[Denied]Raylends #2 app

[TylerW 34]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:EpicTylerz

How old are you?:I am 14 about to be 15.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:I'm very fluent with basic english and am in the process in learning advanced grammar to enhance my Roleplay.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, I've Roleplayed for two years on World of Warcraft's top two RP servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I agree.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My friends recommended it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/71103-application-for-raylend/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying to me personally is a way of committing actions that a character of whatever world you are in, would do.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is when you obtain knowledge that your character does not know in-game, but still use it as if your character knew it all along.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is giving your character god-like powers in order to achieve something, for example, killing someone without letting them respond to the action.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Raylend Cross

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Raylend is a Southeron who has dark brown hair and brown eyes. He has two golden piercing on his ears, of which his father said looked good on him. He also has a long scar embedded near his right eye. Raylend is an agile fellow, quick on his feet but cannot use heavy weaponry or armor. He is fond of Bows, Swords and Daggers. Raylend was born into a low-class family in Oren. His father was a expert Thief, he now focuses on how he provides for his family. Raylend being the only child, his father had to teach him in the art of stealth and combat. The only thing that Raylend couldnt get was picking locks. For some reason he did not have the control.

Raylend can be easily evoked to a fight, often causing a battle sooner than necessary. He learned this by the people who mocked his family. It is his way of expressing anger. His father always taught him to use his skills only when needed, and to try to use them for good, not evil. To this day he has lived up to that sentence. Raylend has left his family, in hopes to find fortune in order to bring back. Giving his family what they deserve...

What are your characters ambitions?:To see what Asulon has to offer him and his family.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He's always wanted a dog!

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?Raylend would look at the poor dwarf. He would walk over and have a look at his wares. He sees a necklace thats shows intrest to him, he would give the amount of money needed for the necklace to the dwarf and be on his way. But for a moment he would look back, knowing what the dwarf is going through.. The poverty, the hatred, the critisizing.. he goes back to the dwarf and gives a few more minas to him. Then walks away with a smile on his face.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? As Raylend walks by, he notices the feud that is happening and sees the Orc terrorizing the defenseless dwarf. He rushes over to the scene and gets the Orc in headlock. "I swear. You so much as look or act towards this dwarf in a menacing way again, I will snap your neck. I could right now, but you are pathetic to me. Now, I'm going to release you. When I do, I expect you to just walk away." The Orc would make a slow nod. Raylend released him and watched him scurry away. Then he looked at the dwarf, whose still in shock. Then walks away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Raylend acts surprised as the man falls, he quickly helps him up and puts his arm over his shoulder. He escorts him to a nearby bench and lets him rest. He then gathers the minas off the ground and puts them into a spare pouch he had and gives it to the man. He then goes to a neaby sturdy branch and breaks off a peace that would almost match the cane before. He makes sure the man can walk on it then continues on his way...

[Skippy 2466]

Reasons for denial are below - Please improve these!

• Your second ORQ is god-moddy/power-gamey. Orcs are about ten feet tall, and humans are usually around five feet tall. Therefor, it'd be highly impossible to trap the orc in a headlock.
  

Should you improve the reason(s) of denial, please repost your application after a full twenty-four hours have passed.

If you have any questions or concerns, do not hesitate to send me a Private Message.

Since this was just one mistake, you only have to wait an hour. Make sure this is fixed!

[Skippy 2466]

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