[Denied]Hyren LightBlade

[shadowwy 0]

Minecraft account name: shadowwy

How old are you: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Finland

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I have been playing in many RolePlay servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I do.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I found in Minecraft forums.

I were looking the perfect RP server.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I think I need to do this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: You can be whoever you want while RolePlaying, example:

you can be a total loser, as straight said, but while RolePlaying you can be literally whatever you want be (not admin atleast..)

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It means that you can't use OOC information while IC, example:

Someone tells in OOC that his walking a road soon. Then you go and make a trap there, It's un-acceptable.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Showing your powers while RPing, example:

Dan walks down the road, an bandit walks across him, but Dan don't know his bandit.

when Bandit is behind Dan, he backstabs him.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Hyren LightBlade

Character Race: Human

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Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Ran from home and became Paladin.

He have light skin and his quite long.

Age: 25

Appearance: Iron armor whole time on and helmet with golden trims, his quite long and he likes to wear Leather boots. He have white tabard red cross on it.

He uses iron or Diamond armor, and his ceremonial armor is from Diamond leggings and rest of gear is gold.

Personality: He have lived by the rules of Paladins so he doesn't know better than be honest and loyal.

Usually his cold but polite as his own ways.

His warm hearted and very friendly to people who he feels as good friends, and His very VERY loyal to friends, espesially for his mentor.

History: He were born In Arethor, in rich merchant family, his parents wanted Hyren to be an scribe of an old wicked man, so Hyren ran away from home to Arethor.

As his travels he met an old paladin, who became his "mentor", and they moved to Alras

When he was around 10, he killed his first enemy in combat, and cause of that, he got the extra name "LightBlade".

Then when he filled 20, His training was done and he was free to leave.

Now he travels and tries to find people who needs help, and goes from city to city trying to make impression on commanders and captains in the army.

of course his looking new friends and places to live when he next time visits.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants to be a Commander in the army and meet the king of Kal'Alras

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Resized to 31% (was 1920 x 1015) - Click image to enlarge

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He sometimes drinks with Dwarves while visiting there, and he likes to be with the druids and just relax.

Hyren were born in South, but his parents and family are from North.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I buy something from him and pay way more than enough, after that I will invite him to drink some beer to tavern, of course I will pay, and buy something more from him.

Whilst being in Arethor I will visit his shop every day and recommend him to everyone I meet.

:You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I will ask politely the Orc to leave, if he refuses I might need to use force on him, maybe even kill if needed.

Afetr that I will check if everyone is okay, and offer them a drink in nearest tavern that we all could forget whole situation.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I stop his fall, offer his bag of minas to him and escort him to nearest town that he could rest. next day I will go to town and find good LumberJack who could make him new and stronger walking stick.

I really wish to get accepted this time cause I have been creating whole application for 5hours now.

PS. Kal'Alras' ships should have cannons *wink*

[Skippy 2466]

Denied!

Reasons why you were denied are below. Please improve!

• Role-Playing definition is wrong.
  
• Power-Gaming definition needs some more explaining.
  
  Remember, you can use the internet to find the definitions - just don't copy them with copy/paste or word-for-word!
  
  
• Please go into detail about your first kill. Who was it? Why were you killing him? What did he do? Was it easy? Etc.
  
  
• You are missing the screenshot of your skin.
  
  
• Your ORQ's should have more detailed actions & dialog.

When you're done fixing these denial reasons, you may submit your new application when twenty-four hours have passed. If you need any assistance, do not hesitate to send me a Private Message.

[Skippy 2466]

Moved to Denied Forum