begin much of a life with the priestesses, and of course the demands of house Alean'ndar, likely it will be decided whichever is stronger, her fear and mental suffering or fear of what will happen if she refuses to move forward Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Praetor 1550 Share Posted September 9, 2012 Please bring your chars age down to between 26-50, and remember you'r just a child when you start RP'ing your char, so most of your bio, while well written shouldn't have happened, since you are not an adult. I'l ask you to change it so you'r younger, and your bio isn't going so far in the future. Here is an age chart. Infancy: 1 - 25 ( 5 - 125 ) Childhood: 26 - 50 years ( 130 - 250 ) Adolescence: 51 - 119 years ( 255 - 595 ) Adulthood: 120 - 199 years ( 600 - 995 ) Middle Age: 200 - 299 years ( 1000 - 1495 ) Old: 300 - 369 years ( 1500 - 1845 ) Venerable: 370+ years ( 1900 - 3000 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Izo (charles/Sealhorn) 16 Author Share Posted September 9, 2012 can certainly work on tweaks, was aiming this one at quite late adolescence perhaps could do one of the normal apps instead of the child one or just make a more plain child type Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Praetor 1550 Share Posted September 9, 2012 can certainly work on tweaks, was aiming this one at quite late adolescence perhaps could do one of the normal apps instead of the child one or just make a more plain child type You may use the old app to make a Mori, but be aware we will then judge you on par with the old apps, and not like we do now. That means much stricter. Good luck. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny 2232 Share Posted December 28, 2012 Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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