[Denied]want to become a warrior

[bij345 0]

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:bij345

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: gmt +1 the netherlands

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes allods

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes nice rules

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:friend

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:if you are a dwarf speak like one

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:how i am in the real life so i be in the game too

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:not only showing but also describe what you do

In-Character Details

Character Name:bij von los noches

Character Race:human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:my name is bij von los noches im 200 years old im wearing bee clothes to be one with the nature im very relax but im always fight and protect my friends as a kid i always was alone i never have know my parents my grandmother has take care of me i also wears a half of a mask becouse of a failed ilusion by leor von hollow

What are your characters ambitions?:with my best friend fight against evil creatures

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:he has the will to fight

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?im prepared to help you we must all live in this world and we are all the same so we must help each other out so where can i help you with

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? he man what is youre problem why are you threatning that dwarf are you silliy ore somthing come leave him be or i will kill you

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:quik pick up the money and tho this in my pocket for protection so nobody else will pick up the minas than i will help up the man and ask him of he is allright if he is i give him back his money i will tear some cloth from my pants to make a new sack for him and i ask him if he needs a new stick so i can help him.

[mmat 7460]

Under review.

[mmat 7460]

- All of your definitions are incorrect.

- Your grammar and spelling needs major work.

- You should expand on the answers of your open response questions.

- Your biography needs to be a lot more detailed and contain some server lore.

Correct these errors and reapply in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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